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Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Stare Down at La Bella Italia
Great chapter! Bella is awesome in this story. I love it when she's not all head-over-heels right away. And I like how you made her circle of friends less annoying and more appealing. Cute banter!
Very curious to find our what is up with Edward - especially his thoughts on Bella.
Hope you can update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Stare Down at La Bella Italia
I loved the stare down, especially the internal monologue Bella had going. I got a good laugh out of that :-). Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Hopefully the next part will be up soon.
Reviewer: noel presh (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 01:45 AM · On: SWCIFD
This has been a fun read so far and I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops. I loved the line, I’ll just have to be careful to avoid calling him Bro, and I should be fine - cracked me up. Thanks!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Stare Down at La Bella Italia
i love this story!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 06:08 PM · On: SWCIFD
I think I like this ;) I'm definitely looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks, hopefully the next chapter will be validated soon.
Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 04:47 AM · On: New Bella
xD xD xD yeah defo too much to tell a guy freind but funni! i lyk this bella she's much more fun than the other one's.
Team Chuck!!!!! xD
you rock seriously this is a giggle!
xox
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 10:08 PM · On: SWCIFD
I love it. When do we get mor Bella / Edward interaction.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Soon, I promise.
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 02:52 PM · On: SWCIFD
You know, normally I can't stand Jessica but here she doesn't seem so bad. Tolerable in fact.
I can't wait til we get some Bella/Cullen interaction! =)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks.
Yeah, at some point they're actually going to have a real conversation ;)
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 06:07 AM · On: SWCIFD
Interesting! Love Bella!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 05:55 AM · On: New Bella
HAHA!! Jake got a little excited with the visual of bella in a tank top and underwear!!
Author's Response: lol Yes, yes he did.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 05:42 AM · On: New Town, New School
Nice start! Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 06:10 PM · On: New Bella
I cant wait til he breaks her arm!
Author's Response: lol Should be a good time :)
Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 10:49 AM · On: New Bella
Very funny.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 08:12 AM · On: New Bella
This chapter brought the LOLs. I loved the line about speaking about herself in the third person because I hate it when people do that. I'm anxious for a little E/B action and this arm break you have teased us about. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I've never actually met someone who does that. Edward will actually appear in the next chapter, but the E/B might take a while.
Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 08:08 AM · On: New Bella
need more.
Author's Response: lol Hopefully soon :)
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 07:47 AM · On: New Bella
Ok, this is a very interesting story! I really like your Bella - all snarky but well-meaning. :)
Curious as to whether Jake is feeling more than friendly towards her (I'm thinking he is) and even more curious to know what Edward's up to ...
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
He's got a bit of a thing for her yeah, and Edward... well, more will be explained once he's really in the story.
Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 06:39 AM · On: New Bella
mmyes more please
Author's Response: Hopefull it'll be done soon :)
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 10:38 AM · On: New Town, New School
Should be interesting to see how it will all go. I am looking forward to reading more. :)
Author's Response: Chapter two should be up soon :)
Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 10:16 PM · On: New Town, New School
I read your reviews and couldn't figure out why the heck everyone was wondering about Edward's avoidance of the sun...until I saw you have this marked as "all-human." Duh! Well, I guess it IS a myster then.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: lol Yeah, no vampires in this story.
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 08:54 PM · On: New Town, New School
oooh I like it so far! Can't wait for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 04:15 PM · On: New Town, New School
hm....edward, i presume is the 'weird guy'..GAH IM DYING TO KNOW WAHT HIS DEAL IS! is he like, afraid of the sun? allergic? thatd kinda mak sense? maybe? ok, im just gonna stop rambling.
good start!
Author's Response: Yes, Edward is the weird guy. You'll just have to wait and find out ;)
Thank you
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 03:10 PM · On: New Town, New School
Great start and very well written. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
The next part should be up soon.
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 02:55 PM · On: New Town, New School
I wonder what Edward's problem with the sun is? Definately an intriguing start.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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