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Reviewer: dvandever (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter Twelve
Wow...that was all kinds of hot and sticky!!!! I think i need a cold shower now, lol. I am so happy you let him imprint on Bella and that really was sweet too.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you also for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter Twelve
I'm so glad Jacob imprinted on Bella! I'm actually bouncing on my chair with a huge stupid smile on my face as i'm writing this. It was so sweet, everything was so sweet and I'm so happy that Bella is Jacob's imprint. It rather takes Edward off of the picture, doesn't it?
That was a great chapter thanks!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter so much.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter Twelve
I am so happy. I don't even know what else to say but that this was my perfect happy ending. I'm glad there will be more though. In fact I could read this story forever.
Author's Response: Wow, what a great compliment...thank you so much. I'm so glad the chapter turned out the way you wanted it to. I know I was happy with it.;)
Reviewer: EllaB (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter Twelve
Wow, what a chapter! Hot AND romantic, all in one. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. And most importantly, thank you for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter Twelve
Aaaaaaaaaaaaawwww that was sooooooo cute! I'm glad he imprinted on her! Their first time was adorable too, a lot like I would imagine.
Your writing in this chapter exceeded the rest in my opinion, it was really really great! I just want to let you know that this is like the only story I read every time it is updated...so you are very special! Lots of these I read the first chapter then can't be bothered to read on but this...I just love it!
Like the banner too, kittenesque did one for me also!
Your last line makes me think of the song "All Night Long", I've been singing it ever since I finished your chapter, haha.
Another excellent piece of work, well done! Update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your awesome review. I am truly honored to be one of the only stories you follow. I've experienced the same thing...I start reading a story and then it goes all pear-shaped on me. I hate investing the time. I'm just glad my story isn't like that for you. Thans again for reviewing.
Reviewer: Mombailey (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter Eleven
Oh no you didn't!!! You silly thing, you're killling me! I loved this chapter, what a sweet boy and innocent girl... PLEASE update soon, I won't sleep well until you do...GREAT JOB!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you're liking my version of things.:)
Reviewer: Msvan (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
I keep checking for more. Its so good. You are a fantastic writer.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you're liking this story.
Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Chapter Eleven
Arg! What a cliffhanger! Can't wait to read what's next.
Author's Response: I know it was cruel. But you should be reading the update soon. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: Curious (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
This is the best Jacob/Bella story I have read. Thank you
Author's Response: Wow, that is such a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much.:)
Reviewer: mommachace (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
YOU R AWSOME PLEEASE CONTINUE I LOVE YOUR STORY SO FAR
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying my little story.:)
Reviewer: Msvan (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
Please write fast! Its so good!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. And thank you for reviewing. It really means a lot to me.
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
I guess Edward was right. WHAT THE HELL?!?! LIKE BELLA DINDT HAVE ENOUGH TO DEAL WITH WHEN SHE GETS BACK TO FORKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, Edward may have been right, but he still doesn't know the whole truth. Neither does Bella. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.:)
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter Ten
That was HOTT & SWEET.
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter Nine
Hell nah!!! You better go Bella!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter Eight
Dammit!!! I forgot about those!!!!
Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter Eleven
YIKES! Evil cliffy -- can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I know it was evil, but I hope you enjoyed it anyway. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: MommaMcCoy (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter Eleven
Awww.
Author's Response: Aww...thank you.
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter Seven
i think it would have been better if Renee had caught them. But DAMMINT PHIL!!!!!
Reviewer: Lily83 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter Eleven
OMG!!! Please let him be imprinted on Bella!!!!! I hope you are posting the next chapter soon!!! This story is so amazing... <3
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your compliments are so encouraging.:)
Reviewer: MIna (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Chapter Eleven
wow with who, not Bella obviously... Will this mean she will go back to Edward now, please....
Author's Response: All I will say is that I'm a Jacob lover through and through. I guess you'll have to wait and find out what happens.:)
Reviewer: cuteblondi22 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
WHATTTTTT?!?!? he imprinted?! on bella...right? or someone else...hmmmmmmmmmmmmm interesting. i cant wait to see how you play this out! UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: I guess you'll just have to wait and see.:) THank you so much for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: zerolover (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
what the hell???? thats a freagin sucky way to leave us hangin! but i have t oadmitt good story. but please please please write the next chapter!!! did he imprint on bella? or was it leah ? or renee??
Author's Response: I know, I know...that was a pretty big cliffhanger. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Trust me, your questions will be answered in the next chapter. Can't wait to hear what you think then.:)
Reviewer: twilighteergrl29 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
OMG! I just found this story today and spent all day reading it. It's amazing! I love your version of Bella and Jake, especially when they let themselves get carried away with each other. You've done an incredible job! Please let Jake have imprinted on Bella! Was his imprint the thing he'd been keeping from her? I can't wait till they get back to Forks. How's Charlie going to react? What's Edward going to do? What about the Volturi? So much still left in the air. I can't wait to see how you resolve it all. You're an awesome writer! Thanks for the incredible story! I hope you post more soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm thrilled to find fellow Jacob lovers out there. Most of your questions will be answered in the upcoming chapters. Enjoy, and thanks again for reviewing.:)
Reviewer: alaska4114 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter Eleven
*gasp*!!!!! how dare you end it like that!?!?! thats just downright mean.you should work for the government in their TOURTURE division. i hate you. no wait, i love you. your my idol, i cant hate you.
but still, i hate you.
UPDATE PLEASE!!! THIS IS GREAT!!!
Author's Response: Okay, I'm sorry you're in pain and all, but your review had me LOL! I'm sorry to torture you, but I promise to update soon.:)
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter Six
What he is talking about?
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