Interesting story.  Guess u r never going to finish it since it's been so long...

Oh my God! 

I  love your story!!! Please please tell me you didn't give up on it!!! 

I'm  literally begging you to keep writing!!

elizabeth says bella never visited her in over 50 yrs? why not make it like she visited but only when she slept or something? 

bella joined volturi and she visited every now and then when she was off duty or something?

on one such nocturnal visit both bella and edward happen to be at her place, bella came for usual visit and edward out of curiosity? they meet there and then edward comes to know that elizabeth is his child.

there can be a chapter on bella coming to know that bella cared for her & another when she comes to know that edward is her father and add a little volturi and u have a nice story!!!

ROTFLMAO the Beast lives!

lol I feel a "Hi Daddy" moment coming

hm, the plot thickens, wonder if Bella survived

Wow.  I really like this.  I hope you keep it going, because I'm hooked now.  If I might suggest one thing, longer chapters would be nice, but as is they're fine; just a personal preference.  Now I'm sitting here scheming in my own mind how this is going to play out.  I hope the next chapter is soon, because I'm afraid I'm going to botch the plot in my own version :)

ok question is edward going to fall for elizabth or is he going to be reunited with bella and are you going to explain who elizebeths father is just wondering and oh i love the story

Sorry I haven't reviewed before now, but I just had to read straight through.  Could you tell me if this is an Edward and Bella story, an Elizabeth and the Cullen's story, or an Elizabeth and someone else's story?  It's hard to imagine that the fact that Elizabeth is Edward's daughter hasn't occured to any one of the Cullen's except in passing for Edward.  I mean, bronze hair, emerald eyes, combined with Elizabeth being Bella's daughter?  You would think that at least Alice would figure it out.  It's also hard to imagine that Bella hasn't seen her daughter in 50 years.  That doesn't seem like Bella.  I mean, despite the fact that Elizabeth is Bella's daughter, which is a bond that should have kept them in touch beyond anything else, Elizabeth is also Edward's daughter -- all that Bella had left of Edward.  It's hard to imagine that she would give up that connection as well.

I hope that you will give us some answers in the next chapter.  I figured that Bella was changed after Elizabeth was born, because she started burning, but who changed her?  How and why did Bella and Elizabeth separate?  And when will Edward get a clue?

At first, I didn't think I would want to read this story.  I mean I don't usually read Renesmee stories.  I like Edward and Bella stories.  What can I say, I'm a hopeless romantic?!  :)  However, as I read on, I became involved, and am enjoying this story so far, though I do have *lots* of questions -- more than I asked.  *g*  I only have one complaint, and it really isn't a complaint, but it's something I would change if I could.  Your chapters are short, and end way before I'm ready for them to end.  :)  But maybe it's good for an author to leave the reader wanting more.  However, if you wanted to make your chapters longer, I wouldn't be upset.  Go figure.  :)

Thanks for an interesting read.  I'm really looking forward to more.  Hope you post another chapter soon.  :)

Author's Response:

I'm going to try to answer all of your questions as best as I can (without giving anything away of course :P)

"Could you tell me if this is an Edward and Bella story, an Elizabeth and the Cullen's story, or an Elizabeth and someone else's story?"

          The answer is all of the above, though there isn't much to the Elizabeth and someone else. But there will be a lot of Bella and Edward :)

"It's hard to imagine that the fact that Elizabeth is Edward's daughter hasn't occured to any one of the Cullen's except in passing for Edward.  I mean, bronze hair, emerald eyes, combined with Elizabeth being Bella's daughter?"

          Like Edward said, "It's not possible." The Cullens don't believe that it is possible for vampires to reproduce, so they are a little skeptical (but you never know about that meddling pixie;) haha)

As far as Bella and Elizabeth, what makes you think that she chose to leave her daughter...

The chapters will get longer as the story goes on, however I'm just setting up the basic plot right now. It has been pointed out to me that they could have all been put together into one chapter, but I like leaving you guys asking for more ;)

And yes, the next chapter will be full of answers :)

Thank you very much for reviewing, it means a lot to me :)

Aw I was just getting really into it and realized there are no more posted chapters. I love updates and I know you love reviews so lets make a deal... You update really really fast and I'll review :) Sound good? I vote yes.

Author's Response:

Haha, sounds good to me ;)

I'll udate as fast as I can :)

oooo i have a feelign all hell may break loose!

Thanks for the new chapter.  Carlisle will probably figure out that she is Edward's daughter since he remembers Edward's green eyes from when he was human.  Also she is named after Edward's mother. 

I love Emmett referring to her as Bella Jr. 

Author's Response:

Yup, Carlisle most likely will remember ;)

Yea, I was writing the chapter and Emmett kept telling me that he wanted to call Elizabeth BJ (Bella Jr.) and you know how persistant he can be :)

Thank you for reviewing :)