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Reviewer: Susan2e (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2012 12:04 AM · On: One More Time
Can you write about Emmett teasing them?
Reviewer: Susan2e (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2012 12:04 AM · On: One More Time
Can you write about Emmett teasing them?
Reviewer: Kls8899 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 08:00 PM · On: One More Time
Love this story!
Reviewer: tpol (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2011 08:51 AM · On: One More Time
Really love this story
Reviewer: bella31 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 07:52 AM · On: One More Time
I really liked this, and I thought for sure he was going to bite her in the heat of the moment. Great writing, more I wish for.
Reviewer: bella31 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 06:14 PM · On: One More Time
I really liked this, I like when Edward is more aggressive. Your writing is very good, I`ll be looking for more of your stories.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 02:39 AM · On: One More Time
I have read a lot of fics of Edward and Bella's first time and this has to be one of the better ones out there. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading!! *MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: jts (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 11:26 PM · On: One More Time
Loved this, as always. Thank you *so* much for taking the time and putting forth the effort to write these fics.
Be well,
jts
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm so glad you enjoyed!! *MWHA*MWHA*MWAH*
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:31 AM · On: One More Time
Alice had a great idea. Moving slowly to acclimate themselves prior to the wedding. I would say Bella and Edward both had new experiences together as well as pleasurable. Delightful to have any entire evening and morning alone with each other. Free to express their feelings for each other without multiple thoughts to Edward giving him harassment or further instructional suggestions. Emmett will always be Emmett. If it's sexual in nature, then Emmett can't resist his sexual fantasies flying through his thoughts and snide/teasing remarks to upset Edward and embarrass Bella so she'll blush. It's a Emmett vice. Alice's thoughts you better not bite her before the wedding. Got to have the wedding go off without a hitch (bloodlust new vampire.) But at least they are still together and snuggling in the end.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading babes! This was actually my very first fic so it will always have a special place in my heart *MWHA*
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 01:13 AM · On: One More Time
really loved this short fic, wish it had been longer
Author's Response: Awwww thank you so much, sweets, it was my first.
*MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: eiroltan (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:13 AM · On: One More Time
great story telling!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! *MWAH*
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 12:15 PM · On: One More Time
That was sooo lovely... pity he had promised Alice not to turn her..... that would be the hottest thing ever, turning her after a mind-blowing orgasm... Plus, it would satiate his need to bite ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review! I'm so glad you enjoyed Edward biting himself, it just seemed like something he would do to me. *MWAH*
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Swan Dive
I totally loved the part where he bit himself... and like Bella, I'd be turned on.... Edward should know by now that his animalistic side turns her on... he shouldn't shy away from it:)
Reviewer: fiction fan (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 04:57 PM · On: One More Time
Yes! I did enjoy this ride. And what a ride it was!! My before dinner cocktail (ha!) tonight! Also the perfect story to read before I see New Moon tomorrow. Ahhh, I was wishing that I had planned to go to the midnight showing but now I know what I can do instead tonight - read more of your amazingly hot stories - and take a long hot shower with my hot husband!! I wonder if any of this story line will creep into my thoughts if Edward and Bella are lusting after each other on screen tomorrow - should be fun! Loving every one of your stories!! Thanks for sharing your talent with all of us.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Jacqueline, I'm just happy that anyone other than me understands the drivel that trickles out of my brain LOL! I hope you enjoyed your hot shower with your hot hubs AND New Moon!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: AnaPrintemps (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 06:45 PM · On: One More Time
Hah! Finally someone with a believable concept! this was a great work of literature, a crown breaking achievement for the world of grammar conscious smut!
I can't wait to check out more of your work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review! I hope you enjoy my other works as well!
*MWAH*
Reviewer: lovesletmesign (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:15 AM · On: One More Time
A+ beautifully done!
sequal please:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, this was my very first fic and I hold it very close to my heart, however, I don't see a sequel in the future for this lil fic.
I do love that you love it though! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Carlisle060 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 02:57 PM · On: The Softest Spot
that was so hot :)
i wish i had a guy who owuld do that for me !
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:35 PM · On: One More Time
Wow that was sooooooooooo much fun!! You are a very good writer.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This was my very first fic so it's very close to my heart!
*MWHA*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:58 PM · On: One More Time
I loved this one. I loved that he almost changed her in that moment. That's just awesome and how it should have played out. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This was my first fic and it just makes me smile when people find it!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: jenny_Ag (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 03:26 PM · On: One More Time
AWESOME!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! *MWAH*
Reviewer: jrh927 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:42 PM · On: One More Time
Enjoy the ride? HELL YEAH! Can I buy a lifetime pass for the Amusement Park that is Edward Cullen?!?!?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This was my very first fic, so it makes me so happy when my readers find it!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: EmeraldRain (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:10 PM · On: One More Time
very very good! couldnt stop myself reading all of it at once :) hmmm where's my fiance gone off to *wink*
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you so much! This was my first fic so it hold a special place in my pervy lil heart ;-)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:42 AM · On: One More Time
"Okay kids, grab your suits...we're heading to the beach!' (Mommy needs to jump into the {icy cold} bay --for an hour or two!!!) Yeah, probably will take all day to cool down from this one!
Damn, girl! Whoo!
Now tell me again why we're not locking you in a room until you lock them in a room for another 4...to 16 chapters?! LOL ;D
I knew I liked your writing, but now I LOVE your writing!!! Thank-you for such a delicious end to the cockblocking! Couln't have been more perfect!!!
Author's Response: Awwww thank you so much D! This was my first fic so it will always be very close to my pervy little heart!! You are so awesome girl!!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 05:42 PM · On: One More Time
mmmmm...a very nice story....lots of lemony goodness...
you are inceredible! got thru the Acclimation Diaries and decided to check out your other stuff-***big contented sigh*** glad i did!
you rock! must go for another cold shower!
Author's Response: Awwww thank you so much! This was my first fic so it is very close to my little pervy heart! YOU rock!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Testing the Waters
wow. oh my goodness.... that was fine! whew...
i need a very long cold shower....
very nice indeed!
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