This was a great chapter.  Quantity and quality in their sexin'.  It was nice to have everything going right for them (except the missing condoms, which was kinda funny!).

Thanks for writing!

Author's Response:

Hihi, I'm glad you found that amusing because I'm sure that both Edward and Bella founds that annoying! Thanks for taking the time to read and review, and those shiny stars match my necklace and earrings perfectly *g* Oh and I've been busy with writing a four chapter Bella/edward story 'Sexual healings' and I'm sure you will like that too. Keep an eye on that if you like some sexual healings *g*

I love it! but shouldn't it be the Trojan Anit-Family pack??? Just sayin'!! LOL I hope that Edward Mans up and does not let her get an apartment of her own and gets her to move in with him. of course she will fight that tooth and nail but... so worth it! It could be naughty time all the time!!! MMMMM Edward naughty time........ Sorry got distracted there!!!

Author's Response:

Hihi, yeah they simply couldn't get enough of each other. We will see if Edward will let her go or not... Maybe some drama... do you like the sound of that? Muhahahahah :) Oh and don't excuse yourself for being distracted, I'm distracted all the time when Edward is involved. I'm always with my mind in the gutter! Oh and I've been busy with writing a four chapter Bella/edward story 'Sexual healings' and I'm sure you will like that too. Keep an eye on that if you like some sexual healings *g*

Holy smokes!  They certainly acted like a bunch of teenagers.  LOL.  Well, it is well deserved.  THey needed some fluff goodness after all the tough times they went through!  Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Haha, I like this review so much! I knew you would like some 'action' :) Oh and I've been busy with writing a four chapter Bella/edward story 'Sexual healings' and I'm sure you will like that too. Keep an eye on that if you like some sexual healings *g*

Haha, I should say I'm surprised, but I've always gotten along best with people who share my stubborness and impatientness =P

I'm glad that you appreciated my honesty, even if I did make it known that I loathed Bella for most of the story. Loved the story, even if I didn't love Bella. ;)

Author's Response:

Well, it's probably the bad combination of both those characteristics that make people like you so much :) And honesty is the best policy :) I've uploaded the next chapter a few days ago already and still no update :(

Thanks for updating, loved it. You are...awesome.

Author's Response:

*blushes* Thanks. I'm uploading ch 21 tonight, hopefully it's up soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Hahah I was reading the responses from all the other times I've reviewed the story, and each time I opened a new one I was like, "I just want to see what she said about the last review!" I'm about as impatient as I am stubborn, a pretty horrible combination when paired with my sarcasm. =P

At one point I asked myself the same question, about why I was still reading when it just made me mad, but to be honest I love the story/your writing I just hate Bella. Does that make sense? Haven't you ever read a book where you love everyone and everything in it except for one person? That's how I feel about this story which is why I keep reading even though it makes me made. =D

I have to say though, I very rarely tend to stop in the middle of a chapter to start a review, I've done it before, but I generally just wait... I couldn't though, I was sitting reading and bouncing up and down so I gave in to the urge. 

And thank you, I did indeed make it out the door in time. 

Author's Response:

Hi K!

Ha a stubborn and impatient chica, that's a very nice combination. Can I confess something? If my boyfriend would reply to you he would say 'my girl is as stubborn and impatient as you are' *giggles* Yeah, I'm stubborn and very impatient :) so great minds think/are alike :)

I really appreciate it that you're so honest with me, really. I cannot tell you how much I appreciate it but just know it's a lot. I do hope that at a certain point your hate towards Bella will decrease a little, just a little, although that's probably asked too much since you're such a stubborn girl :)

Anyway, I'm going to upload the next chapter tonight or tomorrow :) Hopefully it will be accepted soon. Hugs x

I just found this story and I real like it!  I hope that Edward runs into me with a bike.  It's nice to see Edward as a real person with an average job instead of a trust fund baby sitting on his pile of cash to throw at Bella.  I also think this is the first story that I've read where Bella is a doctor when Edward isn't, so that's nice as well.

Thanks for writing!

 

Author's Response:

*blushes after reading your comment* I'm writing the next very long chapter and I hope my beta has some time to take a look at it later tomorrow, so I can upload it here *crosses fingers* Nah, Edward isn't rich and spoiled here, he is just an average guy with a more than handsome face :) Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!

I'm so glad they got over the awkward Tanya moment and finally got to be together as they were meant to be.

Author's Response:

Yeah no more awkward Tanya moments in this fic! Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

Eww. Is it ohkay for me to say that? Ew. I'm sorry if i offend you, but Jacob Black is so... so.... so repulsing. I love your story so far, and i'm sure he won't really an ass-stick to Bella later on in the story, but he's annoying in this chapter...

But other than that, I like it :] It's very mood-changing, and i find that very exciting. It goes from desperation (Bella trying to get to work) to realization (when she gets hit) to confusion (how the paramedics know bella and how edward's wondering how his got injured) to friendliness (Bella and Edward conversating) to.. ugh. Repulsion (When Edward finds Jacob repulsing)

 

I'm sorry if this too long for you. But i had a lot of thoughts on this chapter ;]

Author's Response:

it's definitely okay to say eew andleave long reviews, I don't mind at all, really. bring it on. Jake is indeed a bit disgusting and not the proto type of a good boyfriend, and I know the black white distinction between him and edward is probably too... black/white... that's definitely something I would do differently if I would rewrite it. he will annoye you more during the rest of this fic but just remember, whenever you think 'what's taken bella so long to dump him' that everything happens for a reason. And when you're finished with the 20 chapters, you will see that happiness is already waiting for you *hint*

Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts, I appreciate that A LOT. Have fun reading!

MMMMMMM it is realy hot here today and some Lemonade REALY hit the spot!!!! excelent work! Well done!

Author's Response:

Oh jessicia85, this review is hilarious. It's getting hot in here... hihi thanks for reading and reviewing, more is coming!

That was great!  I read it on my blackberry in bed last night and then again this morning.  I am so glad that they are finally moving forward! 

Author's Response:

Wow, you read in on the little tiny screen of your blackberry and then again this morning? Wow, thanks a lot. And you even took the time to leave me a note? I bow in awe for you, really. Thanks!

Awesome! Is it okay to be jealous of bella even though she is a fictional character?

Author's Response:

Of course it is. I think that -at some point- we are all a litte bit jealous. I am, that's for sure.

YAY for edward and bella.. i'm glad they both got things sorted out.. i love the story and can't wait to read where they go from here.. thanx for writing

chasity

Author's Response:

Finally YAY! More of this happiness is coming my dear, thanks for reading and reviewing!