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Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
I have been enjoying this story for a while now and I thought it couldn't get better but I guess you proved me wrong. It just got a whole lot better!!!!
This is going to be so much fun.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, and for your wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it. I promise that chapter 31 is coming soon! :)
Reviewer: froggyqueen (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
cliffhanger!!!!!! I can't wait long! lol
Author's Response: I promise you won't have to wait too long for the next one. All your questions will be answered. (I hope) ;)
Reviewer: chenry89 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
Eeeeeek! I must say, please update quicker than last time! : ) So awesome! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm so glad you liked this chapter. Don't worry, the next chapter will be updating soon. Just need to finish a few more things and it's all set. Thanks again.
Reviewer: forbiddenapple88 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
Let me start off by saying you're an amazing writer. I've been up for two days reading your story! It's wonderfully addictive. I commend you for tackling such a hard story line. The characters are thoroughly developed and I actually believe Bella's reasons for choosing Jacob.
I love your injections of humor especially with Jacob's dream in Chapter 27. (p.s. I totally agree. BD had an absurd and downright creepy storyline.) I can say that before reading your chapters I was convinced in Edward and Bella's love story, but after reading what Bella's life is with Jacob, I can't see it ending any other way. I'm hooked and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a great review. I really do appreciate it. I'm glad my little story allowed you to see the possibilities of a B/J romance. Because, given the chance, I think they would have been great together. Anyway, I'm so happy you like my sense of humor. I think a little levity is good for most dire situations. Besides, other than Emmett's comic relief, I think laughter was lacking in the Cullen household, unless of course it was at the expense of Bella. Anyway, thanks again. Oh, and the next chapter will be coming soon!
Erin
Reviewer: twilightfanatic (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
omg!!! i am in such a shock! please right as soon as possible! cant wait for the next chaper.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Don't worry...you'll get an update soon. :)
Reviewer: KristinHazzard (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
Arrrrrgh, cliffhanger!!! Great chapter, as always. I hope you update again verrrrrry soon!!
Author's Response: I know, I can't seem to avoid those cliffhangers. But don't worry, you won't have to wait all that long for the next update. I can't wait to hear what you think about it. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
OMG, so worth the wait for this chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
So...pregnant huh? That was a shocker. I'm interested to see where you take this....volturi, Edward, Charlie, did I say Volturi!
Author's Response: I can't really comment on the whole pregnancy thing. But, I can assure you that you will find out definitively in the next chapter. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: gofergirl (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
AHHHHH!!! The cliffhanger is going to be the death of me. Please update soon. Thanks for another great chapter. Can't wait for the next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. Especially, since I was so evil to leave you with that cliffhanger. But, I promise you, you will get another chapter pretty soon. I can't wait to hear what you think about the next one. THanks again. :)
Reviewer: zee97 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
oh please please say that bella is pregnant
Author's Response: Can't say...but I promise you that you will find out in less than a week. :) I hope that helps. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Mkystich (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you soooooooooo much! I can't tell you how much I appreciate that. Especially since this chapter totally kicked my butt. THank you for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: idadele (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
AMAZING! I discovered this site a couple days ago and I have just been engrossed in your story. You have real talent and are able to channel Stephanie Meyer's voice so her character's are true to themselves and what she originally wrote, but you're voice adds a whole other dimension. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to more!!!
Reviewer: twifan14 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
Agh! I literally squeeled when I saw you updated! I have missed this story sooo much and I'm glad to find that it wasn't something awful that prevented you from writing.
I loved this super duper long chapter too. It made up for the months without Jake :) I am dying to find out what happens with the pregnancy issue, and even though jake said it's not good, I think he'll be the first one to get really excited about it if Bella really is pregnant. So yea, I loved this update and pleeeeeeeeeeeease don't make me wait two more months for another one! lol
Author's Response: Thank you for your awesome review. I'm happy to say that I can Guarantee that you won't have to wait 2 months for the next update. In fact, I'm pretty much finished with the next chapter. I guess I was pretty inspired last weekend. Anyway, I plan on submitting my next chapter this weekend. Thank you again! Erin
Reviewer: chukulun (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
awesome chapter, welcome back! I missed this story. I hope you keep up the writing for 2010! yay!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I promise you'll be reading the new chapter very soon. :)
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE GOING TO UPDATE SOON????? PLLLEAAASSSEE!!!! GREAT CHAPTER.. GREAT AWESOME CHAPTER... IT'S BEEN A LONG WAIT BUT SO SO SO WORTH IT.. OKAY THERE ARE SO MANY THINGS I WANT TO TOUCH ON.. FIRST I AM SO GLAD JACOB IS EMBRACING HIS ALPHA STANCE...HE'S DEFINATELY READY... AND I AM GLAD HE HAS PUT PAUL SO IN HIS PLACE... THIS IS LIKE THE BEST JACOB AND BELLA STORY I HAVE EVER READ... YOU ARE FABULOUS!!!! WOW I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT THAT SHE IS PREGNANT... OMG I CAN'T WAIT TO KNOW THE OUTCOME OF THIS PRENANCY TEST..WOW WHY DIDN'T ALICE SEE OR MAYBE SHE DID AND DIDN'T SAY ANYTHING FOR THE SAKE OF EDWARD..WOW HOW IS EDWARD GONNA FEEL ABOUT THIS? AND DANG THE VOLTURI IS STILL COMING BACK... PLEASE DON'T TAKE ANOTHER 2 MONTHS TO UPDATE PLEEEAAASSSEE.... :p
Author's Response: Thank you for your awesome review. I promise you that you will get an update very soon. I just need to finish typing it up and go through the revisions. But, you'll definitely get something to read soon. I promise that most of your questions will be answered in the next chapter. I can't wait to hear your feedback on that one. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
Ahhh, yikes pregnancy. Gee that won't add any drama? Can't wait for more. Soon pleeze?
Author's Response: Well, I can't comment on the "pregnancy" thing. But, I will promise you that the "drama" will definitely be addressed in the next chapter. And, it's coming soon! Can't wait to hear what you think about it. Thanks for reviewing, as always. :)
Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
That's not good? What an idiot. Of course, that's always been my first thought. Twice now, LOL
Glad you're back! :)
Author's Response: I love it! So, you can see why the poor boy would have said that, right? (lol) Anyway, thank you for reviewing. I can promise you that you're going to be getting a new update very soon. Can't wait to hear what you think about it. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: Evanescent Wishes (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
I wonder why they're all so upset. (: I mean, this is cool that they're having a baby!
Whee.
Oh. But I can see a few problems. One of them is called Edward. Ha ha.
Author's Response: Yes, I can see how the whole baby thing would be wonderful...you know if they were adults! ;) But, needless to say, I can't really comment on the whole baby thing. But, I can promise you that all will be addressed in the next chapter, which happens to be coming very soon. I can't wait to hear what you think about it. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: TaraBarracuda (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
Bella. Is. Pregnant.
ahhhhhh! update sooooon!!!
Author's Response: No comment! :) But, you will get an update very soon. I promise. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: jacobwins (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Nine
haha. i noticed its been, well forever since u have updated. thot i would review, and tell u to get a move on! as always, great job! :)
Author's Response: From your lips to my validation beta's ears. I actually, FINALLY, submitted chapter 30 to my validation beta on Sunday...and it still hasn't been posted. My hands are tied on this one. Cross your fingers that it'll be done soon. FYI, I also just finished chapter 31. So, in another week, I'll be ready to post that one too. So, after a really long absence, it looks like you'll have 2 chapters to look forward to relatively soon. Thank you, btw, for taking the time to review. I really do appreciate it.
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Nine
update soon. This is one of the best stories I'v erer read. This is the way new moon should have gone :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. It really means a lot to me. I actually submitted the next chapter Sunday night! I'm just waiting for it to be validated and posted. I hope it doesn't take too much longer. Anyway, I can't wait to hear what you think about the next one. Thanks again. Erin
Reviewer: chenry89 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I just spent 6 hours reading your entire story thus far. Now, whether this is terribly lame, or not, I enjoyed every bit of it!!
Cant wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. Wow, I can't believe you read it all so quickly. Your eyes must be tired. I can tell you, that you're in luck. The next chapter has already been submitted, so as soon as it's validated, you'll be getting a new chapter! :) Anyway, thanks again. I really appreciate it. Erin
Reviewer: kicsirigo (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I 've no idea what could have happened with U! Hope its temporary!
I couldn't visit the site for a long time and hoped I will find plenty of updates... but there's not one single bit....
I am a bit sad, 'cause CFC is my favourite here....
Happy New Year!
Author's Response: Happy New Year to you too! Sorry I've been MIA. But, I will tell you, that I've already submitted the next chapter and am just waiting for it to be validated. So, hopefully, you'll get a new chapter in the next day or so. Again, sorry for the delay, but I'm really proud of this chapter and I can't wait to hear from you once you read it. Thanks for checking in.
Erin
Reviewer: dc77 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Please, please, please, please, please write more. Pretty please with a cherry on top ! please !
Author's Response: Well...since you asked so nicely...I actually have finally finished the 1st draft of the next chapter. It's already in my beta's hands. I'm sure I'll have some more revisions to make when I get it back, but I'm confident I'll be able to submit my next chapter tonight. So, hopefully you'll enjoy it and I'll hear from you again, soon. :)
Thanks for keeping me in mind. Erin :)
Reviewer: Zohinette (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Really really great story!
I'm speechless. Can't wait to read the next chapters and how you will figure out with the Volturi.
Thank you for sharing your talended writting.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I can't wait to hear what you think about the next chapter...Coming Soon! :)
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