I'm dying for an update. I love this story and cannot wait for more. I know you have put out a lot in a very short time, but ....waiting.......waiting.....waiting. Soon I hope.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  I really appreciate it.  I hope to update really soon, so you won't have to wait too long.:)

i think the jacob/bella pair is perfect. i myself love both edward n jacob n think its great that jacob finally got his way. great story!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm so glad you like my version of things.

This contines to be a wonderful story. I'm glad that Edward and Bella were able to talk things out, even though they ended on a funky note...

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and your nice compliment.  I really appreciate it.

I just read this entire story up to this point. I absolutely love it! This chapter made me crrrryyyyyyy so hard. WAH!

Author's Response:

Wow, that's so awesome!  I'm so glad you're liking the story and thank you for taking the time to review.  I really appreciate it.

That was a VERY exiticing & unexpected chapter. I escipally LOVED the part when Bella was like:Was there an announcement about it on Myspace?  Bella Swan loses her virginity to Jacob Black, news at eleven. Loved it!! Please keep writing!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm so glad you liked it. 

So after reading this chapter i realized something i maybe never thought about here.  I am totally all about Bella and Edward but I love that this story has her with Jake...the only thing is I really hope you don't give Edward someone else to love.  I think it would be poetic that neither of these guys could ever really be happy or truly love someone other than her.  Not to mention Bella is all about the classic romance and their situation would totally be the tragic romantic trangle.  I really enjoyed this chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I really appreciate it especially coming from someone who is usually pro Edward/Bella.  I'm so glad you're liking the idea of what would have happened if Bella chose differently.

wow that was a hard chapter to read. really hard. and as far as the argument as to why edward is a better match for bella. well it's a stronger connection. that spark... edward's complete with her and she with him. Jacob loves bella and it grew into something more...he is younger than her as well but that deep spark isn't there. but with that said it doesn't mean i don't enjoy your new perspective and different kind of story. just explaining why it was a rough chapter to read. i'm looking forward to the bonfire though. Leah should be....interesting heheh. take care thanks for the chapter. 

Okay, THIS was the psych. 

You.

Are.

Good.

 

lol

Psych out!  Brava!

I can’t spend eternity with someone who can only be perfectly comfortable and at ease with me if I become something else. 

Ah, that is beautiful.

 

I have to say that this chapter is making me uncomfy as I read it because I remember being 18 and having relationship issues and so I try to put myself in everyone's place with that mindset... And I always wind up feeling just horrible for Edward. Who isn't really eighteen at all.

LOVED the opening dream sequence.

Brave of her to ask for some breathing space...nice idea. :)

 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  My whole idea for this story was that I wanted a stronger, more self-assured Bella who really thought about the "life-altering" choices she makes.  Anyway, thanks for your review.:)

Oh I am so glad you updated!!  I wish I had a chapter a day!!  I loved this one.  I didnt think I would care about the Bella Edward closure conversation but you did it so well.  I really liked how Bella put that she was never Edwards equal and it was her blood that drew him to her then the relationship developed.  He could have just as easily killed her for her blood and never got to know the girl like Emmett did.  I love this spin on these characters.  And... while I am a total team Jacob, I love all stories Twilight.  This is one of the best EVER!  So nice to see Bella stand on her own two feet!  I love how Jacob encourages her to do that.  Remember how Edward FREAKED out in the original series when Bella would go see Jacob.  That drove me crazy.  Jacob just let her do what she needed to do.  LOVE your writing and the story.  Sorry for the lengthy review.  Just loved it.