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Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Chapter Four
“Jake loves me just as I am. I don’t have to change who I am to be with him....
There were several lines that I liked - but this is the best one! thx!!!! <><3
Reviewer: jdmathis (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
I LOVE this story!!! I used to be Team Edward and here lately, man oh man, I am Team Jacob. You just have a way of making him so manly and responsible and gosh, just really love your story. MORE MORE MORE!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, that is music to my ears. I've said before that I'm not trying to recruit followers to Team Jacob's side, but if that happens as a result of my story, then I really am HAPPY! Thank you so much for your review and your wonderful praise. I love it! :)
Reviewer: twilighteergrl29 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
OMG!! That was so awesome! Fantastic chapter! I loved how you addressed the kiss with Edward from the previous chapter. But the love making between Jake and Bella was hawt!!! However the best part was when Seth walked in! Classic! I'm still smiling. Thanks for the terrific fic!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such an awesome review. Yes, Bella made a mistake for allowing Edward to kiss her...and for kissing him back for that matter..but I sure as hell wasn't going to let her get away with it too easily. I'm glad you liked how I handled it.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
I know I reviewed a couple of chapters ago, but I thought you'd want to hear how awesome you are again :)
I really love a good Bella/Jake story, and you have got it goin' on!
Author's Response: THank you sooooooo much. It's always nice to hear.;)
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter Thirteen
i love this story! I just barely started reading it, and I adore it. I love the way that you have Bella finally noticing how Edward is towards her, condescending and bossy. It is fantastic! Jacob stuck up for himself well, and you are amazing!! <3
Author's Response: Hey Beckie!
Can you believe I just found this review today, 10/06/09? You'll probably never read it, but I just had to respond to a review. I'm so glad you're liking my story, and of course, that you're such a fan of my Jake. Thanks again.
Erin
Reviewer: taliatwinkle (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter Six
Hunni, i applaud you! I usually dont write reviews as i usually dont have much to say, but this chapter i had to praise you on. Not just writing skills but the message in your writing as well. This chapter said everything i have thought about edwards character since i read eclipse and what i think about relationships, lots of them between friends of mine, in which the girl wishes they had that sweeps-me-off-my-feet guy who "completes them" and all that other stuff that only really sounds good in a fantasy romance about sweeps-you-off-your-feet vampires and naive girls to boot. Im so glad someone is able to show people, if not the entire fan base of the twilight series, how unhealthy investing all your being and existence into one person and glorifying them as a being of higher stature to the point that you fell undeserving of them is. And letting their their love for you turn into a condescending possessiveness that undermines your intelligence and personal freedom. Ive seen it happen so many times, of course not involving vampires, to my friends and it ends up leading to severe insecurity and depression when it all falls down. And it always falls down.
Anyway, excuse the rant :). In other words, in my 17 year old web lingo... i <3 ur fic!!
Reviewer: cavilah (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter Fifteen
Beautiful! What a way to tell a good Jakey/Bella story... ;-) Thanks for sharing the love! I'm so glad that Bella is getting everything she needs from Jacob & that she's getting serious about their future together...I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you sooooooo much. I'm glad you're enjoying it.:)
Reviewer: precioustandi (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
A really good chapter! OMG when Seth walked in...Ugh...I can only imagine such embarassment. I really am looking forward to your next chapeter I think the fact that Seth walked in should be what encourages (or enrages) Leah to speak her mind to Bella. That was one conversation that I wished SM included in Breaking Dawn. Keep On Writing!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. Based on your comments, I think you'll really enjoy the next chapter...because there is a confrontation. Anyway, thanks again.
Reviewer: lotusblossom (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
Oooh, great chapter! That lemon was hot and even better with Seth's little lesson in sex ed there at the end, haha!
I love that you addressed the whole Edward's charm on Jake's bracelet issue - I am Team Edward but that bugged the fuck out of me in the books!
Author's Response: Ahh, I love it when Team Edward people review me. I really appreciate it. I hope you can see in my story that I'm not trying to be mean or unfair to Edward. Rather, I'm just painting the picture of what would have happened if Bella would have picked Jacob instead...based on the personalities already laid out by SM. And yes, Edward's charm really bothered me. I'm glad you agree.:)
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter Seven
Oops
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter Five
OH man, Edward, go away! Loving this!
Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter Fifteen
Oh no! Seth saw! Haha that was really funny. I liked this chapter, and I'm glad to see the still blossoming romance between Jake and Bella. I loved how she leapt on him during the bonfire - I thought it was really sweet. A really lovely chapter, very hot, too. Edie x
Author's Response: Hi Edie,
Thank you so much for your review. I'm so glad you liked this chapter. THanks again.:)
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter Fifteen
lmao typical seth moment. Bella was very lucky to have the opportunity to have not only her own loving father but 2 other groups of families love her and happily welcome her into their family. guess that's why we love our fiction huh. so i wonder what's in store for Jake and Bella next.
thanks for the new chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome review.:)
Reviewer: meghanrd (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter Fifteen
OMG that was hilarious!
Author's Response: THank you so much!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter Fifteen
lmao! Love it, so funny!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: etoesha (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
Amazing Amazing Amazing! I loved it, I dig it, it was great. My favorite part, definately at the the beach when they are havong their first fgiht. I love your line "We had angry words, betrayal, and threats of physical violence. I'd say we did a pretty good job for our first time." in reference to their first fight. All key ingredents to a meaningless good fight that you can laugh about :) I love that you had Seth walk in on them it is so perfect god I can't wait for your next post.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a wonderful review. I'm so glad you like it. Hopefully you won't have to wait too long for the next update. Thanks again.
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
Poor Seth. Very nice chapter, worth the wait-- can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I know, poor Seth. Thanks for the review.:)
Reviewer: kjayne (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
Great chapter, hilarious ending!!! I loved it!
Author's Response: THank you so much!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
Haha! Poor Seth. I love the bit you wrote with the braclet. It's like taking something from the book and making your own. I loved it! Can't wait for the rest of the story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for always reviewing. I'm glad you liked the whole bracelet part, because that really irked me once I thought about it.
Reviewer: alisharae83 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
WOW! I'M LOVIN IT. JACOB IS SOO HOT IN THIS STORY. I THINK IT IS SO MUCH BETTER THIS WAY. YOU GO JACOB!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it!
Reviewer: alisharae83 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
WOW I love it!!! Jacob is sooo Hot!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: alisharae83 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
WOW I love it!!! Jacob is sooo Hot!!!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
Nice "first fight" and "first fight summation."
Poor Seth! Poor Bella!
I won't say Poor Jake.
Reviewer: angelseeker (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
Ha! Seth cracks me up. Another good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter Three
Go, Bella, go! Nice to see her standing up for herself... The internal tug-of- war is very touching! <><3
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