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Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Please don't let be Edward & The Cullens keeping an eye on Bella!!
Author's Response: I can't say who is keeping an eye on her, other than that you'll find out soon enough. Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-One
OMG OMG OMG!
1ST OFF LOVE THE LONG CHAPTER - AND ANOTHER CLIFFY -YOUR KILLING ME
2ND - POOR JACOB - I AM VERY TEAM EDWARD - BUT I LIKE THE WAY YOU TELL THE STORY AND I LIKE THIS STRONG BELLA - I HOPE YOU PLAN ON FIXINF EVERYTHING BETWEEN THEM- SHE IS HIS IMPRINT HE KNOW SOMETHING NOT RIGHT!
3RD AND FINALLY - UPDATE SOON - LOVE YA!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your detailed review. :) I'm actually really happy to hear that you're Team Edward, and yet still love my story. Thanks for giving J/B a chance. I really do appreciate it. Of course, Bella needs to be strong in my story, because I needed to make her worthy of Jacob. God knows he deserved better in the actual books. Anyway, thanks again. :)
Reviewer: Mombailey (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter Nineteen
Oh my gosh that was beautiful...
Can I get one of those alarm clocks??? JS...
Brilliant how you handled all the turmoil and I love that Jacob is gonna get his day in this story. He will truly be awesome, but Im wondering how you ended with the question in Bella's mind. Hummmmmm????
Im so fail. Im behind and its killing me! AAAHHHHHH!!!!
I love you! See you next chap. MomB.
Reviewer: precioustandi (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-One
OMG!! Just OMG!!! This is worse than when E left B in the forest, just so much worse. I am hoping really hoping that Jane & Alec came 2 check on Bella without any order from Aro, Caius, or Marcus. Because I am really hoping that B & J get there happy ending. This really makes sense with the title of the fanfic, it truly does come full circle. UGH!! UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. Wow, what a compliment. If you think the scene at the end was more heartwrenching than E leaving B in the forest, then I'm truly honored. Please trust that I want J/B together always. So, I'll do my best to keep that promise. THanks again. :)
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-One
damn.this can't be happening. pleease let Jacob understand.
Author's Response: I know...don't worry...it's always darkest before the dawn. Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-One
Great Chapter! I loved it as usual :) Thank you so much for the quick updates!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'll try to keep the updates on a quick pace from now on. Of course, no promises though. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: Delphius2004 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-One
That was one cruel cliffie! Great writing though.
Author's Response: THank you so much for your review. :)
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-One
Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I knew the shoe was going to have to drop, but OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It always does where these two are concerned, doesn't it? Have no fear...I'll make it all better. Eventually... :)
Reviewer: Lily83 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter Twenty
I loved it!!! This put me in so good mood and I had a good laugh too! You pointed out well in Charlie's speach why this relationship is how it should be and not E/B. *sigh*
It's getting late here, so I'm gonna save the chapter 21 for tomorrow morning! It will make the usually crappy early wake up very very pleasant ;)
Author's Response: Sorry for the late response. I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I really wanted to have Charlie tell Bella his perception of everything to open her eyes a little bit. In the books, she was so closed-minded to everyone else. Anyway, I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for always taking the time to review.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter Sixteen
Jacob was good? Bella was amazing!! Im glad that Lee & Bells are friends now. It's about damn time!!!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter Twenty
Another great chapter, sigh...Too funny. I think they'd be much better off on top of the car instead of inside. ;)
Author's Response: Hmm, on top of the car...definitely a worthy idea. I just don't think the car would survive it.:) Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter Twenty
Awwww that was a great chapter!!!!! I so needed that...it was so funny! I absoultly loved them trying to get it on in his car hahaha...I could so picture that. Great stuff!!! Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I've read so many fics where they get it on in the Rabbit and I couldn't help but wonder, How the hell would that be accomplished? So, I figured I'd go for the humor route. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your review. :)
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter Thirteen
AWWWW...
EDWARD IF FINALLYOUT OF THE PICTURE. WHAT A PRICK! ARROGANT PRICK
Author's Response: Well, he's out of the picture for now. I think we all know that Edward's always going to be a big part of her life. Thanks for taking the time to review. :)
Reviewer: Bethie26 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter Twenty
You had me laughing so hard at the end of this chap! LOL
GREAT story! My fave Bella Jake story(and i've read a ton of them)!!!
I LURVE your Jacob!!! Keep the chappys coming please!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I feel so grateful that you love my story so much. And, I'm glad you got a laugh out of this chapter because things are going to get sad...real soon. :(
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Chapter Twelve
WOW
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter Eleven
WTF...
YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING? WITH BELLA? YAY!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter Ten
THAT WAS THE SWEETEST CHAPTER! YOU ROCK. IT WAS THE NICEST THING...
I LOVED IT... SEEING THE PROGRESSION OF THEIR RELATIONSHIP.. WOW
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter Nine
IT JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER. LOL. I JUST CAN'T PULL MYSELF AWAY
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Chapter Eight
LMAO... iT IS JUST HILARIOUS. I FIND MYSELF GETTING SO EXCITED BY HOW THEY ARE GROWING IN THEIR LOVE. ITS SO CUTE
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Chapter Seven
ahahahahahahaha... Phil just killed it for me. They were having the most perfect of intimate moments and,,,, BAM!... JUST LIKE THAT.. THEY have to cut it short..
My palms were all sweaty and my stomch tensed up. You're a good story-teller
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Chapter Five
WOW!!! I knew Edward had gone back on his promise. He seems to do that alot.
My stomach tensed up and I literally panicked for Bella. I was like, WTF?....
Lots of good writing and full of detail and emotion.
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter Three
mmmm Jacob
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 12:45 AM · On: Chapter Two
Hell of a kiss!!! MMy knees would of gave out. lol
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter Twenty
i love this story. the best ever.please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you sooooooooo much. I'm so glad you like it.:)
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter Twenty
Very, very sweet. I love this chapter. Call me mushy if you must, but a little break from life threatening scenarios is pleasant. I hope Edward will be able to hang with the new treaty. Maybe he will be able to enjoy Bella's happiness. Excited to see what is coming next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your awesome review. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I agree, a little levity never hurt anyone. Of course, the love of the story comes from the drama...so prepare yourself. Something wicked this way comes. ;(
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