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Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 9: No Way to Live, No Way to Love
It kills me to see Bella doing this to herself. Will she take those 'wise words' of Edward's to heart? I love the UST and the blossoming feelings between Bella and Edward. I resent Jacob for being a prick and for using Bella...cause that's what I think he's doing.
Author's Response: It will take Bella awhile to finally realize things but you already know that...
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses
So Bella is realizing that things are not right with her and Jacob. Is she going to break it off? She called it a waste...does her destructive behavior keep her in this dead end relationship? What is Jacob doing that 5th nite? Seeing someone?
Author's Response: questions, questions, questions... have you seen eclipse already?
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 7: Mimosa
Oh Bella! No support from her family, doing it all on her own. One of the things they teach you in med school is to not get close to your patients. That's certainly easier said than done. You don't want to be callous, but death and pain are inevitable. I'm sorry she had no support and felt she needed to get rid of the voices by herself...cliff diving. That's what Jacob was alluding to. So did she get some counseling? She needs to get away from Jacob, her father and all the negativity. Enjoying.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Luckiest Accident Victim
So Bella couldn't wait until Thursday to see Edward. Sweet! Oh and I do adore Grace! Enjoying.
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 5: McCatchMe
I love the UST. I wonder what Bella is going to do when she sees Jacob again. Did he ever finally call her? Enjoying.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Lunch Date
Poor Bella...she really has a lack of concerned men in her life. Jacob and her father. She seems so lonely. I hope that Edward can change her feelings and dump Jacob. Why is she settleing? She needs to become the rebel again! Is Bella ok? Did she just overdo it and faint?
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mrs. Jennings
I like Mrs Jennings wanting to kick Jacob's ass! LOL! She is feisty! Great character! Yeah, Edward be your charming self...the one that is concerned and caring. Bella will see. Enjoying.
Author's Response: thanks again!
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 2: Pulling a Bella Swan -part 2-
So what is Jacob and Bella's story? Why does she stay with that asshat? Edward seems sweet and I love how he's upset that Jacob doesn't seem to treat Bella right.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: Pulling a Bella Swan
'Pulling a Bella'...yeah I understand that statement...but Jacob seems to be an asshat. It was nice that Edward hung around to see if Bella was ok. It would awful to hit someone like that and hurt them badly. Liked this first chapter will read on.
Author's Response: thanks for all the amazing reviews!
Reviewer: Bookaholic Girl (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 18: Need versus Want
-*is speechless*
Author's Response: I hope you recovered from the shock...
Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
Really great story.....
I'm particularly sad it's over but i understand.....This was a perfect end!
Thank you for sharing it with us
Author's Response: *blushes after reading all those amazing words* Thanks - I appreciate it very much and I would like to thank you for reading and reviewing. I like that a lot!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Positive
wtf??? ewwwwwwwwwwwww~ jacob is out boning some ho at the bar, and she's pregnant?? who wants to start a relationship with your partner pregnant from some other skank? fuckin' EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! :P
Author's Response: Don't give up now, you've come this far. And have a little faith...
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
What a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading!
Reviewer: LetMISAlive (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 1: Pulling a Bella Swan
Hi there! What an intriguing first chapter! I have half a mind to compare it to the PB version, although I think it would be a very long process! I like! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! It means a lot to me that people still read this silly fic, but I do hope you enjoy it. And I LOVE your username *le sigh* I want those good times back!
Reviewer: K8ers (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Lunch Date
Mmmmm.. Edward wearing Aqua Di Gio... when my man wheres that I go weak in the knees... if I met Edward wearing that I would probably pass out too. Or jump him. lol I am loving the story so far! You are a very talented writer.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. My hubby's fav brand is aqua di gio so you know where I found my inspiration :) Thanks for reading and reviewing - I really appreciate that.
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
cute story. thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Wow you've finished it already. Thanks for reading
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 5: McCatchMe
Well the story premise is very interesting and I do love Edward and Bella's connection since the collision. My only complaint is the quick changing of POVs is very distracting. I have a hard time figuring out whose POV is being heard at the moment. I know you want to let everyone know what each character is feeling, but it really breaks the flow of the story when it bounces back and forth and around like that. Other than that, the plot/premise seems great. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Don't know how it comes that this review slipped the radar but I wanted to let you know that I appreciate your feedback. I know that in this fandom, the Bella/Edward POV is more common than switching like I do and I understand that I sometimes is confusing. I write from BPOV or EPOV in my new chapter because I got that remark often. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: sarahstokley (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 2: Pulling a Bella Swan -part 2-
Author's Response: Oops an empty review!
Reviewer: darciesaurus (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
I loved it! Brilliant story. Well done!!
xoxo Dee
Author's Response: Wow, you finished it already! Thanks Dee, for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: darciesaurus (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 16: Loss
Jeez. I've cried in almost every chapter so far. This story needs a box of tissues warning. lol.
Well done, this far. I'm hovering over the next button as I type. lol
xoxo Dee
Author's Response: *offers you a tissue* I'm so sorry for making you cry so much, a tissue warning should be appropriate indeed.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: celtickiltluver (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
Loved your story!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: stupidlamb1976 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
I just finished reading this story.I really liked it and can't wait to read more from you.
Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm just uploading the 3rd chapter of my other fic, as we speak.
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
I just reveiwed 30 minutes ago but I didn't know I was that close to the end. Your story was beautiful and I loved it. Bravo my dear. Just one question (maybe a suggestion) what about marriage? They are married by the epilogue I presume. That would definitely be a great outtake for you to write. I just like having that image in my mind along with their second pregnancy, too. Just an idea for you. Thanks for story. You have alot of talent!!
Hugs, Stephanie
Author's Response: It's always nice to read more than one review :) Thanks for taking the time to read and review, I appreciate that very much. About your question: they aren't married in my fic, or I didn't mention it at least. I'm not sure about the outtake, it would be a good idea when I would have more time, but I'm more than 6 months pregnant and writing is rather rare these days, and I want to focus on my other fic and the final chapter for that one... Thanks for the suggestion though. Have a great week Stephanie!
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 27: Leaving a little bit of you behind
I was going to wait til I finished this to review but I have to do this chapter. First LOVE Glee!!!! (more than a woman my age should probably but they sing old songs I am familiar with very well!) I am reading a 4 installment supernatural story that Quil imprints on Claire as usual and Leah imprints on a new character, but until their said imprints grow up (which they do at accerated rates) Quil and Leah get "together" then find theirselves in love and later find that they have also imprinted again with each other. The author adds 'one in a billion chance of happening' So I like that you put them together again and it was funny you didn't use Sam as her husband but I like Sam more than Paul so it worked. Also anytime an author has Bella puking her guts out we all know what is going to happen soon, right? I didn't keep up with the time that past so I am wondering did she conceive when she didn't realize he wasnt using protection or when she told him not too? Hmmm? I was thinking then with the first incident that you would be writing in her pregnancy soon. (and the title boy or girl for a chp gave a clue too. Ha) Ok I will stop rambling now. So far I am loving it. (My only complaint is I am one who doesnt like Jake made out to be bad, so I wish that Mike was put in that place instead. Great, sweet, wonderful!
Hugs, Stephanie
Author's Response: I'm so counting down the days till Glee is back on. It was somewhere in April, right? *is eager*
I enoyed rereading your 'ramble', although it didn't feel like rambling to me at all. I used to read a lot of fanfic but I like some 'normal' and less 'fairytale' stuff, and I like pain in stories, because we all suffer in real life as well, right? Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing, I love that very much!
Hugs, elke
Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was beautiful they had two baby girls and an adopted son that was brilliant and really awesome :) i loved reading this so much :D
Author's Response: Thank you so so much, means a lot to me. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
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