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Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter Five
FRICK!!! FRICK!!! FRICK!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter Four
Just freaking great!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing my chapters. I'm glad you're liking the story thus far.:)
Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter Eleven
Oh no! That last line was heartbreaking! How could he imprint? He's been with Bella the whole time...! Unless he imprinted on her...I hope so. Another great chapter, I'm so glad Bella found Jacob, and feels better with him than Edward. I hope her sunshine isn't taken away or I think I might cry. Really nice chapter, although I wish Jacob hadn't spoilt the moment!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. It really means a lot to me. I'm glad you found the chapter moving, cuz that's what I was going for. All I can tell you is that your questions will be answered in the next chapter. Whether or not you like the answers, well, we'll have to wait and see.:)
Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter Eleven
ok... i'm a bit in shock....
and the song fit so perfectly... for a song that is usually so cheerful that last line nearly made me cry.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm glad this chapter had such an effect on you. I had the idea for using the song in that situation long before I even started the story so I'm glad it nearly made you cry at the end. Anyway, thanks again for taking the time to let me know what you think.:)
Reviewer: jake1121 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
No frakkin way!!!!!! Jacob better have not imprinted on anyone other than Bella because I wont be happY :(
Please tell me it isnt so, and he is just doing her for old time sake. edward knew something that Jacob wasn't saying that made him think that Bella would come back to him.....please tell me he didnt imprint on anyone other than Bella...it would be so cruel. Please update soon, i dont think I can wait.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I can't say anything other than your questions will be answered in the next chapter. Sorry to torture you with the wait. :)
Reviewer: okgrdnfn (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
O M G! WHAT$%^$@!"
Author's Response: LOL! Hang in there...I'll update soon. I promise.:)
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
i feel like hes gonna say he imprinted on bella, but part of me wishes it was someone else lol
Author's Response: My lips are sealed.:) But, thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: JaneJoke (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
OMG, OMG, OMG! Umm...I'm speechless... My heart totally skipped a beat when I read "I imprinted". Holy crap, that was totally unexpected! Sheesh!
Umm, I do have one thing to say, though... That song "You Are My Sunshine"... I've HATED that song since I was a little kid! I've always thought it was soooo sad! So, yeah, I internally cringed when Bella thought of it, but, it turned out to be a pretty appropriate choice considering the bomb that Jacob just dropped on her. Poor Bella. I hope Jake only shines for her...
:)
Can't wait til' next chapter!!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad this chapter left you speechless...I plan on updating soon so you won't have to wait too long to get some answers.:)
Reviewer: twifan1985 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
love your stuff
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate all the reviews.
Reviewer: dvandever (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
He has to have imprinted on Bella right? He wouldn't be with her now if he hadn't right? Ahhh....i don't know if i should cry or be so happy....I need answers :) lol. Really really really great chapter can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I wish I could answer your questions, but I don't want to spoil it for you.:) I promise to update soon!
Reviewer: kelmikmag (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
PLEASE LET HAVE IMPRINTED ON BELLA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate it. I can tell you nothing, other than the fact that I will be updating soon.:)
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter Three
Damn Bells
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter Two
Whoa,didnt see that coming.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow nice ending to this chapter. But i fell like Bella made the right choice to go to Florida,at least theres no mythcial creatures there.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. And I couldn't agree with you more. If Bella (from the actual series) actually took some time to acknowledge her feelings for Jake, maybe things would have turned out differently. Oh well, that's what fanfiction is for. Thanks again.
Reviewer: slippery (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
I sure hope they stay together. You have hooked me on Jake now.
Author's Response: I have you "hooked on Jake?" Ahh, music to my ears. Thank you so much for your review.
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
WTF!!!????? So THIS is what Edward was talking about when he said that Jake would hurt Bella.... I wonder who it is? Hmmmmm........
Author's Response: I can say nothing, other than that I really appreciate your review. I won't keep you waiting for the next chapter too long.:)
Reviewer: Sharmakitty (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
Wouldn't Jacob be unable to be with Bella in this way unless he imprinted on HER? Hoping so!! BEST Bella/Jacob story on there!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your awesome compliment. I'll update soon, and hopefully some of your questions will be answered.
Reviewer: yay4shanghai (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
I liked the incorporation of the song it was great.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It was an idea I had long before I decided to write the story.:)
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
First I want to say that I am a Team Edward girl from cradle to the grave. BUT, yours is by far the best Jacob/Bella story I have ever read. Oh, and she needs to calm down long enough for him to tell her that he imprinted on her !!! Love love your story.
Author's Response: I love, love, love, getting some love from Team Edward people. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
ruh-roh. imprinted on someone besides Bella?
Author's Response: I can't say...at least not until the next chapter. I'll update soon so you won't have to wait too long.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
I swear to god that if you don't have him say that he imprinted with her that I will find a way to make you pay. Just kidding! Seriously though, that was just mean. I love this chapter, LOVE IT!!!!!!
Author's Response: I know, I know. Sorry to be so mean, but you know you liked it!:) I'll update soon, don't worry.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
oh no! Poor bells.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: cbaby1234 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
OMG!! That was amazing. I'm itchin' for another chapter!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you thought so. Thank you for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: kittenesque (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter Ten
Woweeee :) I loved this story it was really cute :D I don't like your banner thoughh, so I'm makin you a new one, kay? I'll get it to you somehow.Great chapter! update soooon xox
Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter Ten
Aaaaw, that was nice. They're so made for each other. Update soon, it's going on favourites :)
Author's Response: Wow, I don't know if anyone reads these, but I just wanted to say thank you for your awesome reviews. I'm glad you're liking the story. There aren't enough Jacob/Bella stories out there.:) Anyway, thanks again for all your kind words. I expect to update soon.
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