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Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 13
i love this story, the writing is so sensitive and erotic by turns!!
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 8
i know you arerevising the story and just thought to make a suggestion....would it make more sense for edward to call bella his mate rather than wife when they are speaking to jacob about their engagment? just a thought.
Reviewer: Tootz (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 6
I am crying the same as I did the first time I read this. Love to feel their Love.
Reviewer: Tootz (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 (Jan 2012 edit)
So glad I found this story again. Am rereading it and enjoying it for the second time. Hope this time it is finished.
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 13
really loving this story!!!
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 13
That was SOOOO much better than the gyp of SM's fade-to-black, not that I expected any different. Even with my own, er, predilections, I was quite envious of the new Mrs. Cullen :)
Just how did the Volturi find out so fast? Tapping the telecommunications sattelite? Or does Aro have more "talents" in his stable? Looking forward to more angst ... <><3
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 13
Well I loved the way they found out together! Now I am so sad that Jane and Alec are coming obviously to hurt them or confirm the baby. You can not be giving their baby away.
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 13
I hate the Volturri. they suck rocks!
Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 13
:)
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 13
looking forward to more
Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 12
I am enjoying reading this story for a second time with the re-edits.
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 12
Besides the satisfying content, the style was great! All the snippets of convo were like leafing through a handful of photos, memories of a great day :)
Looking forward to the next chap, of course, but why do I think that their idyll will have an abrupt ending? Oh, because I know you, that's why ... Another good one <><3
Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 12
:)
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 12
loved the chapter loking forward to more
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 12
alone time they have needed this.
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 12
Nicely done.
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 12
Yay!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 12
awe! That was so very sweet!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 11
A review when I am travelling in Norway. But I wanted to tell you how believabel this chapter was, how one can see Edward fighting against and finally overcoming his block (the different position surely helped, no bad memories there!)
Reviewer: tu_luv (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 11
I read the first round of Aro's Heir and I am reading this round also. I must say that the story runs smoother this round.
Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 11
wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 11
squeeee they did it he did it she did it they did omg omg omg!!! I am so proud fo Edward and woot woot for them that was sucha huge step and they did very well they talked through they watched each otehr for ques and it was perfect TY TY TY TY
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 11
Good for them. My thoughts exactly - try different positions than the "trigger"-riddled one. That was beautiful.
Reviewer: merijune (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2012 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 11
So it looks like E and B are having some issues and then got over them. Good job of describing their trouble and then joy.
Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 11
:)
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