You really understand the character's personalities. Love this!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the wonderful compliment.  I can't wait to hear your thoughts on future chapters. :)  Erin

MAGNUM! LOL...Renee is a crack up. Gotta love a mom who is in tune with her child. I'm glad Bella has her to talk to about things even though it may be uncomfortable.

Oh the pregnancy scare...been there done that and I totally felt their fears when reading this chapter. You can go through all types of emotions when thinking that you could be a parent in charge of a child and then to the moment when you realize you aren't having a baby and can rejoice or sometimes be disappointed. And of course, she starts her period after all of that. I tell ya, stress can do that to a woman and keep her from starting so I love how realistic you've put this whole situation out on paper.

Sue & Charlie... <3 ...glad they are happy and hoping for good things for them in the future.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked this chapter.  I know it was all about a serious subject, but I can't help but want to add a little fun in.  And, Renee and Paul are just so fun to write.  I thought it was important for Bella to have her mother around for something like that.  It irks me to no end that SM says  that Renee/Bella are best friends, when Bella is so willing to discard her in BD.  Anyway, I'm glad you liked how the chapter played out.  And yes, Sue/Charlie will have their day.  But, I think it's more realistic for them to wait until her husband's body is actually cold before moving forward. ;)  Thank you for reviewing.  I really do appreciate it. :)

Erin

I love it. You made me cry when Leah told her story. You are so great at this;)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  And, thank you for reviewing.  I really do appreciate it.  That Leah scene was really important to me.  I'm glad you found it so moving. :)  Erin

AWESOME! I can not wait to know what happens next. Keep up the good work. By the way your not too old for this... Your perfect for it.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  Yeah, the moment I decided I was going to write fanfiction, I came up with that login name.  I think it's very appropriate. ;)  Anyway, I'm glad you liked this chapter.  I hope to update soon.  :)  Erin

WONDERFUL!!! Definitely worth waiting!! That's all I'm gonna say now because I'm too eager to go and read the next chapter! :D

Author's Response:

No worries!  I'm just so glad you liked it and have stuck with me despite the unplanned 2 month hiatus. :)

Oh come on now, walking in on Charlie and Sue would have been the perfect ending to a rollorcoaster day!  Hehe.   Well now that I am finally through, I CANT WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE!  Thanks so much writing, reading your story has been so awesome and enjoyable the last few days!!! :)

Author's Response:

Well, I figured you'd probably get annoyed with me if I sent a response to each of your reviews...so I thought I'd just send you this one.  I want to say THANK YOU so much for reviewing each and every chapter as thoroughly as you did.  I know it's a pain, but I have to tell you that it is MUCH appreciated by me.  So, thank you.  So, now that you're all caught up, unfortunately you have to wait for my next updates.  I have to warn you, sometimes I slack off and you'll have to wait weeks/months for an update, and sometimes I get really inspired and post another one within a week or two.  You just never know with me.  But, I will tell you that I have every intention of finishing this story.  I even have a sequel planned.  So, I just wanted to let you know that even if you have to wait, you will get an update.  I wouldn't leave you hanging like that.  Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed reading the whole story, because I've enjoyed all of your comments.  As I said, I didn't want to reply to all of your reviews and bore you, but if you wanted to discuss something you left in another review, feel free to check out my profile and email me.  Anyway, thanks again.

Erin

OH SH*T!!!!!!  Well at least it won't be all creepo Rennese style!  Sheesh, your fic is playing havoc with my blood pressure!  And I have to go to bed soon!  Meh!  Thank you sooo much for writing!

Awe that was a plesant chapter! I don't think I ever commented, but I loved how you thru SM version of the wedding/Rennesme/imprinting crap into jake's dream.  It was very ironic and awesome btw!  I do hope you don't respond to all of my reviews I would feel terrible (even tho a response is very nice).  Your writing talent would be better spent witing other things :p Thanks for writing!

hey, this is only a short review but i just had to let you know....

its taken me 2 days toall the chapter you have written.....ive been late for work twice....stayed up all night twice....been locked in my room with my laptop and my flatmates think im hiding something from them!

truly an amazing story, everything i would have imagined from jake and bella!!

thank you lol!!

 

nic xx

Author's Response:

Hi Nic,

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm sorry I made you late for work, but I'm sooooooooo glad you had a chance to read the whole story.  I love getting so much support from fellow Jacob lovers, so thanks for that.  I look forward to hearing from you on future reviews.

Erin

Awesome choice!  Jake will love that!  And I LOVE seeing Leah, happy she deserves it!!

Oh thank GOD!  I can go back and re-read those last few chapters now!  :) Sorry about that!

Thanks for writing!  I hope you do know, I love ya!

Oh NO!!! I knew the whole charade would be a HORRIBLE idea!!!! Meh, I am so upset!  Poor Jake, grrr... Meh