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Reviews For Shadows of the Sun
Reviewer: jaceadiane (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Sorry To Burst Your Bubble, Bucko

LOVESS IT!! :)

Reviewer: mrsblackandlautner (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Outtake #3: Bella POV

I LOVE it. It almost made me cry on the touching parts -- especially about the ring that sayd i'll be there! So clever. Please do more outtakes! and maybe a sequel??

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Breathe In Breathe Out Go

Not Edward again. Will it never end?

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 03:01 PM · On: I'm Letting Go, I'm Letting Go Now

What a heartfelt letter from Edward. Just great.

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Happy Valentines Day Bells

Awww. Very sweet.

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:44 PM · On: I Won't Stop You From Loving Me

I am enjoying the story but it is kind of sad that Jacob will always be second fiddle. I hope Jacob gets his reward later in the story for being a great friend.

Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Epilogue: Shadows of the Sun

I love team jacob stories!  :)  

Reviewer: KwopKilawtley (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 10:46 AM · On: I Won't Stop You From Loving Me

I think the story itself is wonderful. And since I'm team Jacob, I'm so stoked about this one.

The only issue I have is how fast paced everything is. From smiling, laughing joking, to serious, heartbreaking angst in .68 seconds.

I would love to see everything slow down.

To really savor what it happening with Bella/ Jacob.

So wonderful job, try not rush!

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 09:54 AM · On: Outtake #2: Bella POV

Aw, I loved it, loved it, loved it!  It is so Jake!

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Time Can't Heal All Wounds, But People Can

I am totally apprecaiting!  *Me appreciating*  :)  Jacob does a crap ton for Bella and he always just got beat down and ignored.  The second time I read through the books, I switched from team Edward to team Jacob, becuase he just deserves to be happy more.  I guess you could say I'm on the "bella is a stupid wench team" :p Thanks for writing, I am looking forward to reading on!

Reviewer: rebirthfry25 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 07:52 PM · On: I Won't Stop You From Loving Me

It's in it's own catagory! I love it!!!

Reviewer: rebirthfry25 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Time Can't Heal All Wounds, But People Can

I appreciate.....I appreciate!!!!!

Reviewer: saffy j (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Outtake #3: Bella POV

Aww, that was so sweet >.<

Reviewer: caimera (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Outtake #3: Bella POV

Sorry to withhold reviews until the end.  Thank you for writing this.  Very well written!  One of those that you don't want to stop reading.  Your Outtakes were great as well.  Honeymoon Outtake?  Pregnancy?  The birth?  You could go on and on....  :)

Reviewer: RisiePookie (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Epilogue: Shadows of the Sun

What a nice ending! :o)

Reviewer: RisiePookie (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:35 PM · On: I Love Everything You Are

silly Quil- butting in and ruining the fun!  *pouts*

Reviewer: RisiePookie (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 09:13 PM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

Yay for lemons- though I don't envy them having to get sand out of unmentionable places!  LOL.  :o)

Reviewer: RisiePookie (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 08:58 PM · On: I'm Letting Go, I'm Letting Go Now

Beautiful!

Reviewer: RisiePookie (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Happy Valentines Day Bells

Squee!  I loved how they were basically yelling at each other when she professed her love.  Adorable.

Reviewer: RisiePookie (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 08:42 PM · On: I Won't Stop You From Loving Me

Whoot!  That ending was absolutely perfect!  It left me aching for me... luckily for me, there is a lot more. :o)

Reviewer: Jeana (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Time Can't Heal All Wounds, But People Can

I hope you write another Bella/Jacob story in the near future;)

Reviewer: Jeana (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Epilogue: Shadows of the Sun

Loved this story!!!! :)

Reviewer: TeaWithLemon (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 05:23 PM · On: I Won't Stop You From Loving Me

I"m not sure when you started this story; I've only now found this website and learned how to seach for stories.  So, apologies in advance for my untimeliness!  But I am enjoying the pace of this story.  I do have questions as to why Edward left AGAIN but am willing to have them unanswered for the sake of the Bella/Jacob tale.  I like that they act their age, and are awkward, and that she's not over Edward in like two seconds.  I think in real life I would be TEam Jacob but it's the old canon lady in me that supports traditional pairings.  But I think B/J fic is way more intruiguing, like this one, because there is an actual conflict that has to be resolved.  Your story is setting up the future chapters nicely and I'm going to keep reading.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mycullenfantasy (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Happy Valentines Day Bells

Ok, this post answered my previous question, haha. I like both POV's actually.

Reviewer: mycullenfantasy (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 12:14 PM · On: I Won't Stop You From Loving Me

I'm just curious about the timing, is this supposed to be before or after the war with Victoria? I love the way your not making every other word that comes out of Jake's mouth a cuss word, like so many people do.

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