Wow... quite and interesting chapter.  you have a great way with words...the intimate moment are discribtive but not overly`(perfectlt written really).

Poor Seth...don't think that's going to help his crush on Bella to much... too funny!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I wanted to add some sex to the story w/out it coming off as crass.  I'm glad you think I've done a good job with that.  Oh and yeah, poor Seth. ;)

That was a pretty great chapter!  I love this assertive side of Bella that has erupted.

Author's Response:

Thanks again.  Assertive Bella is a lot more interesting and more fun to write.  I think fanfiction would be pretty boring if Bella was the same as she was in the books.

Holly crap!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I had visions of this chapter long before I even started writing this story.  I knew I just needed to have that scene in my story.

NICE!

Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Love the story!! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.  I'm going to be posting a new chapter soon.  So, I can't wait to hear from you on that one.  Thanks again.

Edward said that a little evily!  Great dialog and clearness for Bella.  To bad SM  Bella's was such a poor role model for the essence of a strong independant woman.  You did a great job showing a reflective and grown up Bella.  Good Job!

Author's Response:

Thank you for this review.  I wrote this story to make Bella a better, stronger person.  I couldn't stand how weak and pathetic she was in the books.  Frankly, she didn't deserve Jacob.  I wanted to "re-make" her so to speak to make her worthy of Jacob.  Anyway, thanks again.

Great Chapter!  I sure hope Edwards isn't sneaking in at night???

Author's Response:

Thanks again.  I guess Edward was pretty obvious, huh?

Wow, that was great and heartbreaking at the same time.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked this chapter.  I really enjoyed writing this one.  As much as I love him, Jacob's pain is so fun to write. ;)

What a fabulous chapter, def my fav so far! :) this is really is an amazing story, great job. Please update soon

 

 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter so much.  It was a lot of fun to write.  Here's some inside info...I just finished writing chapter 36...FINALLY.  I'm going to be spending this week working on my revisions, so I should be posting the next chapter by Sunday.  I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the chapter and the rest of my updates.  Thanks again.

Erin

oh no busted!!! im glad that you were able to capture Jacons humour because i believe thats what makes jacob different from Bella is his carefree funny side

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoy the humor I try to interject. It would be so dire and angsty otherwise. Thanks again. Erin

Bravo! Hurry with the next chapters!

Author's Response:

Thanks again.  I just finished re-working my story outline and this story is definitely going to be 50 chapters long.  I'm getting excited about it again.  I'm also working on the next chapter right now so I should be posting something by next weekend.  Thanks for the reviews.

Erin

Really? Why did Jacob have to come back. That just wasn't necessary :(

Author's Response:

I know.  This was a really mean chapter to write.  But, trust me on this...keep reading.  Thank you for the review.

Erin

I just caught up with your story over the last two days and wanted you to know I enjoy it.  Sometimes you have me laughing so hard and sometimes I'm just wondering how you're going to end things with the Volturi.  Thanks for a good story.

Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving such a nice review.  I'm glad you're enjoying my humor.  Don't worry about the Volturi...I have a plan for them. ;)  Thanks again and I hope to hear from you on future chapters.

Erin