Hm...

Lovely.

Want more!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, and thank you for reviewing.  I really appreciate it. :)

All right my friend I read your update the day it posted. I must have been so busy that I forgot to review. Sometimes I bounce back and forth with FF and Twi so forgive if I'm duplicating. It seems that Bells is quite moody and many gals get moody when they are pregnant. She and Jake would be adorable prego. I have to say this is one of my most favorite, tied for #1 JxB story. You are original and fun taking many different directions and encompassing so many areas. Keep it up, you are a dream!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your awesome review.  Out of curiosity, what is your other favorite J/B story?  I'd like to read it. :)  Anyway, I promise that there will be more B/J interaction in the next 2 chapters.  I just really needed to get some of that Edward stuff out of the way.  I'm glad you liked it. :)  Anyway, back to work on the next chapter.

Erin

Awesome chapter! Again. Because everyone of them is! I love that Edward and Bella can be friends but i'm afraid about what Tanya is gonna do, i hope she doesn't go to the Volturi! I know you won't tell if Bella is pregnant but whether she is or not i'm really excited about Bella and Jacob making up and where you are taking this story. And bravo for the explanation Edward gave about Jacob's behaviour towards Paul, very creative! BTW congrats on your wolpack awards, you deserves everyone of them. I just love your story, one of my favorites on both Twilighted and FF!

Angie

Author's Response:

Hi Angie.

Yeah, I can't say anything about Bella, but the next two chapters will be interesting.  I'm glad you liked Edward's idea about Jacob/Paul.  It made sense to me that his "wolf" instincts would be pretty important there.  Anyway, I'm so glad you're liking the story.  Your reviews mean a lot to me.  Thanks again.

Erin

ahh so good!! why can't you share some of your mad talent with the rest of us?! my prayers for the night: please let bella be preggers. please let edward find someone good for him. please let paul get a life. please let bella and jake get a home together. and...world peace

 

WONDERFUL. YOU ROCK. CRANK OUT ANOTHER ASAP.

p.s. this is abbalove92...just with a different account. i'm the obnoxious one who always comments on your stories and demands a new chapter everyday?! haha

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your absolutely awesome review.  If only I could crank them out as quickly as you'd like.  Trust me, we'd all be happy.  Though, I do have in mind exactly what I want to include in the next chapter.  Now, it's just a matter of putting it down on paper.  I liked getting some insight into your nightly prayers...all good things to ask for. ;)  BTW, I can't say if Bella is preggers or not...but you'll find out either way in the next 2 chapters. Thanks again. :)

Erin

What is your email?

Author's Response:

If you go to the main page for my story and click on my sign in name, it should take you to a "contact" button.  You can send me an email from there, then I'll be able to respond with my own email address. :)

Evil....EEEVIIIILL! "I never did make it to the shower that night." What the hell? Here is a little word your fan's love...Detail! How about stretching that little lack of shower for us? Besides that I loved the E/B conversation. Very awesome. But please don't have Bella shave her head.

Author's Response:

Okay, but if you could express yourself, what would you say?  ;)  I know, I know, I was totally evil to leave the chapter like that.  I had planned to have 2 other main topics of conversation included in this chapter, but the Edward stuff just got so long that I felt I just needed to end it where I did.  Of course, I also don't want to come off as all lemons, no substance either.  But, have no fear.  I will definitely work on some J/B lovin in the future!  Thank you for your candid review.  You made me laugh. :)

Oh, and Bella is NOT going to shave her head.  I think Jacob shaving his head was poignant enough.

I <3 JACOB! So glad he was man enough to apologize to Bella and not continue in his jerk-like ways. Loved his response about her hair. I just wanted to hug him!

I was a little worried there about Edward being back into the mix. Interesting developments with him & Tanya and I'm sure the Denali clan possibly turning into an enemy will make its way into this story.

17 more days until NM!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  I have a personal pet peave with men who think women are only feminine when they have long hair.  Thank God my husband isn't like that.  Anyway, I guess I channelled a little bit of him and put him into Jake to show Bella that it isn't the hair that makes her beautiful.  I'm glad you liked it.  I know you're worried about Edward being in the mix.  Yes, his presence may create drama, but rest assured, Bella's heart belongs to Jacob.  I don't want my story to be one where Bella flip flops between both men, using them both because she can't decide. 

And yeah, can't wait for NM...even if it isn't going to end the way I wish it would. :(

So cute...I like that you're putting real life into this story. I think too much angst and quick moving action and death and pregnancy becomes a little unbelievable. Can you tell I have been testing out the fics on ff.net? They can't even close to compare to this.....awesome stuff! I'm actually starting a fic myself...first one. I would love someone of your talent as a mentor. What do you think?

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm so glad you like the way I've handled some of the events in the story.  I know I'm working in a supernatural world, but that doesn't mean the relationships in it can't be realistic.  That's what I'm striving for.  I think B/E in the books were pure fantasy.  Sure, everything was all fine and dandy, until things got realistic.  They never seemed to cope with reality all that well.  Oh well.

 

Anyway, congrats on starting your own fic.  I'm not sure what it would entail to be your mentor, but I'm honored you asked.  Why don't you email me and we'll talk. :)

Erin

Good Lord I love how you write Jacob in this story. When you update I always re-read the previous chapter to familiarize myself with the story again and your descriptions of Jacob just make me drool! LOL Bella is one lucky fictional character :)

This was a great chapter, I feel bad for Edward, and I hope you introduce the green-eyed girl for him at some point in the story.

I really enjoy your story, thanks for sharing!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your awesome review.  I'm so happy to hear that you think I have Jacob down.  I really want to do his character justice.

As far as Edward's concerned, sure I feel bad for him.  But, since I know he brought it all on himself, I don't feel too bad for him.  You will meet the green-eyed girl, just not until the last chapter.  Of course, there will be a sequel though.  So, she and Edward will be featured in that a lot.

Anyway, thanks again for reviewing. :)

LOVED IT - WELL HOW DID OLD EDDIE & TANYS GO/O IS SHE GOING TO SEEK REVENGE ON BELLA -  I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter so much.  All I can say is that Eddie's actions will definitly have consequences.  What those are, I can't say.  Anyway, thanks again.  Now I'm off to start the next chapter. :)

First off...Great chapter... I am so in love with this story, the fact that it just keeps building and building...I am so sure you have all ur readers on the edge of our seats.. What in the world has Edward gone and done now????? They're already blind to the Volturi...now to deal with the wrath of a scorned lover.. and to thk he didn't even try to listen to Alice. (never bet against Alice)..lol... Jake needs to figure out a way to come to terms with Paul and Rachel...but he also needs to make it known that he is the Alpha hands down... and OMG.... Longer hair? Cranky? Moody?,...hummmmm..... is Bella (prgnt)????? Of course I know there will be no hints but...I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Update soon pls...

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your awesome review.  Yeah, Edward can't seem to catch a break, can he?  What has he gone and done now, indeed!  But, I can understand where he's coming from.  The love of his life doesn't want him, and Alice's "vision" girl is nowhere in sight.  I'd understand his need to find someone.  But, I digress.

Yeah, Jacob does need to assert his whole Alpha maleness.  He can't let Paul walk all over him.  Don't worry...things will get better for our favorite wolf.

And, you're right, I can't comment on Bella.  But, I will say that the next two chapters will be important.

Thanks again for reviewing.  I really appreciate it. :)

Hahahaha... Could Bella be moody cuzz there's a bun in the oven? hmmmmm... Really...

I'm getting more excited. I see we have more action coming our way.. Tanya...

Cant' wait.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked this chapter.  Yep, just when I think things are going to die down, I try to add more drama.  That should just tell you that I love this story as much as you do.  I don't want it to end. :(  Anyway, thank you so much for your review.  I'm hoping to get a lot of work done on the chapter this weekend.  HOpefully I'll have something for you to read soon. :)  Anyway, thanks for reviewing. :)

love it.

Author's Response:

THank you so much!  And, thanks for the review. :)