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Reviewer: youdazzleme (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 9: No Way to Live, No Way to Love
I really hope that before all this is over that Bella finds out about Jacob cheating on her.
As usual, your story is awesome!
Author's Response: She will find out, of that you can be sure. More is about to come this week!
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
Yay Yay! I'm holding on and it's soooo worth is. Is Edward going to be Bella's Christmas present??
I can SO relate to the whole "my purse is my garbage can" notion - I love how you put that in... it's so real.
You describe Edward yummily! That nanosecond kiss was hot... what is he going to tell Bella??
Author's Response: Thanks Bellybean, for sticking with me. I appreciate your encouragement. If Edward will be Bella's Christmas present... i'm not sure but you will find out in ch 12! And I think the 'purse is my garbage can', notion is based on my personal real life purse :) Ha, it always takes me ages to find the things I'm looking for.
And you will find out soon what he is going to tell Bella, I've uploaded the next chapter already! Thanks for reading girl!
Reviewer: lifesaver918 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
That was so mean stoppinf there!!! I hope Bella breaks up with Jacob before she finds out he's been cheating on her. To find out while they are still together would just KILL her. Especially since she is so dead set on fixing things between them. I hope that in the next update when Edward tells her how he feels, she'll realize that he is her dream, not her compromise like Jacob is, and will dump Jacob's ass real fast.
Thanks for the quick and awesome update. Can't wait to read more.
Heather
Author's Response: Hi Heather,
I'm sorry that I was mean by stopping the update here, but writing cliffhangers is a blast actually and the reviews you girls leave me, always make me smile. But I'll try to behave in the future and not do it again; but I cannot promise anything. I understand your concern about Bella, and she tells you she appreciates it, but we will see how things go. Just hold on and you will find out.
I've already uploaded the next chapter and I hope my beta has time to accept it soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing girl!
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: Pulling a Bella Swan -part 2-
edward is coming off as kind of a pansy so far...i hope he kicks jacob's ass or something. :)
Author's Response: Eum... little bit confused here... pansy, that's probably not a good thing, right? (english isn't my native tongue). He will stand up for himself eventually, but the boy is too much in love to realize that. But he will, soon! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
TELL HER!! Actually, tell her to break up with Jacob! Do it nowww! =)
Great chapter. Update soon!
Author's Response: Hi dreampills, we will found out soon what Edward is about to tell her. I've uploaded the next chapter and hope my beta can accept it today. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
Awww, i wanna know what he's going to say! Can't wait for your update on the weekend! I'll be looking out for it! Thanks for updating the last 2 chapters!
Author's Response: Hi Natlee, I've already uploaded chapter 11 today and I hope my beta can accept it soon. And I plan to give you another chapter during the weekend, so it's an update fest this week! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jEnNn (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
WOO HOO ANOTHER UPDATE!
THAT WAS FAST
AND CUTEEE WITH LIAM. I DONT EVEN LIKE KIDS, BUT THAT WAS CUTE!
AND DAMN YOU WITH THE CLIFFHANGER!
LOL (IT IS A GOOD ONE THOUGH...HEHE)
LOVED ITTT
-jen
Author's Response: Hi Bami goreng girl,
I think you will like it when I say that there is another chapter coming your way (hopefully today) and probably some more during the weekend! Isn't that sweet of me? :D Sorry about the cliffhanger, but they are much fun to write :) I will do my best to not to it anymore but I cannot promise anything :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: book_lover224 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
ugh i cant wait for bella to breakup with jacob but im glad that she didnt just give up right away.
Author's Response: You are the first to mention that you are glad that Bella isn't giving up so easily. I really like that, that you agree with me on that, because love is something to fight for, even if that means you are sometimes fooling yourself, right? Anyway, I promise it will be all worth it in the end. The next chapter will be here soon. thanks for the shiny stars, love them!
Reviewer: jEnNn (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 9: No Way to Live, No Way to Love
HEY HEY HEY
UR GRAPHIC WAS ON THAT LAZY YET DISCERNING FICTSTER BLOG THING!!
I SAW IT AND IM LIKE HEY! ITS BAMI GORENG GIRL!
LOL
COOL CHAPTER BTW...N EDWARDS RIGHT, BOUT THE STAYING IN A RELATIONSHIP OUT OF OBLIGATION
*le sigh* I LIVE IT WHEN EDWARDS RIGHT
-jen
Author's Response: Hi Jen,
What are you talking about, about my banner? Tell me, what blog thing because I don't know what you're talking about :D LOL | bami goreng girl, I like it that you call me like this *g*
Thanks for the feedback girl and let me know about the banner okay?
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
ug. like i said last time, i really hate saying this but bella you dumbbbbbbbbassssssssss! god it freaking kills me.
Author's Response: *giggles with your comment* You are right about Bella and she will realize things very soon! I hope you will still be alive though, when chapter 12 is there because I don't want to be responsible for killing you. Be safe :D
Reviewer: Gaia (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
OMG!!!!! WHat a cliff hanger. DYing to know how it goes from here.
Author's Response: I'm sorry gaia, I hope you are still breathing and alive after that cliffhanger :D I've uploaded the next chapter already; hopefully it will be accepted soon!
Reviewer: bronzeandgold (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
AARRGGHH! I hate cliffies! The weekend better start on Friday ;) And I am pleading with you - let Bella walk in on Jacob and his other girlfriend. I know its going to take forever for her to get over the guilt that she's not good enough, blah, blah, blah...Needing some lemony freshness here ;)
Author's Response: Oh i'm very sorry that you hate cliffhangers, but they are so much fun to write you know! I've uploaded the next chapter a few hours ago and I really hope that my beta has time to accept the chapter today; so the weekend will start on Friday. And I will update another time this weekend, on sunday, do you like the sound of that? And about your pleading: *nods head in agreement* you can count on that! definitely. and lemon is lurking, in a few more chapters :D Thanks for reading and reviewing girl!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
hey omg great 2 chapters i love them it was so sweet with liam and em and rose liking her like straight away =]
Author's Response: Yeah, and another two chapters will be coming your way soon, promise! I'm glad you liked the Cullen family and that noone was about to kill Liam for the burb :D
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
Oh, that was a cruel cliffie. Beautiful, sweet chapter. I'm really enjoying this story. BTW, how old is Edward and Bella? Just curious.
Author's Response: Oops, a cruel cliffie, how dare I? :D I'm sorry for being bad and writing cliffie's, but they are actually quite fun to write. Thanks for your encouragement and your review. And about their age: Bella and Edward are 27-28 years old I guess (since Bella is a doctor and did her internship... I guess that end twenties would be the right thing to say.
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
Awwwww... Poor Edward... His heart must be pounding now. I wish she would find out about Jacob's cheating ways so that they can move on.
Author's Response: His heart is aching and pounding really hard! Keep your wish in mind, and you will see that in the close future, your wish will be heard! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: ashtreeha (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
aw man cliffie!
Author's Response: Sorry, but the next chapter and a preview for ch 12 is up already!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
augh you're killing me!
Can't she find out about Jake being a two timing whore yet?
Author's Response: Sorry, I didn't intend to kill you... hope you're still breathing though because the next chapter is up already, and a preview for ch 12 as well. Bella will find out about Jacob, definitely.
Reviewer: lisambb (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
Author's Response: Oops an empty review... is that good or bad?
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
An update so soon is awlays a lovely thing. Edward singing is even better and the babysitting date was priceless. Now you said that I have to wait until chapt 12 for Jake to get the boot? The countdown is on!!!! More please!!!
Author's Response: Hi Autumn girl, the next chapter is already up as well as a preview for ch 12. Am I good or am I good :) Ha, I agree about Edward singing is hot, if we could only see that in one of the movies! And I didn't say that ch 12 will kick Jacob in the ass, but Bella will realize that she has to kick him in the ass :) I hope you like the sound of that as well!
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
Are you trying to kill me? That's your plan, right? I knew it! AGH!!! Ok, it's been 10 chapters already! Bella needs to dump Jacob's sorry, cheating ass and get together with Bella already!!!! Man, I'm a teacher's aide in a Catholic school so I'm off this week for the Easter break and up until now I was hoping this week would go slowly. Now I'm eager for the weekend! Thanks alot!
Kathy M.
Author's Response: Oops trying to kill you? *gulps for air* No I am not... Sorry if the cliffie was too mean, I do hope you are still alive though. I know it's been 10 chapters already and I know that some of you are dying to see them together since ch 2, no make that 1, but give Bella and me some more time to come to our senses. Enjoy your well deserved holidays Kathy M. and I'll spoil you with another update during the weekend, I hope you like that! Take care!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
AAAHHHH! You left us THERE????? The song he sang nearly had me in tears, and Bella's confusion was so realistic. Just one suggestion....DUMP JACOB!
Author's Response: Oops, yes I did and i'm sorry :) But ch 11 is already up, as well as a preview for ch 12! And the song is a very sweet song, just imagine Edward singing it. About your suggestion: wrote it down on my suggestion list and will try no to forget it *winks*
Reviewer: Tweetiebird86 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
If you werent such an amazing writer i would totally hate you right now. Just know i am not very pleased that you just left me hanging like that...lol
Author's Response: Oh my god, hate me? *gulps for air* Should I be afraid of being haunted? tracked down? should I become paranoia? *is scared* Sorry for letting you hang on that cliffie but ch 11 is already up, as well as a preview for the next chapter 12! I hope you hate me less now :)
Reviewer: millie (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
what a cliffie. you stopped it before his revelation... :)) well, at least we know that the next chapter's going to be interesting.
thanks for the new chapter.hope you udate soon.
Author's Response: Cliffie's aren't so much fun, I was told... i'll try to not do it again. But the next chapter is already up so you will find out about his revelation. And there is already a preview for chapter 12 on the forum! check it out!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
Wow! Talk about tension......Wonderful story, now Bella has to find out about Jake's cheating ass and kick him to the curb...
Author's Response: Bella will find out, but give her some more time. I hope you liked ch 11 as well, and there is a preview for ch 12 on the forum - check it out.
Reviewer: TayMo (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
Ahhh!!! More more more please!!! I really like it. There's only one thing I'm not hugely crazy of, that's when Edward calls Bella "Bells". That just seems like a Jacob nickname for me. But other than that, I'm hanging onto the edge of my seat here!!
Author's Response: TayMo, the next chapter is already up and I hope you liked it. I've already posted another preview in the forum and I hope that will satisfie your needs (oops that sounded dirty) until I post the chapter on Sunday. Thanks for letting me know you don't like Bells, I try to keep it in mind but Charlie did that and since Bella doesn't really have a father (she has but he isn't around much) I thought it was nice to call her like that... But I'll keep it in mind okay? Take care!
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