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Reviewer: abbalove92 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three

super duper good chapter :) i'm happy he finally looked at the letter! but, i have to say, definitely like bella POV better. NEXT CHAPTER! AND FAST! IT'S KILLING ME!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  Don't worry, the Jacob POV was definitely a one-time only kind of deal.  This really is a Bella story.  I just figured this would be an important chapter as seen through Jacob's eyes.  And the next chapter is on its way shortly.  Thanks again. :)

Reviewer: MTKfanpire (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three

great great great chapter. i loved seeing it from jake's POV. i think its hilarious how Quil knows whats going on with Britney Spears haha maybe Claire's into her. Update soon! this is my favorite fanfic to date! when it goes to the top of my faves cause you updated i get sooo stoked! such great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Your review was wonderful.  As far as Quil's in depth knowledge into crazy pop stars, well, it was in ALL the papers.  You can't blame him for knowing, right? :)  I'm so happy to hear that I'm your favorite fanfic.  THat means so much to me.  I've already submitted the next chapter.  So, you should be able to read something soon.:)

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three

I was hoping it was Jake who grabbed her.I'm glad he knows whats going on now.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I didn't think she needed someone ELSE grabbing her at that point.  Thank you so much for taking the time to review.  I really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: TJB (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three

I loved that you put a Smiths song in this story - I adore them.  The story keeps getting better and better.  Once again thank you for sharing and for updating so quickly.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing.  That song is definitely up there with my all time favorites.  Hearing it again after having read the TWilight series...well, it took on new meaning.  I'm glad you're liking the story.  I should be updating soon. :)

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three

that was awsome - cant wait for more - soon i hope



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I always appreciate it when you review.  The next chapter has already been submitted. :)

Reviewer: Curious (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three

I have a smile on my face. Like you pointed out when the one you love/trust tells you they don't love you, you believe them. Thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm glad you liked the discussion about love/trust...it's definitely something I'm not too sure Edward had a good grasp on.  Anyway, thanks again. :)

Reviewer: LoveJasper (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three

Yeah for Jake!  I am glad you had Jake suck it up and read the letter ...  I would have hated to see him lose his chance because he was stubborn....   great chapter, keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: gtg178y (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three

Oh i'm so glad it was Jacob.  Though now I reallllllllly want to know what happens next.  Thanks so much for updating so fast!



Author's Response:

THank you so much for reviewing.  The next chapter should be up soon. :)

Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three

love it. cant wait to see what happens!



Author's Response:

Thank you sooooo much for the review.  I promise you'll find out soon enough. :)

Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three

He did it? That is fucked up.



Author's Response:

Hmm, I'm not sure if this is positive or negative.  In Jacob's defense, he's not exactly thinking clearly.  I don't think he really understood how frightened Bella was at the end.  Anyway, I'll be updatig soon.  Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

Oh SHIT!!! She's gonna get RAPED MAN!!!!!



Author's Response:

Not quite...stay tuned though. :)

Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

AHHHH OMG you really are trying to kill us all aren't you?!?! Two cliffy's in a row...I really hope this hard body is Jake's and he somehow knows whats going on. Update asap, I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Contrary to popular belief, I am NOT actually trying to kill you. ;)  I'm just trying to keep you interested.  FYI, the next chapter is just waiting to be validated so it should be updated soon.:)  THank you so much for your review.

Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

Oh Shit!  I hope to god its Jacob :)  Please post more!!!



Author's Response:

I cannot say...but the next chapter has already been submitted for validation.  So, you'll get your answer soon.  Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

Aw, man!  Worse cliffie than last time!  So fantabulous!!!  You protray the feelings so well!  It just sucks you right in!  Hurry and update!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your wonderful review.  I've got to say, I like the cliffies.  Sorry for the torture.  But, you'll have your answers soon.

Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

Jacob?



Author's Response:

Maybe?  You'll find out soon enough.  I promise. :)

Reviewer: LOVECARLISLE (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

Just started reading this today. Love it! Looking forward to the next chapter. :) x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm so glad you're liking it.  You'll have the next chapter soon.:)

Reviewer: etoesha (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

Jacob Jacob Jacob oh yes I know it is!  That dirty little Edward with his wondering hands.  Emmet rocks!  I am going to pee my pants in anticipation can you hurry with an update!  ok now time for some love for you, what a wonderful chapter can't wait to see how Edward is going to cover for Bella's frigidness towards him.  Your are doing an amazing job showing Bella's isolation from everyone she loves and trusts.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I know I can be cruel with all the cliffies, but I do appreciate you sticking with me.  Thanks again. :)

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-One

OoooooowW!!! I'm howling along with Jake *sob*! Just when I was thinking 'how nice for B to have some girl time' (loose application of the word girl, I know) all hell breaks loose! *wringing hands* till I can read the next chap! GOOD! <><3



Author's Response:

I know, especially after I lulled you into a false sense of security after the "fun" of the last chapter.  Oh well, life sometimes happens like that.  Obviously minus the constant vampire/werewolf life/death situations.  But, they can't be happy all the time.  Thanks as always for your awesome review. :)

Reviewer: anggt (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

WOW, another great chapter! I really hope it's Jacob, i'm dying to know what's gonna happen. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm so glad you reviewed.  You'll definitely get the answer to the mystery person in the next chapter, which will be updated as soon as it's validated.  Thanks again. :)

Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

omg i hop its jake lol



Author's Response:

I can't say...thanks for your review though.  Just be patient and I promise you'll have your answer soon enough. :)

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:10 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

OMG NOT A CLIFF?!!!

IT WAS GETTING VERY EXCITING. WAS JACOB FOLLOWING HER?



Author's Response:

I know, I know.  But, seriously, you should be used to the cliffhangers by now, no?  I've already submitted the next chapter.  So, as soon as it's validated, you'll get your answers.  Thanks for the review.  :)

Reviewer: Evanescent Wishes (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

Poor Jacob! Poor Bella! Argh, please post the next chapter soon! I have to know what happens!

Brillant job, as usual. :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your wonderful review.  Yes, I feel bad for our two lovebirds as well.  But, let's face it, they're better when they're miserable.  But don't worry, I won't leave Jacob miserable forever.  Thanks again. :)

Reviewer: Lily83 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this story! I was so happy to see a new chapter!! :D Even though this was a very painful chapter too.. Oh how I hope it's Jake in the car!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I appreciate how you always take the time to review every chapter.  Yeah, I know this one was a downer...and the next one isn't all that happy either.  But, trust me when I say that I have Bella/Jacob's best interests at heart.  You'll also get your answer to the mystery attacker in the next chapter.  Can't wait to hear what you think about that one.  Thanks again.  :)

Reviewer: kym (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

This is fabulous... Oh i really want Jacob to come back and for everything to be perfect but at the same time i want Bella and Edward to fall in love again.. i'm so confused lol!



Author's Response:

Hi there.  Thank you so much for your wonderful review.  I'm glad you're torn between the two.  As I'm sure you can tell, I'm definitely pro-Jacob all the way.  But, that doesn't mean that I'm anti-Edward.  I just think that if given a real chance, Jacob would have been the better choice for Bella and that people tend to overlook Edward's many flaws.  Having said that...I'm also trying to make sure that I don't paint Edward into being a crazy ass.  We all know he loves Bella.  So, I totally get your confusion.  I'm just glad you're also rooting for Jacob! :)

Reviewer: twimom_la (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

I just recently joined this forum...having finally read all 4 books these past 3 weeks. This is the first story I started reading on here and I LOVE IT! Your writing is excellent and I love how descriptive you are. I've been pulled into this story from the beginning.

I'm still trying to figure out how to understand when fics are updated, where to find fics and also how to review them. So bear with me.

As for the turn of this story...I'm so sad for Bella & Jacob. This chapter is so heart wrenching...just wondering throughout how Jacob is handling this and seeing how Edward is painfully enjoying it. I totally feel for Bella. And of course, left us with a cliffhanger!

Great job and I'm hoping your updates are frequent!



Author's Response:

THank you so much for your wonderful review.  I am honored to be your first story!  How exciting.  I know I left you with a pretty heart-wrenching chapter.  I'm not going to lie to you...the next chapter is pretty sad too.  But, bear with me and know that I'm Jacob/Bella all the way.  Thank you again for reviewing.  I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.

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