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Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 3

Who is this Drew character. is it James long lost girlfriend, relative, something?  When is Eddiw going to propose?



Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long to respond.  Drew will remain a mystery for a while.  The next chapter has already posted and I think you will like it.   Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: mickey2501 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 3

Drew is Victoria, isn't she? Love the story!!



Author's Response:

I can neither confirm nor deny that Drew is Victoria.

I'm glad you are loving the story.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 3

Sweet chapter! Other than Drew! I can't figure out what's going on with that... other than that she's definitely bad news and I have a sinking feeling that Tommy is headed for heartbreak, but how does Bitt fit in all this? Mmmmm, it's definitely going to be interesting finding out. And Edward asking Charlie's permission was a cute scene! I eat that lovey-dovey stuff up, lol. I'm so excited to see how you decide to have Edward propose! Great job so far!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Drew was giving off the creepy vibes.  There is nothing evil about Bitt.  She and Tommy have been friends since he moved to Forks.  She just wants to see her friend happy and thinks her new friend Drew is perfect for him.

It was so much fun writing Edward asking for Charlie's blessing.  I'm a sappy romantic too.  I think once this is done I might have to write a sickeningly sweet fluffy story.

I hope Edward's proposal will live up to everyone's expectations.

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Twilightlover4ever (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

hmmmm..omg ...great new twist...ong is drew like related to james or worked with him b4 and now out to get tommy or somin....i have a bad feeling and i hope drew isnt a person like james....stupid drew....

love the sequel so far



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the twist.  Drew is quite the mystery right now.  Drew will pop up some more in the next chapter.

I'm so glad you are liking the sequel so far.  Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 3

Squeal.

This was an awesome chapter I hope were not hinting at Drew being Victoria with a dye job.  Crap if you are sigh of relief if your not!

I thought this story was going to go into a lemon I amglad it skimmed over that not that I don't like or don't read them its just this story seems too young to go there hehehe

I really liked the way Edward could manipulate getting them an apartment together hehe Money is a wonderful thing sometimes LOL

Look forward to the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

I love it when you squeal!

I can neither confirm nor deny if Drew is Victoria.

It just didn't feel right getting too lemony in that scene.  Bella and Edward still need to have their intimate times, but they don't all need to be detailed.

I think Edward working his magic on the housing guy was my favorite part of the chapter.  There is nothing better than a smooth Edward working his charm to get his way.

I'm excited about the next chapter.  Hopefully I can get it done before Sunday next week.

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 3

Thank you for the update! Drew is the Victoria of this story I assume?   Looking forward to next chapter :)



Author's Response:

You are welcome.

My standard response for the popular question...I can neither confirm nor deny that Drew is Victoria.  All will be revealed in due time.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 3

DREW=VICTORIA?! 

CRAZY, PSYCHO RED-HEAD!!!! She probably just died her hair and used some contacts so that she wouldn't be recognized. I can't believe it. She even sounds slimy like Victoria. URGH!! 

Poor Tommy. He's going to get his heart broken. Even worse...Drew's going to try and hurt Bella&Edward. 

I'm becoming obsessed with this story...just like I was with My Sacrifice. LOVE LOVE LOVE. 



Author's Response:

I can neither confirm nor deny that Drew=Victoria.  You will have to wait and see.

Tommy is in for a rough ride in this story.

I like it when you become obsessed.  It means my evil plan is working *evil grin*

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 3

I guess we know what happened to Victoria! Evil!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Victoria is evil.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 3

HOLY FUCK!

Drew is really Victoria!

OMG this is gonna be one gut wretching fic at some points huh?



Author's Response:

That is the popular theory of the day.  I'm neither confirming nor denying the truth of it.

Yeah, it will have it's moments.

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 3

Drew scares me. Almost more than James did.



Author's Response:

Yeah, nothing more scary than a psycho woman.  Crazy men don't even compare.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 3

OK...my theory...Drew is actually Victoria in disguise.  She's trying to get to Edward and Bella through Tommy!  Of course this is your story, but that's the vibe I'm getting!



Author's Response:

That is the popular theory of the day.  Stay tuned to see if you are right.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

that was way too long in between updates!  ...i love that you've continued this story more than i can put into a short little review, but ...i can't wait THAT long for edward to propose to bella, hahah.  make me happy, please?



Author's Response:

Sorry about that.  Real life got in the way this past weekend.  I like to update on Saturdays.

I'm so glad are enjoying this story.  I can't wait for Edward to propose either.  I will let you know that it won't be in the next chapter.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 2

oh gosh, i read my sacrifice today and just read the first two chapters of this one...AMAZING!!! keep going!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm working on the next chapter.  I plan on having it finished by the weekend.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: starryeyed68 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 2

just wanted to let you know... "my sacrifice" is one of my favorite stories... and this one promises to be just as good.

can't wait to see what's next!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked "My Sacrifice".  I had a blast writing it.  I hope this one can live up to it.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 2

This chapter started off sooo sweet....Edward dreaming about his mom approving of Bella and then James had to ruin the dream, dang him. I'm super happy that Bella forced Edward to talk to her. And that he's going to talk to a therapist. I was actually thinking through the first part of this that a therapist was exactly what he needed. Honestly, I'm thinking a couple of joint sessions with him and Bella probably wouldn't be a bad thing either. Loved the little guy bonding time we had there in the middle. I'm definitely excited to find out more about Tommy's new girlfriend and to hear Edward's talk with Charlie! Thanks for the super long chapter; loved it!



Author's Response:

I loved his dream with his mom.  I didn't plan on James being there, he just popped in while I was writing.

Bella learned a lot with the whole ordeal with James.  The most importatnt thing is to stand up for what she wants.  Edward saw the benefits of therapy and wants to be the man Bella deserves.  They definitely need a few sessions together.  They have both been through so much seperately and together.

I really missed the guys and figured we all needed a little bit of sweaty guy bonding :)

I think the whole time in Forks is my favorite part of next chapter.  I hope you guys will like it as much as me.

Edward tends to make the chapters lengthy.  I have a feeling there will be a lot in the future.  Thanks so much for the awesome indepth review.

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 2

Good for Edward for seeking help. I have a feeling something's up with Tommy's new girlfriend, though. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

I love an Edward that isn't afraid to ask for help.  I can't wait for everyone to meet Drew next chapter.  I'm working on it now :)  Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 2

Thank you for the update. I really like how Bella demands answers and they end up sharing their problems :)



Author's Response:

I like a Bella that pushes to get what she wants.  I've never seen her as timid.  I'm glad you like her too.  Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 2

Awesome chapter! 

Well laid out!!  I love teh plot line if hes having a bad feeling I worry Victoria is still lurking in the chapter.  Hiding in the paragraphs sneaking around punctuation!

I really love this story I am so glad yuo continued on because its phenomoinal!!!

Post again real soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Vickie is lurking, and I think everyone will be surprised when she pops up.  LOL, I can so see her sneaking around punctuation like she did the prom in the movie.

I plan on updating weekly on the weekends.  Real life interfered this weekend, that is why the update was late. 

Thanks so much for reviewing.  Yours always make me smile.

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 2

No problem hun, glad I could help. I'm glad to see this is going the way I hope it's going *grins*



Author's Response:

I can totally see Emily as a therapist.  I hope you like where I go with everything.  Just keep in mind I have no experience as a mental health professional, so I'm totally winging everything I write.  Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 2

Some more insight into Edward's past. I'm glad he finally told Bella about his dreams. She can help somehow.
I'm also happy that he decided to ask Carlisle for help with sleep. I was worried he might fall asleep on the way to Forks, getting in a car accident, sending both he and Bella to the hospital.
Thanks for the update, I enjoyed the chapter.

Author's Response:

I really feel like Edward has grown so much because of Bella.  Before he would've wallowed and suffered in silence.  I like that she gets to save him like he saved her.  Yeah, I was worried about that drive to Forks too.  Four hours is a pretty nasty drive on little to no sleep.  I couldn't see putting him and Bella through the trauma of a car accident (especially considering Edward's past).

I'm glad you liked the chapter.  Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great chapter - thanks for the update. I feel so bad for Edward, he's already had so much pain. I'm glad he's keeping open communication with Bella and not shutting himself off from her. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  It is heart wrenching writing his past.  He really has no choice but to tell Bella everything since he wants to marry her.  Working on the next chapter.  Thanks so much for reviewing.  You're so good about letting me know what you think about each chapter.

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great job.  Can't wait to meet Tommies girlfriend and to see what the therapist has to tell edward.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I can't wait to finish the next chapter.  I love Tommy, so I get excited anytime I get to write him.

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

I can tell this story is going to be great. I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Edward takes a little more time to write, so I'm hoping to have a new chapter to my beta by Sunday.  No promises though.  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start to the sequel Jenn. I liked learning about Edward's past. I didn't know about his parents, that was interesting, heart breaking to hear/read. No wonder why his love for Bella is so deep and he cares for her so much.
I'm glad you didn't jump ahead, you picked up right where My Sacrifice left off.
In My Sacrifice, Bella had nightmares, now it's Edward who does. Bella's stopped when she told Edward about them and he stayed the night. I think he needs to tell her, she'll have to eventually notice when bags start to form under his eyes.
I hope Bella gets her labtop looked at too. James said he used that to see into her room too.
Great job, I'm biting for the sequel. : )

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Edward really took over that chapter.  I had no intention of going into his past yet, but he insisted.  Too much was left unresolved, so I couldn't see jumping ahead.

I'm not tech savy, but I do know there is a way to hack into someone's webcam.  Unfortunately, most laptops have the webacms built in so you can't just unplug it.  So, with my complete lack of knowlege the best solution I can offer is that she will turn her internet connection off when she is not using it.

I'm so glad you liked this first chapter and I can't wait to finish the next one.  Edward really is interesting to write.  A bit complex, but still very interesting.

Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

I was so excited to see a sequel. Mrs. Edward Cullen?? Yes, please!! Oh, wait...I'm not Bella am I? Damn!



Author's Response:

LOL, I think most of us have felt that way before.  I'm glad you're excited about the sequel.  I loved writing this first chapter and can't wait to finish the next one.

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