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Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 07:31 PM · On: Visions of Love (shabbyapple)

GREAT chapter!!!  I LOVE the story!!!  UPDATE again soon please!!!  

Reviewer: emasen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 - My...er...Their Big Day

that was very good i like how you interpret alice

Reviewer: EMX (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 2 - My...er...Their Big Day

ahhhh, this is so good. when will it be updated!!!!

EMX

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Preparations

Hi i'm liking this story and always checking back fro reviews - don't be discouraged by the amount of reviews; people will soon read and review honest :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the encouragement! I will definitely be writing more, I have just been in the middle of extended hours at work, and I just moved to a new apartment yesterday, so life has gotten crazy! I expect it to calm down now, so I will be back to posting very soon, promise!

Reviewer: minnesodagirl (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 2 - My...er...Their Big Day

hey- great story

i love how you start with the begining of BD, not 1/2 way through like everyone else

flaskbacks to earilier books maybe?

Reviewer: Kit_Kat_xoxo (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 2 - My...er...Their Big Day

OMG I love this story. Please write more. Will you be writing it for when Bella and Edward go on a honey moon and then Alice has to call them on the honeymoon? I'm so curious to see why she called!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review - I'm so glad you like it! I apologize for the delay in writing the next chapter - I'm in the process of moving - very stressful! I'll post again as soon as I'm settled!

Reviewer: Kit_Kat_xoxo (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 2 - My...er...Their Big Day

OMG I love this story. Please write more. Will you be writing it for when Bella and Edward go on a honey moon and then Alice has to call them on the honeymoon? I'm so curious to see why she called!

Reviewer: AbbyHale (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 2 - My...er...Their Big Day

I can NOT wait to read the next chapter, I love your writing.  Plus I'm a hugh Jasper fan so I love how you have included him.  I think you have done a wonderful job of writing this story through Alice's POV.  PLEASE update soon!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're liking the story - I will update as soon as I possibly can :)

Reviewer: AbbyHale (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Preparations

Alice and Jasper are my favorite, so of course I LOVED this story. You have a great writing style.  Please write more!!



Author's Response:

Sorry, I guess I missed responding to this comment - I'm glad you liked the second chapter - the third one is coming soon!

Reviewer: Leesh (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Preparations

Awsome story!!! I love Alice and you did a wonderful job capturing her character!! kudos!! Can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! It was very encouraging - chapter 2 is on the way soon!

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