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Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter Six
Reading Bella's tirade was so cathartic for me....I imagine it was fun but difficult to write!
Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter Four
You just did the best BPOV ever! I love your little device of having her argue with her mother, forcing her to present all the reasons she loves Jacob, rather than Edward. It was so well thought out(due to many revisions, I'm sure) but also you kept it seemingly hesitant, as if Bella was figuring out as she was saying it. Love it!
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
I LOVE YOUR STORY, I COULDNT STOP READING :)
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much!
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen
I think it's just lovely that Jacob is, um, so good with his hands... among other things! <><3
Author's Response: I know, right? ;)
Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Oh for the love of God...what a cliffy lol!!! Great chapter...I could go for a Birthday like that hehehe. Can't wait to read the next chapter...don't keep me waiting too long lol.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I know, if only we ALL could have a birthday like that. :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Mombailey (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
“Really, I assumed with your yapping and constant nagging that we were. My bad.” ...LOL!! HaHaHaHaHa!!!
his nostrils flared at the scent of my arousal. I have no idea why, but that line was the sexiest thing...??? Just effing sexy!
“Vampires!” ...WTF??? AAAHHHH!!! You're killing me woman!!!
CAN NOT WAIT!! PLEASE...HAVE HEARTATTACK!! AAAHHHHH!!!
Author's Response: OMJ! I'm sorry to be the one causing you so much distress! :) I'll update ASAP! Thank you for the awesome review.
Reviewer: jake1121 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
NOOOOO vampires, I love this story. I love that jake can be tender and sexual being too...grrrr I want me some of that.
They really are the perfect pair, and the thing with seth trying to keep edward out of his thoughts...hilarious.
Will edward fall for Leah? Im guessing she wouldnt have green eyes though.hmm
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I think we could all use a bit of Jake in our lives. ;) And glad you think that they are a perfect pair, because I always thought they were in the books too, if only Bella would've given him the chance. Interesting theory on Edward...I'll just leave it at that. :)
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
OH i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!! this story is the best!
Author's Response: THank you so much. Hopefully you won't have to wait too long. :)
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
I KNEW Edward was watching!! I could just sense that he was there... Either it's Edward or it is the Denalis... Neither is very good anyways...
Author's Response: All I can say is that you'll find out in the next chapter. I hope you enjoy it. ;) THanks for the review.
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
I KNEW Edward was watching!! I could just sense that he was there... Either it's Edward or it is the Denalis... Neither is very good anyways...
Author's Response: Yeah, B/J never can seem to have a private moment all to themselves. Thank you so much for your review. :)
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
I KNEW Edward was watching!! I could just sense that he was there...
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
I KNEW Edward was watching!! I could just sense that he was there...
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
uhoh! Dun dun DUN!!
Author's Response: I know, right? I'm glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: alisharae83 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
i LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Author's Response: THank you soooo much!
Reviewer: Missypooh (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Given the title of your story, I am really hoping Bella eventually ends up with Edward. That he learns his lesson and is ready to give her what she needs. That would be a great ending. I'm hoping this other girl ends up driving Bella crazy with jealously. I know you may not take it in that direction but here is one fan that is still hoping! Great writing!
Author's Response: HI there,
I don't want to give too much away, but the title pertains more to Bella's development from the time she came to Forks and then throughout the story. She was an independent, strong person when she got there, then she got caught up with Edward and became very dependent. I hate to break your heart on this one, but this is very definitely a Bella/Jacob story. There just aren't enough of them out there in fanfiction. I hope that doesn't turn you completely off the story. ANyway, thanks for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: Frzr71186 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
K. I just finished all of this in one sitting. And holy crap, it's good. I'm Edward/Bella but I really do love the Jacob/Bella stories because sometimes I think that would've been the best choice.
So, vampires huh? I'm guessing the Denali clan traveled a little close to their love nest. Such a shame, too, because they were having such an awesome time....
Author's Response: THank you so much for your review. I especially love hearing from Edward/Bella people who are willing to give Jacob a fair shot. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen
wow!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen
wow!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen
wow!
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Incredible. Amazing. Wonderful. I'm not so sure I like the Edward as a friend but the Jacob date more than made up for it. Love it. Anxious about who the Vamps are that Jake does not recognize???
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yeah, I'm not so sure that Edward/Bella as friends could work, but let's face it, they never really tried before. We'll see how it goes. And, I'm glad you liked the date.;) I'll try to update soon to answer your vampire question. THanks again.
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen
GAH! Why must vampires ruin everything?! haha. Very hot and steamy. I love Jacob. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: THank you so much!
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Good update. I don't like Bella with Jacob but it is her choice, and that is life. I know how difficult it is for Edward but I hope that he finds another love, as per Alice vision, and move on.
Update soon.
Author's Response: THank you so much. I really appreciate your review, especially since you don't necessarily like Bella with Jacob. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter Sixteen
Oh Wow! I just read all 16 chapters in 1 sitting. I'm 24yrs old and a horrible writer but I just wanted to say I love you're writing/story. I hope it's not too long till the next update. Is she going to take Edward back? I hope not!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I can't believe you read it all in one sitting! I submitted my next chapter for validation today...so hopefully you won't have to wait too long for an update. Thanks again.
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter Sixteen
“Mmm, maple syrup kisses.” I'll take an order of those, please!
OK, so I wiped my eyes from laughing at Seth & Quil & Embry, then I sniffled over poor Leah - good job! <><3
Author's Response: Thank you so much for ALL of your reviews and of course, for enlisting me into the Bella Jacob Chronicles. I'm happy you liked this chapter and that you enjoyed the Leah part. The poor girl didn't get any love in the series and I think she really is an interesting character. Thanks again.
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