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Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Welcome back :)
Such a hot, hot chapter!!!
I would give anything to be Bella right now.
To be able to spend the entire day in bed with Jake would be a dream come true for me, haha
Really looking forward to the next chapter!
How many chapters do you think this is going to be? I don't want this story to end.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I think you'd have to get in line though, because it would be a dream come true for a lot of us to be able to spend the day in bed with Jake. ;)
Honestly, I can't tell you how many chapters are left in this story. I still have ideas, and I'm not sure how many chapters it will take to address them. Just know that it's definitely winding down because I'm anxious to get to the sequel. :)
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I am soooooooooooooooooooooo happy for Leah!!!!!!!!!! Finally someone gives her a happy ending!
Author's Response: Well, someone had to, right? Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I like this side of Bella and Jacob. it's fun to read yur story and find that it is a very well rounded story. it has a bit of everything in it. It's GREAT
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. It's quite a compliment to know that you think my story has a bit of everything. I really appreciate that. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: twifan14 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Such a long and wonderful chapter! Well worth the wait.
First of all, the whole dream scene made me pee my pants laughing! I'm sure I've said it before, but that story line has always irritated the hell out of me and it really is laughable. Second, Leah and Jack! So cute... unless your bella, then it's awkward. :) And finally, the lemons! Perfect!
I also wanted to say that your idea to leave the movie when Bella leaves for Italy sounds PERFECT to me! Too bad my friends aren't on my side. I keep telling them that they'll cry when Edward leaves and I'll be bawling my eyes out when he comes back! They obviously have not read your fan fic, but I'm working on them!
Anyways, this is a huge review! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you found the whole BD dream thing so funny. I thought it was funny when I thought about it, but then I worried that it would come across as mean or catty. BTW, I love how you're "working" on your friends to see things us "wolf" girls see. Poor Jake. Now, I'm thinking that I'll definitely stay through to the end, because then I'll get to see Edward's ass beat by Felix. At least that's something. Thanks again for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: LoveJasper (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Wow! Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it. :) I'm working hard on the next one as we speak. No guarantees, but I hope to submit it soon...
Reviewer: twimom_la (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Love them!!!! They are just too dang cute and I'm so glad they are in a happy place now.
So glad Bella ran to Leah's side to be that friend that she needs but oh so funny how she had to "see" her reconcile with Jack. I'm sure she could now appreciate that she's not part of a pack that has to see these kinds of things all the time in the mind of their fellow pack members.
And I completely enjoyed Jacob & Bella's conversation about his nightmare. So funny how she reacted to his visions...oh the reality of it all...who has a sick twisted mind like that? Frickin' funny! Loved how you incorporated that into your story.
Great job! Hoping you have time to give us another update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. Yeah, B/J are in a happy place right now, and all is right with the world. It's fun to write chapters like that. Then again...I kind of DO enjoy the sad ones too. I guess I'm just a glutton for punishment.
Yeah, I had to let Leah/Jack reconcile. I just thought it would be funny if Bella had to witness it. Serves her right. She and Jake have been getting it on so much, poor Seth is going to need therapy!
I'm also thrilled that you enjoyed the BD dream. Why Jake would settle for a hybrid baby is beyond me! Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
love it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: misscullen112108 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
ENCORE!!!! ENCORE!!!! LOL GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you sooooooo much! I'm so glad you liked it. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. :)
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Amazing as usual! I don't know why more people don't review. I think you have one of the best stories on here! Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I guess people just prefer the Edward/Bella stories. Oh well...you can't convert them all! It's enough to know that I have a select few who are more than generous with their kind words. So, thank you again, so much. :)
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Great chapter, you had me scared for Leah, but thank God she got her happy ending :) Boy you write Jacob HOT! I'm defiantly Team Jacob because of your story. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, I've converted one! Welcome to Team Jacob! And thank you so much for your review. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. :)
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
What a sexy, fun chapter! Loved dominate Jake. That boy is just too hot for words.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Yeah, if only we all could enjoy the hotness that is Jake! (sigh) Anyway, thanks again. :)
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter Nineteen
Damn dude!!! What the hell are you gonna do now Bells?
Reviewer: ArwenGinevra (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Seeing this chapter was like finding the best Christmas present under the tree. Awesome and HAWT! I may have to attack my hubby. :)
Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Well, Merry Christmas! I hope you're husband enjoys his evening.;) Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Lovely, long chapter including so much. I love the eveloping the Steph M. Breaking Dawn scenario into Jake's dream. It does sound so hilarious when you take it out of context. It's so great that Leah and Jack made up. A happy Leah is a good thing. What ever will Bella do about her hickey? Hmm, maybe display it proudly?????
Author's Response: I know if Jake gave me a hickey I would display it proudly! :) I'm so glad you appreciate the long chapters. I can tell you, they're a pain to type up. :( I'm glad you liked my little jab at BD. I just thought it was a funny idea and it helped me get my mind around the chapter and back to writing. Anyway, thanks so much for your review. I always appreciate them. :)
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
WooHOO! Loved this chapter! Everything just worked out so nicely and it made me smile! Can't wait to read the next one, because I know you've got more awesome stuff in store!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. Yep, I do have a few things up my sleeve. I'm kind of back in the whole writing mind-set...so hopefully I'll have a new chapter out soon. Better get back to it. :)
Reviewer: nemesisstar (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
LOVED IT!!! All of your chapters are amazing so I really shouldn't be surprised when I love your latest chapter. Your characterizations are fantastic - I actually like your Bella now. I usually hate Bella in most fanfics. :o) I wondered when you would have them "christen the garage." LOL It only seems fitting, right? Can't wait for your next amazing update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your awesome review. I'm glad you're liking "my" Bella. I really wanted to make her a stronger character, someone I could actually relate to. I'm just glad you think it's working. :)
Reviewer: TJB (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I continue to love this story.
I'll admit when I read "Breaking Dawn" I had the giggle fits through most of it because of its insanity plus the fact she named that kid Renesmee - OMJ! So great play on that book in this chapter.
And I'm so happy for Leah & Jake.
Once again thank you for the wonderful story, the great plot lines, and the amazing character description and development.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. I actually didn't mind BD when I first read it. And then I had a brain transplant and realized what an idiot I had been. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. It really means a lot to me. :)
Reviewer: jake1121 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
i just wanted to let you know that im going through a bit of depression at the moment, but you story always puts a smile on my face that generally lasts the whole day.. thanks for that
Author's Response: :( I'm sorry you're going through something right now. But, I'm glad that my little hobby is making you feel better. Of course, thoughts of Jacob always make me feel better. Thank you so much for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Evanescent Wishes (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Might I be so meek as to suggest less lemons? :P Not that I hate lemons, its just that every chapter is a little too much. But maybe I'm being prude.
I'm happy that everything worked out for Leah! :D She deserves a happily ever after.
Author's Response: I don't mind the suggestion at all. I've actually tried to keep it pretty balanced between lemons and plot development. I just really needed a lemon in this chapter because it had been over a month since I posted on another site. I kind of wanted to give a little gift to my patient readers. But, I am aware that it can get a bit redundent, so thank you. I'm glad you like how I've dealt with Leah. She certainly got the shaft in the actual story. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
very hot chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
"does happy dance in front of computer when sees update!" I starting reading this story last night again because I missed it so much. Now Im so happy because you didn't disappoint and guided us through another great chapter. The lemony freshness is also going to make it hard to sleep now. The only thing is Im just as worried about the volturi as Jacob. Im getting scared. Please dont scare me. couldnt go through another separation. Wonderful writing! Please don't stay away so long again! As always, you rock!
thanks again,
Stephanie
Author's Response: Hi Stephanie,
Thank you so much for your awesome review. I don't know how or if I can reassure you about the Volturi, considering they really are a serious threat to our lovebirds' happiness. All I can offer is that you know whose team I'm on. ;) Thanks again for reviewing. I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.
Erin
Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven
So sexy
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: aussie (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six
oh GROAN ... the waiting, the waiting. Where is chapter 27?? Like everyone else I check every day but alas, still nothing. Sigh ... This is such a great story, I'm desperate to see where it goes. this is officially #1 on my list of favorite B&J stories. Keep the chapters coming Erin ... click, refresh, click, refresh ... sigh ... click, refresh ...
Author's Response: Hi Keryn.
You're too funny. I'll have you know that I'm finishing the next chapter as we speak. I hope to complete it by tomorrow and submit it sometime tomorrow night, (Sunday the 27th). So, give it a couple days for validation, and you should have your next chapter. :) I'm sorry to keep you waiting...but I do appreciate your constant vigilance. ;) I just hope the next chapter lives up to expectations. Thanks for checking in on me. :)
Erin
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six
Yeeehaw!! Well, if I hadn't quit smoking I'd definitely be having a cig right now! Can't wait for the next update *pant pant* <><3
Author's Response: Hi Carmen,
Yeehaw, indeed! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I knew it had to be "fun-packed" because I knew it was going to take a while to write the next chapter. But, you will be getting an update soon. And, I promise to include some "citrusy" fun! Thanks for your review.
Erin
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Five
"To know him was to love him. You didn’t get a choice in the matter." Truer words were never written! I'd gladly be sexy librarian to Nurse Jake any time!! <><3
Author's Response: I'm so glad you agree. And, I think you're going to have to get in line behind the rest of us as far as being the Sexy Librarian to Jacob. ;) Thanks for the review. :)
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