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Reviewer: blusaphyer (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
I like your writing style. So much more than that, I love the route you have taken with Bella, Edward and Jacob. You have managed to fix all of the things I felt were wrong with the original story line. The unhealthy relationship, the obsessiveness, the possessiveness, it all aggravated me while reading the books. You breaking it down in your AU as you did made me actually like the characters better than I did.
You, my dear, rock.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I wrote this story to basically work through my own issues with the story. I'm so glad that you agree with some of the things I've addressed. And, if it made you like the characters even more, then that's even better. Thank you so much for sharing your opinion. I can't tell you how much I appreciate it. Thanks again.
Reviewer: ArwenGinevra (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
Your story is a guilty pleasure, an addiction. It's awesome...
more more more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you think so. The next chapter should be posted soon. :)
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
This has been my fave jake and bella story so far! Plllleeeesssseee update again soon! It is getting soo good. Luv your story!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. That is soooooo great to hear. I've already submitted the next chapter, so it should be posted later today or tomorrow at the latest. Thanks again for taking the time to review. :)
Reviewer: chukulun (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
awesome! i love your writing and your story is so compelling. i can't wait to read more. part of me hopes she will end up with edward (sorry i'm a die hard edward fan), but i am really enjoying reading the jacob/bella saga. well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review. And, I won't even hold it against you that you're Team Edward...we all have our crosses to bear. (I'm sorry, I couldn't resist) Seriously though, I especially appreciate your review knowing that you want B/E to end up together. Thank you for giving J/B a chance. :)
Reviewer: jacobwins (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
good job!!! this is almost exactly what i imagined the books would be like if she chose jacob (TEAM JACOB!!)!! very good job and keep the chapters flowin! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm so glad my little story is meeting up to your expectations. Because, that's exactly how I wrote it. I wrote it as an equally plausible version of what would have happened if Bella would have chosen Jacob instead. Thanks for reading and especially for reviewing. I really appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: cuteblondi22 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
I LOVED this chapter!!! This was amazing...I loved experiencing the pain through Jacob's eyes. It was sooo intense. Wowwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!! You are so talented! I can't WAIT to see what happens next. Just WOW!!
Author's Response: Thank you sooooooo much for your review. I think I'm finally catching up on all my responses. ;) I'm glad you liked the chapter through Jacob's eyes. The story is still just a Bella POV...but, I figured we needed to have at least 1 chapter where we see exactly what he's going through, and not just through Bella's eyes. Thank you so much for all of your wonderful praise. I really do appreciate it.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON, IT'S KILLING ME NOT KNOWING WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!
Author's Response: I'm going to submit the next chapter immediately! :) Thank you so much for your review. :)
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
I'm so glad he read the letter! Thanks for updating so fast :)
Author's Response: I know. Jacob was stubborn about that letter, but you would be too if you were in his place. Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
Fuck! you scared the shit out of me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please let them fix their shit causes i want to kick Eddie Boy in his Junk!!!!! Oh, Jake should kick him in the junk; i'd just break my foot!!!!!
Author's Response: True, and why would you want to break your foot over a vampire when they're soooooo last year? ;) Anyway, sorry I scared you but I really appreciate the review. Thank you so much. :)
Reviewer: kicsirigo (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
This one is touchy:
"if I was her sun, then she was my moon. When she was broken and I was desperate to fix her and win her love, I would fall into dark bouts of depression when she wasn’t around. I had always been a care-free guy before Bella Swan turned my world upside down. When the leech came back, it felt dark all the time. The only light came when she first snuck into La Push to visit me. She was the moon in my darkest night. She always made me feel hopeful. But, like the moon, Bella was always changing and this time she chose the leech that was going to take the moon from my skies forever, leaving me in darkness. I was such an idiot. The sun and the moon never shared the sky at the same time, unless of course there was an eclipse. And we both knew that we didn’t do well with eclipses."
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hoped that it didn't sound cheesy. I'm glad you appreciated it. Thank you for your review. :)
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
This is cruel and unusual punishment. You had better update this, and fast, or irritable grisly bears will be coming to get you!
Author's Response: Ruh-ro! Irritable Grizzly Bears?! I do NOT want that. Sorry for the cruel torture, but I've already submitted the next chapter for validation. Hopefully you won't have to wait too long for the next update. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: kicsirigo (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
Congrats!
This is what makes a story addictive ... (for me at least) Continuous, unpredictable and shocking twists. Well done! Can't wait for the next update.
All the same, could U not torture J too much? Only as long as it is a must ;D
Please....LOL
Author's Response: THank you so much. I'm so glad you're feeling the evil twists and turns I'm trying to incorporate to make the story more interesting. And trust me, I don't like torturing Jacob. Okay, I guess in a sick way I do, but that's only because I know how moving he is when he's sad. Don't worry though...I won't draw out his pain...too long. ;) Thanks again for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: hayles122 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
I enjoyed reading the story from Jacob's point of view. It was horrible thinking that he had believed that Bella didn't love him anymore and the pain that Bella was going through.
Please continue writing and quick cause I love this story, you're doing a fantastic job.
Author's Response: THank you so much for your wonderful review. I really appreciate the positve feedback. I thought this chapter was the perfect opportunity to change things up a bit and see things through Jacob's eyes. Their time apart just wouldn't have been poignant enough if only seen through Bella's. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: Lily83 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
I can't get enough of this story.. I hope this never ends :D Can't wait for the next chapter. This one was amazing, as usual. And the new POV worked perfectly :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. A part of me hopes it never ends too. :) I'm so glad you liked my little foray into Jacob's POV. I'm glad you think I was successful. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
So much pain. WOW. that dream was awesome
Author's Response: I know...but we all like to wallow in our pain sometimes, right? I'm glad you liked the dream. My little way of throwing in a lemon while they're apart. ;) THanks for your review. :)
Reviewer: jake1121 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
Thank you so much for letting it be Jake, and not someone else. I knew he would have to read the letter eventually. And I cant thank you enough for the SPEEDY chapter updates at such a crutcial part of the story. If I had to wait weeks in between these chapter, i think i would have died!!!!!!
Pretty please, can we have another speedy update so we can see their reunion???
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. You're awesome. Of course it was going to be Jake. I don't think I could have handled it being anyone else either. I'm hoping the next few chapters will be speedy updates. After that though, I can't make any promises. Anyway, thanks again for the review. :)
Reviewer: Evanescent Wishes (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
Thank God they're back together! :D I loooove you and your excellent chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I can't tell you how much I appreciate the fact that you took the time to review. I'll be updating soon. :)
Reviewer: etoesha (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
Oh baby It so isn't over it is never over not for any of us please keep it ALIVE oh yes. But what will poor Bella do when she has to go home smelling like stinky DOG oh no!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for your review. I can tell you that I've already submitted my next chapter. So, I'm just waiting for validation at the moment. All I can say is you'll find out the answer to your stinky dog dilemma in the next chapter. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
Poor, poor Jacob. This is so sad! Stupid boys-- duh read the letter maybe it explains a thing or two. Now there's an idea. Wonderful chapter and I'm so, so, so happy it was Jake grabbing her in the end. Yippeeee!
Author's Response: Thank you sooooooooo much for always reviewing. I know, I had to make Jacob fall into the stupid, stubborn boy category to prevent them from getting back together too soon. Then I wouldn't have any drama. We can't have that now can we? Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
I know you would never know, but I'm a smuck and when this posted I slammed down to the bottom to see if I could see if it was Jacob. Talk about squealing and clapping-- I was at work so jumping up and dancing around would draw attention to the fact I was not exactly working. So I'll catch you later after I actually read the chapter. Thanks for the responses on the reviews, you are witty and funny.
Author's Response: That is frickin hilarious!!!!! You just couldn't wait could you? I'm glad you read the responses. Sometimes I feel like I'm wasting my time because no one reads them. But, I feel that if you guys take the time to review, I should at least show my appreciation. Thanks again. You're awesome!
Reviewer: twimom_la (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
OMG...so much to digest in this chapter. Love that you wrote this in Jacob's POV as I was wondering how he was taking all this Bella/Edward BS. So heartwrenching the beginning of this chapter as Jacob is in shock over the loss of Bella. BTW, great song choice. Man, what else...I'm just so emotional after this chapter. I <3 Jacob so reading from his mind just makes me hurt for him. As I was reading, I was saying..."open the letter!". So glad he got to that point after a couple weeks. AND SO GLAD IT WAS HIM IN PORT ANGELES! Now, of course you leave us hangin' on their reunion. I'm sure it will be very emotional. Will Bella still keep her guard up thinking the Volturi are following her? I hope not...can't bear to see Jacob get hurt once again.
Oh...and with Leah...now, did she imprint on this guy she's with? Hmmm...just something that crossed my mind.
Great job! Hoping you don't leave us hangin for too long. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you sooooooooo much for such a great review. I know I keep leaving you hanging in suspense, but I hope it'll be worth it. I'm glad you liked my song choice. That's been a favorite of mine since I was an angst-ridden teen and I thought it fit the story perfectly. I'm glad you stayed with me on the emotional roller coaster. I've already submitted the next chapter so I'm just waiting for validation before I can post it.
In answer to your question, no, Leah did not imprint on Jack. She's just falling in LOVE. It's about damn time too! :)
Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: futuremrslegresley (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
OMG, please post more soon. I was so caught up with this chapter I was crying with Jacob.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm so glad that you connected with Jacob in this chapter. I know it was sad...but things will get better...eventually. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
Awesome chapter!!! I loved hearing Jake's POV on all of this mess. I'm so glad he finally read that letter. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for always taking the time to review. I really appreciate it. I'm glad you liked the change of pace with Jake's POV. It probably won't happen again, so I figured when it did, the chapter would have to be a big one. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: twilightfanatic (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
omg why!
seriously, why why why!
stop the cliff ahngers, cant you see we are in pain!
Author's Response: I'm so, so, so...kind of sorry about that. I know you're in pain. But, come on, you have to admit you kind of like it, right? Well, I already submitted the next chapter. Hopefully you can hold out until then. Thank you so much for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: murasaki86 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three
Great Lyrics. Another cliffy. Which is bad but better than before because at least i know they will get to talk. Now, I am worried about the pack forgiving her. And worried about the volturi. But god I am happy she is away from edward. However, He was being a good friend minus the groping part so I am now scared that she will be more torn now than she ever was.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the song...one of my favorites. I know it's another cliffy, but like you said, at least you know that they're going to talk. I wouldn't worry too much about Edward, at least for now. He really was being a good friend up until the groping part. Of course, if you were in his position, could you really blame him? Oh well...the next chapter should be up in the next few days. THanks for your review. :)
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