Awesome!!!

*sniffle*  I love Jacob, but poor Edward:(  This Bella is awesome...she should have been this way all along!  What an amazing story!!  But...wait...what!!  He's reading someones thoughts and says he'll be waiting for when Jacob hurts her???!!!   CLiFFIE!!  *gasp*

OK now I'm crying.....you are a beautiful writer and I can so visualize this scene in my head.  I'm not sure I can continue......maybe one more chapter:):)

Author's Response:

Thank you soooooooo much for your review.  Sorry for the late reply.;)

this is good so far but at the same time bella isnt like that im not going to like i hope she dumps edward

Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing your thoughts...Bella is definitely a little ooc in this story, which I think is a good thing, because I found her character weak in the books.  Hopefully you'll read on and enjoy how her character grows and develops.

That was really well played. I can't wait til they decide to use one of those condoms. Love this story. Keep the updates coming, it makes my day better when I have one.

*is horrified with self**

 

HOW ON EARTH DID I MISS THIS UPDATE?!?!?  Okay, sorry about that, I'm over my outburst.  I don't think I can sing your praises loud enough.  I love this story.  Love, love, love!!! And sweet Jesus, so hot and it's just making out...well, a little more than that, but still!  And it amazes me how I can go from enraptured to laughing out loud.  Poor Phil, but how perfect.  And I'm thankful for this side of Renee.  I never thought she got any justice in the books and I always thought there was more to her.  Well, this is all I have to praise right now, but when I think of more, oh you can bet that I will leave you another little note!!  Thanks for such a great story.  It makes my night better!

I knew I didn't like Phil!!! This story is so good though. It makes me happy every time I read it. Love Love Love what you're doing. I hope the pack isn't too hard on Bella, they should just let Jake and her be happy.

more more more!!!!! I have found only two Bella/Jake fanfics that I love and this is the other. this is sooo romantic and funny, they are just perfect together!!

HA @ Phil! I am really loving this story - next chapter soon please! I can't help but think that something awful is going to happen -- I guess I'm so used to anst with Bella in the middle!

whatttt? what a cliffhanger!! you need to write more! what did Edward mean??

I love this story!!!! Please let Bella and Jacob stay together!!!!

write more soon please.....

Author's Response:

I know, sorry to torture you with the cliffhanger, but I just love them.  Thank you so much for your review.

wow.......

I am crying........

I'm not sure how I feel about this.  It is a very good story and I really agree with everything as has turned out so far but oh my goodness, my heart is breaking.

I hope you will keep adding to this???

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you had such a strong response to my story.  Thank you for your review.  Don't worry, I have several more chapters coming up.  I won't leave you hanging too long.:)

 

I'm really looking forward to where you'regoing with this story.  I don't see Edward backing off too easily...

The story is well-written, and you are doing a great job writing Bella!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment and for reviewing my story.

Argh!!! That was so well written! If only I could be so well spoken when things fall apart.  I am intrigued by what Edward read, although I think Edward is a smug jerk for pretty much saying, "Don't worry, you'll come crawling back.. I'll waiting with open arms and an 'I told you so'."  I guess he wasn't being totally truthful when he told Bella that if she picked someone else, he'd step back and let her go... he just didn't think he'd lose!! **looks at comment**  Ha, sorry, I went off on a tangent there.  Once again, great story, very eloquent.  Thank you for sharing, I look forward to more!

Author's Response:

Feel free to go on tangents, anytime!  Thank you so much for your review.