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Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 13
*breathes a sigh of relief* You're awful! That was a TERRIBLE cliffhanger! Grrrrr! Just update or I may have to finish it myself. lol jk ;)
Author's Response: Hehehe...It almost done, complete with sappy happy ending.
Reviewer: Silvermyst (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Amazing, well told story! Hurry up with the new chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Last chapter should be going up soon. :)
Reviewer: ChoccyJoJo (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 12
Arg! No! Don't leave it there!! Great story, so please be merciful and be quick with the rest or I might have a little aneurysm of my own ;) x
Author's Response: Awww, thank you. Not to worry. Only two more chapters.
Reviewer: Corrdelia (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 12
I can't wait!!! I'm coated in anticipation of the next chapter!
Author's Response: Milk chocolate anticipation coating or Caramel? ;)
Reviewer: edwards emo bella (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 12
damn, pleaseeeeeeeeee update soon. lol
Author's Response: I'm actually working on the next chapter. Hopefully I'll have it in validation queue by tomorrow. Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: Jazz_man (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 12
cliff-hanger
nice musicaly accompaniment to very baroque XD
Thanks for the new chapter
Author's Response: :) Welcome.
Reviewer: Powered by 23 Kicks (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 3
Just a quick note to let you know I'm liking what I've read so far. This is quite different reading from the perspective of a non-canon character, but I like Christine's take on Edward and Bella (and Nessie).
Hmmm, just who is this new vampire? (Daniel seems like a vampire, I remember Edward having these same twitchy symptoms of discomfort.)
I'll have to read in stop-and-starts, but I'll be back. Strong, evocative writing!
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 12
oh no!!!! don't tell me she is going to die and it end badly!!!! good chapter, your leaving me hanging! hurry with the next one please!
Author's Response: Thank you for all the reviews! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll let you off the hook and tell you that no, she doesn't die. :)
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 11
Nice twist!!! Didn't expect that! :)
Reviewer: acquareader (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 12
I compleatly am in love with your story it is AWSOME (i know how u like that word) and the idea of the brain tumer you blew me off and even though it was a suprise it was like totally awsome... BTW how many chapters more? and please try to post it up soon me along with all the other fans are waiting 4 it but... no preshure, :)
Author's Response: Only two more chapters, I think, and an epilogue. I'm so glad you're enjoying. :)
Reviewer: insomnia_reader (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
You are insanely evil, but a fairly fantastic writer... but still insanely evil!!!
(I mean evil in a good way...ish)
Author's Response: Muahahahaha...
Thank you. :) I revel in my new evil-ish title. But I will fix it soon.
Reviewer: acquareader (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 12
who cares it its short as long as u get the next one up as fast as this one because i was so :) when i saw it there...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll get the next chapter up as soon as I can. :)
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 10
A good chapter!!!
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 9
Wow! That was a good chapter! Can't wait to see what this danger is and why!
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 8
I am glad to see something of her brother! Can't wait to get to the stalker part and how they plan on getting him! I cracked up when you bput in there about the "Harry Potter, boy ,Rob something or other" that made my day! I needed a good little laugh!!!! Plus the little bit of irony was good as well!
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 7
I am so loving the story!!! Though I am a little dissappointed that it seems so close to the orginial with exception of a few new characters. I am still waiting for it to get to the point of the stalker.
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 12
oh no!!! please don't die! it would be cool if we could read someone else's POV, while Christine is unconcious, maybe Daniel or Nessie's.
i love your story! i've said it before but i just had to say it again.
Author's Response: I'm considering a Daniel POV, mostly because I really want to get into his head. Thank you for the awesome review. :)
Reviewer: twilight_writer1220 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 12
I don't like it when you leave it like that, just joking there. I am sure poor Nessie is going to feel so bad about this. Loved the chapter just like all the other ones, this is killing me that the story is in its final chapters. Can't wait to see how it end, but I am sure it will be just as amazing!
Author's Response: :) I haven't done a lot of cliff hangers, but I decided to do this one. Can't wait to ge this one finished up. :)
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 12
Okay, I know you aren't going to let her die, so I will not let myself be upset about the cliffhanger. You aren't letting her die, are you? That would crush me! I love the whole Chris/Daniel relationship! This whole story is beautiful and I'm going to miss it when it comes to an end! This was another fabulous chapter - as always!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I am a member of the Happy Endings Anonymous, so don't worry. :)
Reviewer: Twilight Seductress (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 12
Great chapter, completely love your story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Love you for reviewing!
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 6
hehehe. I am rooting for Chrissy and Daniel!!!! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 5
ok, so I was expecting a little more info. Why is this man after Chrissy and how did it get that far?
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oh dear. NOT GOOD! Stop being evil!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Muahahahahha...
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 4
I am glad to see a start in Chrissy's past. I can't wait to see what all happened and brought on the stalker!
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 3
I am still enjoying your story, I am wondering if you are going where I think you are with Chrissy, but we will have to see. I am not fond of how you have Edward having laughing fits and such!! I figured you would have him composed and in control. So, far sometimes he seems like an idiot because he is laughing so much.
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