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Reviews For Collide
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 9: No Way to Live, No Way to Love

I sense that the good moments are close! I can't wait!! Haha!

Bella is delusional for thinking that she can resist Edward and her feelings for him!!

I am really enjoying your story and I am glad to know that you came to your senses!

Good for you (and for us too)!!

All the best,

Monique



Author's Response:

Good moments are coming closer indeed, with every chapter I post! And I cannot wait to share them with you, but first some more angst. Just stick with me, I promise it will be all worth it.

I'm going to post twice this week, at least try to, but now I'm catching up with the reviews first, so I can thank you all properly. thanks for taking the time to read and review monique! Have a good day!

Reviewer: ashtreeha (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 9: No Way to Live, No Way to Love

this week???

YES!

I seriously love this story!

Keep writing it! No matter what you think, it's amazing. all authors have stupid self critism and  hold back from posting/finishing becuse they think it's stupid. I'll tell you, yours aren't.

Waiting for the next chapter...



Author's Response:

Definitely this week. I'm trying to update twice more this week, so this story moves on a little faster. Thanks for your encouragement about my fic and my writing, it means a lot to me. I'm going to continue with this fic, promise and I will definitely give it a proper ending!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I love those shiny stars. Have a good day dear!

Reviewer: Twop (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

Oohhhhhhhhhhh Edward's dog! Awesome coincidence. You definately should continue this! I will go back and review every chapter I've missed if that's what it takes! I loooove this!



Author's Response:

It was definitely Edward's dog, and the next chapter will focus on their meeting in the park! Thanks for catching up and reviewing, means a lot to me! More is on its way so stay tuned!

Reviewer: Twop (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 7: Mimosa

Awwwwwwww! Such a sweetie. I looove this story (: Awesome work!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much Twop! You make me blush;

Reviewer: Twop (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: McCatchMe

I love this. Bella needs to ditch Jacob, he's a tool :P



Author's Response:

I know, and every chapter I post is one chapter closer to E and B being together!

Reviewer: Twop (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 2: Pulling a Bella Swan -part 2-

Love it. Edward's a sweetheart (:



Author's Response:

He definitely is!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

Hey i love this story its really good i realy hope she splits up with jacob soon e and b both deserve each other i think its really sad that she tried to kill herself. Cant wait for an update =]

 



Author's Response:

Hi RedRedRed, Bella will need a few more chapters (3-4) to realize that she needs to break up with Jacob, and Edward will be around in those chapters to remind her about what she is missing in her relationship. But some things are about to happen -probably things you won't like- but this is an E/B fic... I hope the update will be up soon. Thanks for r&r!

Reviewer: player (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Pulling a Bella Swan

i know you said chapter 9 was up, but i cannot see it



Author's Response:

i've uploaded it but it's still waiting to get accepted by my beta (every chapter needs to get accepted/rejected, sometimes it takes only a day, now it takes a little bit longer). Sorry, give it a little bit more time!

Reviewer: edward-prefers-brunettes (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

Hahahaha... thanks for the encouragement... (I reviewed before) I may have forgotten to add the part where I tell you that I LOVE your story!



Author's Response:

oh thanks girl, you are so so sweet. And I agree with your name, Edward prefers brunettes *is a brunette herself too* :)

Reviewer: tiffanypabst (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

OMG YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING!! Please! I just read the whole story and it is awesome! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!



Author's Response:

The next chapter is waiting to get accepted, so it won't take that long anymore for you to have your fic. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

Oh, I love your story....I can't believe how much!!!  You are a great writer and I can't wait for the next chapter.  You evil, evil thing ending with that cliffie!!!!!!  Yes, Yes, please post the next one.  No hiding under rocks, please!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, I'm out of my hiding position and I apologize for the end notes of ch 8 (an explenation is given in ch 9 -which is waited for getting accepted by my Twilighted beta). So you don't need to wait too long to read the next chapter. Thanks for r&r!

Reviewer: TheDazzler (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

i had to review again, because your story is just so fantastic

perfection. edward is perfection. you write him so perfectly, so real, so romantic. im cried with tears of happiness, it was so beautiful

thats the way every girl should be treated.

and fuck jacob. but we love his antagonistic presense.

 



Author's Response:

thanks for taking the time to r&r, and Edward is indeed (close to) perfection. I like to think about him that way, so maybe I'm a little bit like Bella :) Jacob will be around for a few more chapters but I promise that he will get the door in his face. The next ch is almost there for you to read it!

Reviewer: TheDazzler (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

 

if you delete this ill surely die, i cant survive without this fic. dont commit murder, i NEED my romantic, fantasy edward dreaming of Bella. Your third person perspective is beyond perfect, and i absolutely love your plot.

post more, and more, and more.

satisfy meeeeeeeeeeee



Author's Response:

Die? *starts CPR* Oh wait, I will not delete it, so you won't die *pffff*  I'm sorry for considering the possibility to delete it... I have tried to explain it in the chapter notes of ch 9 (which is almost up). I'm not sure about my 3rd person perspective, some like it, some not... Anyway, thanks for r&r! And I'll try to satisfy you!

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

Silly one... it's quality, not quantity... don't punish us loving readers :)

That dog owner better be Edward :)

Congratulations on the new place. Please post soon!

Author's Response:

*is silly indeed* I know that you're right about the quantity and quality thing, and I excuse myself for considering to delete my fic. Ch 9 is waiting to get accepted so you will soon find out if Edward is the dog owner *tries to be mysterious*

Thanks for the congrats on the new house, I love it here!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

This chapter really drove me mad! What is wrong with Bella?

The woman just realises that she not only doesn't love the guy but that in fact she NEVER loved him but decides to keep trying? huh??? Excuse me?

And Jacob is a jerk!! And if it was the case that she was afraid of being alone etc etc but no... there is Edward just waiting to make her happy and she knows it.. sorry but it just don't make any sense... It can't be insecurity. Not only that at least.

The worse is that there are a lot of women out there behaving in the same manner.. too afraid of change, to take an important decision... all trying to pretend they are satisfied with what they have because it is known to them. And known is safe! Absolute nonsense!

Wake up Bella! You are your worse enemy!

And please stop being bad and post the next chapter already!!! Please please??



Author's Response:

Hi Moni_M

I'm sorry I'm driving you mad with ch 8... and the way Bella is behaving. But like you said, a lot of people out there in real life, act like Bella. Hell, my parents have been together for more than 30 years now and I think they're behaving like this for the past 20 years... Although I wish for both of them to realize that you only live once and that happiness is something we all deserve in this lifetime. And it's not that Bella and Jacob didn't have good times; they had. but when Edward came around, things changed... or got clear and obvious!

I'm sorry for considering the idea to delete it, so i'll stop being bad and the next chapter is already waiting for you to be accepted by my beta. Thanks for r&r!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Lunch Date

I am always so anxious to read the next chapter that I forgot to comment on your use of third-person narrative mode. That is a first to me on Twlight fanfic. The best thing is the fact that we get to experience both Bella's and Edward's POVs at the same time. It is a very interesting change..

Ah! I also have to say that I love the fact that your Bella loves gifts! It always drives me mad this impolite aversion that Bella has towards gifts.... and also sounds so unrealistic. Please, who doesn't like gifts?? Just ridiculous, don't you think?

Last, I have an epiphany while reading this chapter. It made sad to realise how much time we waist and how much unnecessary pain and suffering we cause ourselves so often because we are afraid to expose our feelings. Instead we always prefer assuming how things will never work right...

Of course this is also a mechanism of defense, an attempt to protect ourselves for the "pain and rejection we know is coming". But my pojt exactly is "how could we know?"

That is why I believe the best thing to do is simply go for it and enjoy if something good happens. If not, well at least you didnt waist your time wondering and can move on with your life! I've tried it and works in practice!

Anyway, it was good getting something positive from your story. Thanks for that.

Monique



Author's Response:

Hi Monique,

I'm catchign up with your reviews too. I'm glad to hear that you're too anxious to read the next chapter, that's good, right. I've thought a lot about the use of the first narrative, but a friend told me that 3rd gives more opportunities so I use that. But I'm still not sure if that was the right thing to do since Twilight is written in the 1st narrative...

About the gifts: gifts are love, right? Me loves gifts a lot :)

And I agree with your epiphany, but that's just how humans work and live, right? Protection is definitely a reason to do so, and the fear for the unknown... Anyway, i'm glad you good something positive from this chapter! Thanks for r&r! Ch 9 is almost up!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 2: Pulling a Bella Swan -part 2-

Ohhhh this is a lovely version of Edward.

And I love the fact that you made Jacob a jackass! I never liked him and I hate fanfic that make the choice between Edward and Jacob a difficult decision to bella.

Now I can hate him freely and I thank you for that! haha!

(I need to get a life soon... as if I didnt have tons of stuff to do!)

Anyway, I have the impression that this all lovely and calm Edward will explode one day and give Jacob what he deserves...... Am i right?

Well I would love to see that!

All the best,

Monique



Author's Response:

*sighs deeply* Collide Edward is close to perfection and he is actually too sweet to be true, but a girl can dream, right? It was my pleasure to make you dislike Jacob immediately, it's always easy to hate someone and to love the other more (Edward, although we love him already sooooooooooooo much!)

LOL @ getting a life, me too girl, me too.

About Edward exploding... I'm not sure... You will have to wait and see!

Have a good weekend Monique.

Greets, Elke

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

DEFINITELY CONTINUE!! PLEASE DON'T STOP.

Great chapter. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you. The next chapter is almost there for you, it's already updated but it still needs to be submitted!

Reviewer: Leenie (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

Ahhhh come back!

I'm willing to bet a lot that it's Edward's dog. Grrr she needs to get rid of Jacob, nobody should settle for that!



Author's Response:

I'm back, hiding under a rock isn't the easiest thing to do! Anyway, the next chapter is almost htere for you, hopefully today or tomorrow!

Reviewer: dazzeled (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

please, please, please continue posting im enjoying reading your story so much!



Author's Response:

I will continue, the next chapter is already waiting for you to be accepted! So hold on a little more, ch 9 is almost there!

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

LET IT BE EDWARD'S DOG! HAHA!!! Can't wait for more!!! YES POST.

Seriously though, keep doing what you do, and don't let anyone tell you any different! 134 (now 135) reviews, you're doing something right!



Author's Response:

The next chapter will reveal whose dog it is *tries to be mysterious but probably fails miserably*

And I know, 147 means something, I will never doubt that. And like another reviewer said, quality is better than quantity *makes that my new mantra* Thanks for r&r!

Reviewer: anyajh (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

Simple: you are not allowed to stop writing. Ever.



Author's Response:

Not allowed to stop? *swallows hard* ever? *gulps for air*

*whispers in a tiny voice* Okay...

Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

why would you stop?  this is great!  i look forward to it, just kill jacob off and ill be totally hooked



Author's Response:

Because I was so insecure that it's ridiculous. I know, silly me. But I will never think about stopping again, ever! And Jacob... well, a few more chapters and we will kiss his ass goodbye!

Reviewer: youdazzleme (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

Aw. I hope Bella wisens up and realizes Jacob is all bad for her. Hottie music teacher Edward is clearly the only choice here. :)



Author's Response:

Oh Bella will DEFINITELY wisens up but just give the poor girl some time, rokay? Only a few more chapters till Jacob is out of the picture. But will Edward take his place immediately.... only time will tell! Muhahahahaha!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

What do you mean delete this story? Are you serious, or are you fishing for reviews? Please say you're just kidding, because I seriously can't believe you could write something as wonderful as COLLIDE has been so far, and then quit!

I love the story. I love how B&E met. I love how possessive and protective he is already with her. Please continue with this and give us the happy ending we all need. Hell, the happy ending B&E DESERVE.

More please!

Author's Response:

Hell there,

*blushes and is ashamed* I know that it was the most stupidest thing to think to delete it and I'm sorry for even considering it, but I hope that my chapter notes of chatper 9 make some sense to you. The next chapter is almost up btw... I know that it sounds like fishing for reviews and i'm very sorry that it appeared like this, but like I said, the chapter notes will explain that... Just believe me when I say I'm a very insecure woman, so insecure that it frustrates me enormously. And writing a fic and wishing for feedback makes me even more insecure. But I shut up about that now, I won't want to ramble you asleep.

About the happy ending: your wish is my command *wink*

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