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Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: Leaving a little bit of you behind

hey another great chapter oooh its so great leah can be happy as well



Author's Response:

Thank you, Red Red Red. More is coming!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 27: Leaving a little bit of you behind

Exciting news for Bella and Edward, they are going to have a baby.  Absolutely wonderful for Bella to be carrying a child made from their love.  Glad Edward enjoyed his birthday present and the painting of the hospital walls.  Playing the piano for the children to entertain them.  So sweet.  After being there one month getting ready to return to the states, Rosalie sends an email stating that after all expenses their Africian benefit concert netted $75,000.00.  What a great announcement for Bella to make at the party.  Placed everyone into a momentary shock.  It's sad that Leah will be losing Bella and Edward, but she has Quil a new doctor to keep her company.  She really deserved to be happy again for all the good she has done.  Edward's reassurances that Paul is the one opening her heart and mind for the possibilities of a new romance and another love.  Bella and Edward both have the assurance that Quil will be taking good care of Leah.  Bella and Edward at the airport waiting to return home.

Sorry this story only has two more chapters and an epilogue.  But all things must come to an end sometime.  It has been a glorious ride from the start to the present.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so so much for your sweet and encouraging words. They mean a lot fo me. It's nice to hear that you enjoyed the ride I took you on and that you're sad it's coming to an end. Stick around for a bit more and I'll post the next chapter later next week. Ciao.

 

Reviewer: belward (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 27: Leaving a little bit of you behind

I feel sad about leaving Africa and I'm not even there!! And I have like 1 or 2 more presents but then I'm done, I'm surprisey ahead! And yeah love Glee especially that teacher hot damn!

Author's Response:

Yeah, it was indeed sad - I'm glad I could touch you with this chapter. I have shopped a bit today but I still need 75% of my gifts, but I still have some time left, right? And Glee - Mr. Shewster is definitely hot. Can he sing and dance. And I just love Bambi aka Emma!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 27: Leaving a little bit of you behind

You are not alone in the Christmas shopping thing. I think I've only gotten one gift so far and I haven't even sent out cards. Good chapter!



Author's Response:

*slaps head* Cards! I wrote the addresses down on them but didn't put anything on them - yet. **** We have a week left, right? And the shopping? Did some today but I have 75% yet to cover I think. But like I said, we have some time. Thanks for reading and reviewing and good luck with the shopping.

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 27: Leaving a little bit of you behind

amazing chapter! it put a smile on my face!

Author's Response:

That's very nice to hear! Thanks.

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 27: Leaving a little bit of you behind

That was great. I'm sad it's coming to an end.



Author's Response:

thanks, justafan. still 2 chapters left! another update next week.

Reviewer: zazzle14 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

congratulations on ur baby!!

when will u update next?



Author's Response:

Thanks.I'll upload the next chapter on monday or tuesday.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Just from reading the chapter and the subtle changes in her body Edward is noticing, I'd say she's pregnant.  Smells affecting her.  Breast larger.  Morning Sickness/nausea.  Exhausted and sleeping for long periods.  All symptoms of the first trimester.  At least they are in a place where it won't take too much to diagnois her condition.  Edward will be happy, but shocked.  Bella will be even more shocked than Edward. 

I am glad Bella insisting on keeping to their trip to Africa.  Edward is seeing so much.

Congratulations on your wonderful news.



Author's Response:

more about the stages of shock (or the lack of them) in the next chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for the congratulations as well. More is coming next week.

Reviewer: blainewad (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 6: The Luckiest Accident Victim

it's past 3am where i am and i still can't stop reading your story! i'll be utterly useless at work tomorrow, but thanks!



Author's Response:

Hi there! thanks for reading and for leaving such an amazing review - this cracks me up. I hope you had a good day at work though :)

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Congrats!!! I wish you all the best!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: stupid_lamb (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Great chapter and CONGRATS!! Hopefully it will wait until after Eclipse is out...



Author's Response:

thank you, and I doubt the baby will wait for 3 weeks. I think I will explode if he/she does :)

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

wow! congratulations! i'll take ur word on when this chapter was written; that sounds like fate huh? well, can't wait for the next chapter when they are told of the big news!

Author's Response:

it was written almost a year ago, when my sister in law was pregnant (it was written for a different fandom first you see) and after rewriting it for this fandom, I found myself pregnant. such coincidence_ Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Congrats on the baby! :) Good chapter! I think it's funny that Bella has no clue what's wrong. Silly woman.



Author's Response:

Thanks girl. More is coming soon, promise.

Reviewer: ownedbytwins (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Congratulations!!! Just tell the baby to stay inside until after Eclipse... :D Although by that time, you may be ready to evict the little one!! ;)



Author's Response:

i'll tell my baby, but we will see how it works out in the end. thanks for the congrats, for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

hey wow congradulations and i think that everyone is guessing that bella is eggo preggo



Author's Response:

Thanks for the congrats.More about Bella next week, I'll update then.

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

CONGRATS!!!!!!  :-)

 

Sounds like Bella and Edward may be due for some congrats too, eh? ;-)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

*is mysterious about bella and edward*

Reviewer: Katastrophe (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Congrats on the new baby!  And to be honest, I wouldn't wprry too much abou Eclipse.  My grandson is just 3 weeks old, and has already gone through his first 3 Thanksgiving dinners, his first Ballet, and his first movie.  My step mom, daughter, grandson and I went to see New Moon on saturday.  He slept through the whole thing, but he was there at 3 weeks old.  If you get a baby accustomed to having noise around him or her, then they have a tendency to be able to sleep through anything. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Katastrophe, this comment cracked me up. I'm a big MUSE fan as well and they perform in July, 1st, 3 weeks after I gave birth so hopefully I can pick my first concert then :) Thanks for reading and reviewing, and congrats on the grandson!

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Elke... Congratulations it was amazing!!!thanks for another beautiful chapter. I agree with what Bella said to Edward "We cannot change the world completely, but we are making a small difference. Try to focus on the small changes and know that nothing can be done, except little by little." In order to make big changes we need to start with small steps, if each one of us does someting to help then at the end we all be doing something big.

I still can't believe we are so close to the end, this is an amazing story and I'm gonna miss it, but each trip has to end were it was to end, doesn't it? I'll be looking forward to your next update anxious to see what is going to happend next.

Congratulations for the baby!!!I'm really happy for you and your boy. Do you already know if it's a boy or a girl?

Well as always hopping real life smiles at you...

Kisses. R.

PS:How did your dad's operation go? Hope it went alright.



Author's Response:

Thank you lovesurfer (love your name btw)

Everything has to come to an end and I don't want to drag things out, I think I did that more than enough already; i'll upload the next chapter on monday or tuesday so another update is coming your way. Only 3 more chapters left.

Thanks for the congrats on my baby, it's such wonderful news to share :) we don't know the sex of the baby yet, I'm 14 weeks and it's a bit early for that. But we do want to know the sex, so we're excited about it.

Thanks  for your kind words, I hope your real life is smiling at you too (such a beautiful thing to say btw).

My dad's operation went perfect but the results weren't all that good. There are probably meta's but the doctors aren't really sure yet and that is making us crazy. But he is followed up well and let's hope everything will be okay. Thanks for asking, means a lot to me.

*hugs*

Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Congrats! That's so wonderful! I bet Bella is preggars, too, huh?



Author's Response:

*lips are sealed* Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Morning sickness sux!!!



Author's Response: Most definitely! I had all-day-sickness!

Reviewer: youdazzleme (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Aw Bella's preggers! 

Congratulations on the baby! I am also a June baby- it's a great month to be born. :)



Author's Response:

I hope it will be a great month to give birth as well. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

CONGRATS!!



Author's Response:

Thank YOU!

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Pregnant Bella! Congrats to you both.



Author's Response:

Thank YOU!

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Congratualtions on the baby!

Unfortunately VJGM has taken Trust in Advertising, Boycotts and Barflies, We're going where and Parenting Skills 101. There was someone with out scruples who had copied Boycotts and Barflies and published it as a fiction story.

Loved this chapter and being a doctor and havign the bouts of sickness she did have Bella should've realized sooner that she maybe pregnant. 



Author's Response:

Thank YOU!

And thanks for keeping me informed about vjgm stories, I wish everyone was just honest and didn't copy others work. How can you life with yourself?!

She should have indeed, but she should have done a lot of things differently, right? Thanks for reading and reviewing, more is coming later this week.

Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little

Congrats on your baby (and Bella's)!!!!!

 

Trust has been taken off the site.  I love it too- not sure where it went.  Post if you find out!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

And taken off the site? Why? It was such a great story. If I find it, or where it went, i'll let you know!

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