I can't imaging how much time and effort it takes to turn out quality!! I just started writing and haven't finished the first ch. With life and everything else it's hard. On top of that you have an amazing story. Thanks for sharing!!!

I cant wait to see what happens next. Update ASAP!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm glad you liked this chapter.  It was a lot of fun to write.  I've already started working on the next chapter.  So, hopefully you won't have to wait too long for the next update.  Thanks again.

Erin

It feel that sometimes, Bella forgets that Jacob imprinted on her. Even if he wanted to, he couldn't cheat on her because of this. Bella overthinks things too much! How she acts when she decides to take matters into her hands is much better than when she mops around and fears that Jacob is going to break up with her! I just hope that now, they'll get to talk and that everything will be better between them!

By the way, awesome banner ;)

Author's Response:

Ding, ding, ding, ding, ding!!!!!!!!!  Congratulations.  You're my 1000th review!!!!!!!!!!  Yay!!!!!!!!!!  That's so exciting.  This is such an Edward-centric site, that I never dreamed my story would get any reviews, let alone 1000.  So, thanks for that.

You're right, Bella does think too much.  And, she's usually thinking the wrong thing.  I can definitely promise that J/B will talk in the next chapter.  Of course, there will be more than just "talking."

Oh, so you like the banner?  You should check out the chick who made it.  She's pretty awesome too. ;)

 

OK, and you did this to us why?

More, damn it!

Author's Response:

Because I'm mean.  But, I promise I'll be much nicer in the next chapter. :)  Thanks for reviewing.

Erin

The happiness I felt when I saw you updated made me realize that this is (by far) my favorite story. :D I am borderline Team Switzerland (because most of these stories are Team Edward)... and I love Edward, I do... but your story TOTALLY renews my whole love for Jacob! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm honored to be on anyone's favorite list.  My preference is to be "Favorite Person of All Time," but I'll take writer of your favorite story anyday. ;)  I'm so glad that this story brings up warm fuzzy feelings for Jake.  THe poor kid could use all the lovin he can get.  Thank you so much for reviewing.

Erin

Let's say "holy shit!" myself!

héhé nice job, can't wait for next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Hopefully you won't have to wait too long to see what happens next.  I've already started writing the next chapter.  It's still going to take a while, because my chapters take time.  But, I have a good feeling about this one.  Thanks again.

Erin

What a wonderfully LONG chapter!   Yea!  Happy happy joy joy!!!! Loved every word of it!  I miss you sooooooo much!  I cant remember when I started reading this story, but I get so giddy each time it updates.  Im that invested!  Loved seeing Bella's assertiveness, glad that Jacob is coming back around,  the cullen visit was hilarious and the cliffie was torture!  Arrrrggghhh!!  But I will wait with great anticipation of what we know is gonna happen next!  Yea!!

Hugs, Stephanie

*I have voted for each of what you mentioned above.  Just waiting for second round.  We can vote again, right?  Is it all the same again like first round?  I'll do my part!  HTSAW by leelator is great and the Jacob and Bella Chronicles cannot be beat!!! Read and love each story in it!  Hope you win!  You deserve it!  This story is so amazingly good; it's bound to win for sure!!!!! Squeezes!!!

Author's Response:

Hi Stephanie!

First of all, thank you for always leaving such wonderful reviews for me.  I love reading them.  And, thank you for voting for us.  As far as I'm concerned, you can only vote once each round.  Assuming we've made it to the next round, it should be perfectly fine for you to vote again.

I'm so glad you liked this chapter.  It really was a lot of fun to write.  And, hell, the rewriting of it was even better.  You should've seen the first draft!  Sorry to have tortured you with that ending.  In all honesty, the lemon was supposed to happen in this chapter...but things just got carried away and it just wouldn't have fit.  Unless of course I wrote a super-sized chapter...but that would've taken forever to write/rewrite, etc.  So, sadly, no "sex" for us until the next chapter.  But I promise it will happen.  And, hopefully we'll all be satisfied with it. ;)

Thanks again and HUGS right back!

Erin

Ahhhh Bella found her voice!!! Good for her. I'm so so so glad they are working things out. I can't wait for more!! Which it is btw totally worth the wait!!! Thanks!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and for being so understanding that it takes me time to get these chapters out to you.  I really do appreciate it.  Yeah, Bella found her voice.  And trust me when I say, Jacob isn't totally off the hook yet.  He has a lot of explaining to do.  Anyway, thanks again.

Erin

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your new banners, they are awesome! Go Team Jacob!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Does this mean a new chapter is not to far away? 

Author's Response:

Yay!  I'm so glad you like them!  Yep, the next chapter has already been submitted, so it's just a matter of time before it's posted.  Can't wait to hear what you think about it.  Talk to you later.

Erin

I am so sorry it's taken me so long to review, I've had so much going on the past month, it's been crazy.

As always, what a great chapter, and here you were worried about not doing Jacob's POV justice, well let me tell you, you just blew it out off the water, it was fantastic. I knew there had to be a perfectly good explanation for why Jacob was acting the way he was, I just hope now that he and Bella are back on track now. 

How Funny are Quil and Embry, they just tell it like it is, everyone needs friends like that, they crack me up.

I would love to help you with your banner but I like to refer to myself as a technological retard, I have no idea when it come to anything computerised, I'm surprised i found this site. I know you have a large following of devoted fans who also think you are amazing, who are able to help you with your banner, Gook luck! I'll be keeping my eye out for your new banner and not to mention your new chapter. HINT, HINT!

Author's Response:

Hi Louise!

Thank you so much for your wonderful review.  No need to apologize...you've got a busy life.  I'm just glad you enjoyed the chapter.

I do have some great fans out there who offered to make me banners.  So, thanks for the offer.  And guess what?  I should be posting the new chapter tonight so soon you'll be able to see at least 2 new banners.  I'm really excited about them.  I'll email you later, but I just wanted to say thanks again for the review.

Erin

Even though it was nice to read, I'm glad they didn't have sex.  Could be just me, but I want Bella to punish Jacob a little for what he did, cause she was super patient with him.  Or at least a wait for an explanation and good apology before the make up sex.  Anyway, love the story.  Can't wait for an update :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  You're not alone with that...I fully agree that Bella should punish Jake and make him suffer.  Something tells me that she doesn't have the stomach for it though.  And...it has been a while for her too. ;)  But, don't worry...they're definitely going to talk...and soon.  I'm just glad you liked the change in perspective.  I definitely think I'll be writing more JPOV chapters in the future.

Erin

Edward is a prick.  Did I mention that, already?  I'm pretty sure that I did.  ;-)

Another great chapter.  I love that I'm still not all caught up.  More Bella/Jake goodness for me!  This story continues to impress.  :-D 

Author's Response:

Hi there.  Sorry it's taken me so long to respond, but I wanted to thank you for all your reviews.  So, yeah, Edward was a real prick in this chapter.  Though, I'm not trying to make him a villain.  But, I thought it was important to see this side of him.  He's NOT perfect.  Though, I guess we all know that since we're reading J/B fanfic.  Thanks again.

Erin

OMG! This one of the best fanfiction i've ever read. I've read all the chapters. I wanted to wait till i had read all the chapters to review and i got to say that im glad i did. I've read other storys where jacob gets bella and that the end of it. Theres no aftermath. You don't get see edward's true feelings. I also like the fact that you see jacob, bella, and edward in a whole new light. The fact that you see edward is not perfect and not really the you think he is. I think thats really important to the story. I also got to say that i love the way that you described the intimate scenes between jacob and bella. Other people would have found it "racy" but I thought it was really well written. It wasn't like you just said that they had sex and that was it. You gave an insight to the passion that they shared for each other. You should that every time they were together it wasn't just sex, they were making love. I also like the fact that it's not just the guy that wants sex, because whether people like it or not girls just want it just as badly but are much better at hiding it. I've read in too many storys where the guys are always blamed. The peoplle in the story believe that its always the guys fault cuz the last time i checked you needed 2 people to get pregnant. Since this is already an extremly long review im goin to start cutting it short and get to the point. Bravo! I hope you continue writing. I will soon start my own story where jacob gets the girl but its not bella. How is that possible you say well you'll just have to read it to find out. When i finaly get time out of my busy schedule to start writing i definnitly will. I hope you continue this story because it truly is good writing.

P.S im probably sure i spelled definnitly wrong. ( my bad)

P.S.S If you want to find my story you'll find it under post-eclipse, AU, and Breaking dawn.

P.S.S.S Give me about a month before you staring looking for my story

Love the the story R1R1H2

Author's Response:

Thank you sooooooooooooo much for your awesome review.  I really do appreciate all the compliments.  I'm glad you like where I've taken the story.  It definitely wasn't enough for me to let Jake get the girl.  It had to be about more than that.  I wanted to show E/B shippers how wonderful their life would have been together had Bella made a different choice.  I don't think I'm too off-book with Jacob.  I think he's pretty much the same guy he was in the books.  But, I definitely set out to make Bella a stronger character.  One who actually deserved Jacob.  Anyway, thanks again.  I'm definitely going to continue writing. I already have a sequel planned w/plenty of ideas for it.  And, I've already started the next chapter of this story and I have high hopes that I'll be able to update a lot sooner than normal.

Erin