Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2013 11:00 AM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
Excellent story really enjoyed it ! bella1
Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 07:10 PM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
a great story, I hate to see it come to an end=====good job
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 20: Second Chance
great, hopefully they will stay together. You are a very good writer, I've read lots of fan fiction and you are one of the better ones. Lots of writers are unsure of themselves, repeating words unnessarily and then sounding stiff. I know everyone has to start somewhere. Twilighted has some of the best written stories. I like yours because you don't use to much bad language. Some make Bella and Everyone else constantly use so much of the f-word and other awful curse words ======== A little bit goes a long way for me==I don't mean to offend onyone I'm not forced to read if I don't want, thats what is so good about [ choice ]
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for reading my fic and for leaving such nice feedback. The F-word isn't something I used much in real life either, so... And luckily, we live in a free world!
Reviewer: Kvampire_fan (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 02:21 PM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
great story!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 01:36 PM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
sweet story, thanks abk
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read!
Reviewer: avmbookworm (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 28: Boy or Girl?
ok, loved it. but is it weird that i got really happy when they named their baby annabelle? (that's my name too, and you spelled it the right way!) :-)
~annabelle m.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a review, Annabelle :)
Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
Ahhh...so beautiful! I wish I could have my own Edward!
Author's Response: I wish we all could :)
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Epilogue: Perfect Family Picture
group hug very well written thank you for sharing....xxxooo
Author's Response: thank you for reading! how did you find my story?
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 28: Boy or Girl?
another beautifully written chapter
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 27: Leaving a little bit of you behind
Nope Don't really watch T.V.
Author's Response: I watch series on dvd...
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 26: Little by Little
congrats see you are blessed
Author's Response: I am :)
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 25: Music for Africa
every thing works out the way it is suppose to may thr divin bless you and yours always thsnk you
Author's Response: *blushes* thanks!
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 24: Surprise
wow
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 15: Role Reversal
oh goodness
Author's Response: ...
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 14: My Light in the Darkness
I am a Biddhist thanks i lov, love love your writing thank you so very much
Author's Response: thanks for your kind kind words!
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 13: Positive
oh my please let this work out
Author's Response: you already know the answer...
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart
wow so wow
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 11: Bittersweet Symphony
damn damn damn
Author's Response: yeah, I know...
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 11: Bittersweet Symphony
sadness sort of
Author's Response: sort of indeed...
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 10: You Are My Evening Star
sigh....
Author's Response: *comforts you*
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses
edwards
Author's Response: my choice as well!
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 5: McCatchMe
cool
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Lunch Date
really WoW
Author's Response: *blushes some more* Thanks for the compliments!
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 5: McCatchMe
no answers to question but wow great writing
Author's Response: *blushes* thank you very very much!
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Lunch Date
yes very much so
Author's Response: Thank you!
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