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Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 2: Pulling a Bella Swan -part 2-

Edward is already seeing through the flimsy relationship she has with Jacob. Loking forward to lunch!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you do!

Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: Pulling a Bella Swan

Edward with a guitar and piano - sexy! Jacob seems to be an ass. I like this Bella and Edward already!



Author's Response:

thank you. I cannot tell you enough but I really appreciate the fact that you caught up and left a review while you did!

Reviewer: Cadance_Sparrow (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

Oh WOW!!!! Cannot believe I've not seen this story before now! It's absolutely AMAZING! Seriously!!!! Could not tear my eyes away!!!

I love the way you've written this fic, and the way you smoothly manage to change viewpoints so the whole story flows brilliantly! And I especially love your Edward!!!

 

xx



Author's Response:

Oh my God girl, you really know how to make a writer's day! Thanks for taking the time to read through the 19 chapters and for not giving up after the shitload of angst I pulled you through. Better times are ahead for this couple, trust me. And about my writing *g* Thanks a lot, you make me blush!

Reviewer: littletags99 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

Just started reading today at work. :) Finally finished but of course now I can't wait for the next chapter. Not sure I could wait two weeks for an update. :)



Author's Response:

*squeeeee* You make me so happy with this review, really. it's always nice to see that people catch up and stick with me after all the things I've pulled them through. I promise that happiness is coming, and I'll do my best to update soon. Thanks dear.

Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 13: Positive

Wait, Bella was going to already have broken up with Jacob the very next day after the concert, BEFORE she found out she was pregnant, and BEFORE her dinner with Edward - when she was going to tell him she was his.  What happened with that?  This is going on too long.  If she had broken up with him months ago, she wouldn't be pregnant - seeing as he has been cheating on her!



Author's Response:

Yeah but things got in the way. I think breaking up with Jacob wasn't top priority when Mrs. Jennings died, but she will do it, trust me. And if you catch up with ch 19, some happiness will be lurking around the corner for you!

Reviewer: yesyov (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

good.... v good.....I'm smiling here..:)



Author's Response:

*beams* Thanks, you make me smile!

Reviewer: melissapdo (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

Which ever suits you best, as long as you update!!! : ) : ) 



Author's Response:

Okay, I will do what I can :)

Reviewer: Lanemyer (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

AHHHHHHHHH I WANNA KNOW NOW!



Author's Response:

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU WILL!  Soon, promise.

Reviewer: Lanemyer (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 18: Need versus Want

Thanks for updating, going to read the next chapter right now.



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting, and for sticking with me dear.

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

Okay...so they didn't get together in this chapter..so maybe next one.  If not by the next one, I may need to get my bat.  haha. =) jk!!

Edward needs to explain himself.  What's the situation with him and Tanya?  They either are together or they aren't.  Sheesh, guys makes things so complicated..

Great chapter.  I prefer option B!  Minus the swear word...



Author's Response:

You won't need your bat dear, not after reading chapter 20, promise *wink* Happiness is coming, lemon as well, so I hope you're ready for that *g*

Edward will explain him, definitely, and Bella has some bigger explenation to do, don't you think?

More is about to come, as soon as I can!

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 18: Need versus Want

haha!  I love your options.  This sucked because Edward and Bella aren't together yet.  This rocks because I have hope and faith that they will get together in the next chapter!  Thanks for updating, going to read the next chapter right now.  =)

Bte, nothing is as good as Edward stripping.  hehe.



Author's Response:

You already know they they aren't together yet, but like I told you, it is coming. Chapter 20 will be all about them getting together, finally.

I agree with the stripping part *g*

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

Hey cool chap =] i like the new improved bella =]



Author's Response:

Ha I'm very glad to hear that!

Reviewer: WishingIwasHis (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

I just started reading this story today and read until I was here.  How could you leave it like this.  Please update as soon as possible.  I can't see Edward with Tanya!  YUCK!!!!  Please get them together, soon. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to go through the entire fic, means a lot to me. More is coming, just a little bit more patience dear :) And your wish is my command *winks*

Reviewer: Telly21182 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

Can't wait for some fluff and a nice juicy lemon!  As for updates - I vote option B, one every once in a while... I don't like going 2-weeks without your Edward if I don't have to!



Author's Response:

Thanks for voting and I'll do my best to update asap!

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

I personally think I would prefer Option B ... because I can;t wait 2 weeks to find out what happens next!!!!

this was great. bella is finally learning to love herself, and although edward may have been out and about it looks like happily ever after is close by. I cant wait for the lemons and fluff!!! :) both edward and bella deserve to be lovec and cared for and they can do that for each other. CANT WAIT!!!!

I love hearing that bella is finally healing. sometimes it's nice to see happiness where there was so much sadness. it me brings hope !



Author's Response:

Ha, everyone is having a different opion, I will see what I'll do. i'm going to answer the reviews right now and post the next chapter as soon as I can. Happiness is indeed coming closer, and ch 20 will focus on that. I hope you like the sound of that. Lemons are definitely coming, some fluff as well. time to move forward, don't you think? :)

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

Option B!

Great chapter. Glad Bella's home. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

I'll do my best to update asap. thanks for reading, and I so like the sound of 'Bella's home'. Because home is definitely what it is.

Reviewer: Naymee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

Gah! That Tanya woman always pops up when  she's not wanted. But I know you can fix it.

I have my sunglasses on and I'm ready for the fluff. Bring it on!



Author's Response:

Haha, don't blame me though, another reader suggested to bring in Tanya. You should blame her *g* I'm going to fix everything in ch 20, so you want me to post that really quickly, right? :) The fluff is coming, soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Naymee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 18: Need versus Want

I've been waiting for this and It was worth it. Well done. Even though we as readers think we know what the solutions are , who will love who and how it will all work out, you were good enough to give Bella time to work it out for herself.

I will now eagerly move onto the next chapter (Bravo for posting it so quickly!)



Author's Response:

Bella is definitely going to take the first step, like she should do after the things she has done (or didn't do) in the past. trust me, she is going to make that move in chapter 20. I'll try to post ch 20 asap. Keep your eyes open, happiness is coming.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 18: Need versus Want

Great chapter. Thank you for finally updating. Can't wait to read more. GO HOME BELLA!



Author's Response:

It took me awhile to post it but I'm glad that you liked it. And Home is definitely where she is going to!

Reviewer: kaila_xx (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

Awesome story:)

love it!



Author's Response:

thanks, you make me blush :)

Reviewer: kaila_xx (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 18: Need versus Want

Great Job:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

So can I come up with option C: Update everyday twice a day!

What can I say, I like the story!



Author's Response:

lol @ option C girl, I wish I had that much time to write and post, really :)

And i'm so happy that people out there like what I write, it's a wonderful feeling.

Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: Need versus Want

Loved it, and I won't say what took so damn long...seriously, loved it.



Author's Response:

*g* thanks hun, for always taking the time to read and review, you rock!

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 18: Need versus Want

that was an amazing and heart felt chapter ... going to read next onenow!



Author's Response:

thanks dear. I hope you liked the next one as well!

Reviewer: lilsabeth (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 19: Regret

two updates back to back i think! but if you update once a week thats cool too. 



Author's Response:

I'll do my best to update once this weekend, and hopefully more regular updates after then. thanks for reading and reviewing.

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