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Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen
Ooh, that was mean. That was seriously the worst cliffie you've had so far. Worse even than the Jacob imprint thing. I need to know how and why that fight started and if everybody I care about is ok, be they vamp or werewolf.
Author's Response: Yeah, I guess that was probably meaner than the imprint chapter. Fear not, I'll be updating soon. Can't wait to hear what you think about the next one.:)
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen
Ahhhhhh! Horrible leaving it like this! But you know I love it and will be waiting for the next update. Now I'm going to be completely obsessed checking for updates. Still totally loving Seth.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really glad you're liking Seth. He was just so adorable in the actual series that I felt I needed to include him in my story. I'll be updating soon, so don't worry.:)
Reviewer: mrsz (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen
NOOOOOOO!!!! You can't stop here!!!! THIS IS TERRIBLE!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE WITHIN THE NEXT 2 DAYS OR I MAY DIE OF ANXIETY!!!
Okay, I'm done with my fit now... But, really, great chapter! I Love, Love, Love this story. I'm addicted now. Please, please, please update NOW!
Side note - here's what I'm thinking is happening. I may be way off... 1) Edward wants revenge/ Iriana wants revenge so they team up (on their own) 2)Tanya and, obviously, Alice realize what is about to happen and try to intervene/ stop them 3)Iriana is the burning vamp, Quil is the hurt wolf (OMG I thought it was Jake for a minute) 4) Shit is about to get hairy...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for an awesome review. I've submitted the next chapter for validation within your two day time frame. So, hopefully I have effectively prevented your death by anxiety.:)
I can say that you're kind of right and kind of wrong about your observations. But, you'll find out soon enough what I mean. Thank you again. I really appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: misscullen112108 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen
how could u end it like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!
plz update fast
Author's Response: Don't worry...the update is on its way! :)
Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen
AMAZING, AMAZING, AMAZING!
Please update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! The next update is in the validation stage. It should be up soon. :)
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen
oh i have to know what happens next!!!
next chapter please!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you need to know! I'm updating soon. So don't worry. I'm so glad you're liking this so far.:)
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen
GREAT CHAPTER : )
Author's Response: Thank you sooooooo much! :)
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen
oh my god - i cant believe you left us hangin like that - update soon - this is excellant!
Author's Response: I know, I know...it was a mean cliffie. Don't worry...you'll have your answers soon enough.:)
Reviewer: angelseeker (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen
Dang cliffie . . . Excellent chapter : )
Author's Response: Thank you soooooo much! :)
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen
Heinous, horrid cliffhanger!!!
Bella really NEEDS to get her act together. Of course, the same holds true for pretty much the entire Saga, eh?
Great writing. Very fast-paced and suspenseful. Even the internal stuff.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. The next chapter is in the validation stage...so you won't have to live with that "horrid" cliffhanger for much longer!:)
Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter Eighteen
First of all: OH MY GOD!!!! I can't believe you left me hanging like this! I must have more. Right now :)
Secondly, I love this: “Alright, I’ll take you. Jesus, Bella. You’re gonna be the death of me.”
I turned back to him and smiled. “Yeah, I get that a lot.”
You are so totally awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a wonderfully awesome review. I'm so glad you like my story and my sense of humor. I'm going to be updating the next few chapters rather quickly, so I hope you enjoy it while it lasts. Thanks again. :)
Reviewer: twifan14 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Aghh! Cliff hangers kill me... but in a good way. I love the gifts from Jacob, they were so sweet and so true to character. I also love that there is hope for Edward, because I do love him and would want him to be happy, I just like Jacob best. :) I'm so excited for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate the review. I did want to be fair with Edward, just not with Bella.:) I just needed Jacob to get his girl first. Anyway, thanks for reading.:)
Reviewer: kicsirigo (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter Six
I'm sorry but this story just got to down to earth, too realistic (in my opinion of course). Where is the fairytail part? It's a pity 'cause the first 2 chapters were just super great. IThe original characters don't speak so rude. Maybe Jacob, but Edward is an old-fashioned guy. In my imaginary world of them they don't fight for the girl so straight...
But never mind. The story is good, your writing is cool too. It is just not the story that fits my Twilight World.
Author's Response: Well, to each his/her own.:) Thank you for giving it a chance and for the lovely compliments about the overall writing and story. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Amazing!!! Love the tension. More please!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review.:)
Reviewer: Lily83 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Again another great chapter!! :) Hmm.. interesting, I wonder if Edward is still trying to get Bella back.. Oh, and what a cliffie! :O
Author's Response: Thank you so much for always taking the time to review. I'm glad you like the cliffie, I know people can get cranky about them.;)
Reviewer: kicsirigo (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter Two
oH my God!
I love this one!
let's read ahead...............
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'll try to update soon.:)
Reviewer: MTKfanpire (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
I just finished reading all the chapters and i have to say that you've done a brillaint job with the Bella Jacob dynamic. Im always looking for some Bella/Jacob fanficitons that have some substance and yours really had so many great things going on. Its funny and i love how you still managed to incorporate the Cullens. Great great work. Keep writing!
Author's Response: THank you for such a wonderful review. I started to write this story because I didn't think there was enough B/J stories out there. I'm glad you approve.:)
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen
awwww somehow a vampire mars yet another birthday celebration for bella. thanks for the new chapter it was beautiful. but i dunno if i could handle edward being with someone else. that'd be just.........weird. but i'd hate for him to pine for bella forever in your story. can't they have like a 3 way relationship????? hahaha
Author's Response: A 3 way, yeah, that's what I kept hoping for before Breaking Dawn came out. Alas, my hopes were dashed. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Msvan (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Happy Birthday to ME!! Next chapter sounds good! Hope its soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you...I'll try to update soon.
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Oh God! Who the hell will it be? You really do leave us on the edge of our seats!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad that the chapter was suspenseful enough for you. I'm planning on updating soon.
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
wow truly love this story just read the whole thing today bcant wait for an update.
Author's Response: THank you so much. I'm so happy that you're enjoying it so much.
Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen
Oh no! Vampires.....By the way, I can't believe that you addressed the whole charm braclet thing. It's always something that really bugged me, how she puts that huge diamond on Jacobs gift. Love this story and can't wait to read more...although I wonder if I'm a sick puppy for wanting Edward to "walk in" on them. I guess Seth was a suitable proxy
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. Yeah, I think the whole charm bracelet thing was handled really badly in the book. As if Edward hadn't already taken everything else from Jacob, he also had to take away the part of his gift that made it his. So, I'm glad you liked how I changed that a bit.
Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter Fifteen
Ack! I think Seth walking in on that lemon totally killed MY buzz Hahaha
Author's Response: Yeah, I guess Seth really is a buzz kill in that chapter.:) Poor Seth.
Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter Eight
Hahaha! I love it. Such a cute ending to the chapter
Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter Seven
Edward had taught me what it felt like to be in love. But, Jacob had shown me what it was to feel like a woman in love. So right! and damn you Phil indeed
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