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Reviews For Java Hit
Reviewer: saliri (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:18 PM · On: I Need You

yay, that was FUN :) ( and hot.. hehehe.. men who cook are ALWAYS hot ;))

 

but proposing while having sex is kind of a bad idea, isn't it? i mean what story are you gonna tell the parents, your kids....  :D

but hey, its just a story so it was fun :)

Reviewer: kimbo3210 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 02:23 AM · On: I Want You

Really good!  I always liked reading fics in 3rd person.



Author's Response:

Thank you thank you thank you for this review!

I really appreciate it! And glad you thought it was good.

~Mystic

Reviewer: RubyRed (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:12 PM · On: I Need You

Last chapter I craved coffee.  Now I'm hungry!!

In a lickle puddle of goo right now...

 



Author's Response:

Haha, hungry for more smut?

Don't worry, there is one more chapter to come!

Keep an eye out for it, ;)

~Mystic

Reviewer: Dazzledjen (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:19 PM · On: I Need You

Good job Mystic, You are enjoying writing smut aren't you? I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for sharing it. Just a side note they will need another engagment story to tell people.



Author's Response:

Oh yes, I am enjoying it very, very much, haha.

Maybe a little bit too much...

Hehe.

Love ya darling for reviewing. <3

Keep a look out for the 3rd chap!

~Mystic

Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 03:15 AM · On: I Need You

This story is so cute i just loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Keep a look out for the 3rd chap, coming soon!

~Mystic

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:52 AM · On: I Want You

After all the nights in the chat, I FINALLY get the coffee porn references....

And all I have to say is: GET ME SOME COFFEE! haha.

The last part with the chocolate and the uh huh....gosh, so messy but so fun.

Congrats on the first lemon! And here's to many many more!



Author's Response:

You mean, someone refered this fic? Or was it me? Haha.

Anyways, thanks! Hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the review!

~Mystic

Reviewer: Solstice (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:47 AM · On: I Need You

aaww that was soo cute!



Author's Response:

Hehe, thank ya darling. <3

Keep your eyes out for the 3rd chap, coming soon!

~Mystic

Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:23 AM · On: I Need You

Sooo cute!

Got to wonder why she was so hesitant to squeeze a lemon though. She seemed a little dumb when she kept asking him twice about stuff when they were in the kitchen. "Didn't you buy olive oil when you were at the store...don't you want to squeeze the lemons" etc. Obviously not or he wouldn't have asked her. Right?



Author's Response:

Thanks! And haha, yes, there's a reason I made Bella this way...

(I don't *cough* really like her...)

Sorry, if you're a Bella fan. :D

Anyways, I appreciate the review!

~Mystic

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 06:59 PM · On: I Need You

Awe Good Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

~Mystic

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 02:50 PM · On: I Need You

Awwwwwwww Love the ending..... PervWard + RomaticWard = Luv and Win. Such a great set of one shots.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

~Mystic

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 02:06 PM · On: I Need You

Ok, being Italian I hav seen a lot of expresso machines, but I never saw  one being everywhere like yours... Nice.

This said, those happy lovers you describe could be called Giovanni, Genevieve, Pilar, Helmut... I mean, they could be anybody, anywhere. Since you say you are going to do other sexy oneshots, why don't you try to stay out of AH classification and write whithin the AU classification? I mean, I'd love to see my beloved carachtes of the Twilighgt saga doing naughty things....

Ciao



Author's Response:

Well, for this set of one-shots, I've decided to do it just with Bella and Edward, and kinf of make a story out of it. Like my first one-shot, it was the first time they had sex...the second, it was the night he proposed to her..and the third is going to be during their honeymoon. So, I'm trying to create a small plot with these three one-shots. But thanks for your suggestion, and your review, I appreciate it. :)

And maybe I just might do something like that in the future...

~Mystic

Reviewer: Coriea (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 01:13 PM · On: I Need You

One continuity mistake I noticed: Alice dressed Bella in a miniskirt, but Edward asked her to remove her jeans.

I can tell when you start getting excited by your writing because you confuse your pronouns a bit, example: "she moved in and out of him" which really isn't possible.

Good story and good attention to the details of your story though.  Very expressive writing.  I enjoyed it.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Oops! Haha, I sometimes make silly little mistakes like that when I'm writing. I suppose I should go back and fix that, huh? Thanks for catching that!

As for confusing my pronounes...I'm not sure what you mean. That is possible, at least in my mind, when they are having sex she can push in and out of his uh...you know, haha. You might have to explain that to me a little bit more.

Thanks though! I appreciate your review, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

~Mystic

Reviewer: Dazzledjen (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 10:55 AM · On: I Want You

I don't think I will ever look at my local baristas the same, without wondering which ones of them have "closed up the store".

You did a great job Mystic, smutty but not over the top and now I need to go get a cup of coffee and some chocolate sauce............



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah, you never know what they might have done after closing time...thanks for the review Jen, glad you liked it!

~Mystic

Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 06:22 PM · On: I Want You

i love it.i never knew cofee could be so sensual



Author's Response:

Why, of course! Anything can be sensual if you just set your mind to it. ;)

~Mystic

Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 09:21 PM · On: I Want You

Coffee porn rules! Makes me wish I had an espresso machine... Great one-shot, thanks.



Author's Response:

Haha, yes, everyone needs them some coffee porn...thanks for the review! 'preciate it.

Reviewer: fanpire-4-life (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 07:35 PM · On: I Want You

this is pretty good but i have a question. wouldn't the espresso burn bella? that stuff is really fricking hot!



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah I forgot about that when I wrote this fic. I guess she didn't notice, she probably thought it was Edward making her that hot all along!

~Mystic

Reviewer: vampire_pixie_17 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 12:48 AM · On: I Want You

u idiotic, coffee obsessed, freak... that i love. lol. u r so strange mystic, but i still love u! loved the story 2! it was... interesting.



Author's Response:

Haha, thanks love. I'll take that as a compliment!

Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:32 PM · On: I Want You

This made me shiver, just because I work at Starbucks and I can imagine... mmm.  Our espresso machine is boxy and elderly, but I have a good imagination, I can pretend its shiny and smooth and curvy. 

This was so creative! Love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Hope you have fun with you espresso machine...hehe.

~mystic

Reviewer: RubyRed (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 09:01 PM · On: I Want You

Ruby Cullen sponsers....  Coffee Porn!

I think I need to get me a part-time job at a coffee shop, just for clarification purposes  :o)

Nice work on the first lemon fic here missy, keep it up

Ruby xx



Author's Response:

Coffee Porn = Love

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!!

~Mystic

Reviewer: LaBruja (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:22 PM · On: I Want You

She did it!  She wrote coffee porn!!! Yay!!!!



Author's Response:

I know! Aren't we all proud? Hehe.

~mystichearts

Reviewer: Mimzy79 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 03:10 PM · On: I Want You

I'm speechless. Didn't know you had it in you. That was amazing. Completely smuttastic. The last line might just be my favorite. Coffee and sex (you knew I was taking a break from caffeine this week, didn't you)? I loved it!



Author's Response:

*Squee* I'm very pleased that you liked it! Yay for coffee porn!

~mystichearts

 

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