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Reviews For Shadows of the Sun
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Let The Moment Sweep Us Away

IM SO GLAD BELLA WAS FINALLY ABLE TO CLIFF DIVE,AND NOT DO FOR THE SAKE TO HEAR EDWARDS VOICE BUT FOR HER.FOR JAKE...FOR THEM.



Author's Response:

Exactly. :)

Thanks for all of your reviews!

I really appreciate it.

~Mystic

Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 01:01 PM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

DAMN THAT WAS SUCH A GREAT DAMN ENDING!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!! IT IN MY FAVS!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Happy Valentines Day Bells

That was SO........Sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

~Mystic

Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:18 PM · On: I Won't Stop You From Loving Me

I myself am on Team Edward,but i will ALAWAYS love Jacob for being there for Bella even when EDWARD(THAT S.O.B) wasnt.



Author's Response:

Haha, wow, I've never heard someone call Edward a S.O.B. Love it. :D

 

 

Reviewer: megs1313 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Time Can't Heal All Wounds, But People Can

I'm still reading. I'm anxious to hear where you're going with this. Do you have a thread going on the forums?



Author's Response:

Yes, I do, I mentioned it in the last chapter notes. It's in the Post-Eclipse board. :)

Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Sorry To Burst Your Bubble, Bucko

That was just awesome and freat and freaking incrediclbe!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm flattered you think so. :)

~Mystic

Reviewer: BiteMePlease (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Let The Moment Sweep Us Away

Awwwww.... I've been denying reading this story for sometime, thinking it would be boring and stuff. Boy was I wrong! I absolutely LOVE it! But, you'de better not do anything like make Jake imprint on someone else or I will hate you. Right now though, I'm pretty sure I love you and this story. Write more soon!



Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad that you finally decided to read it. That makes me happy. :)

And I'm really glad you like my story. I so appreciate you reviewing!

~Mystic

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 07:36 PM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

OOH, love on the La Push beach!!!!!

Love the chapter. Love Jacob. Love the story!!! :)

 

(and would LOVE more chapters!!)  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

I really appreciate your reviews. :D

~Mystic

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 07:21 PM · On: I Won't Stop You From Loving Me

I like it. :)

You've captured the charming, persistent...cuteness of Jacob - the way he is a cheerleader and tough guy and friend and potential lover to Bella....he is All Things! lol...wish he were 18 in real life!! >:>



Author's Response:

Me too!! He's 17 now, though, isn't he? (thinks so) anyway, that would make him only one year younger than me, so yay!! I don't mind a one year age difference...hehe.

~Mystic

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Sorry To Burst Your Bubble, Bucko

I love Jacob too. I don't know if I'm "team Edward" exactly, although I think that she can only feel fulfilled with him, because that's how she's wired...however, I have a running argument with my best friend about how fabulous Jacob is - how Edward was an adult and an ass, and Jacob was only 15, and probably dealing with love for the first time, on top of that worried that she was going to die/vamp out, and becoming a shape shifter....and he WAS a true friend to her, more so than Edward.

 

Go, Jacob!!!! :)

Reviewer: Edwardcullenluvr (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 06:59 AM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

Fabulous chapter, like always! Update soon please?

 

Were you planning on putting in the packs' thoughts? Like Embry and Quil's teasing?

 

That'd be funny!

 

Update soon!



Author's Response:

Well in this chapter I did do a part with the pack's thoughts, and I'll probably do more in the future, so yes. :)

Thanks for reviewing! I shall be updating soon...

~Mystic

 

Reviewer: abs (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:16 PM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

I'm TEAM JACOB all the way so I think ur story is great, I always wanted Jacob and Bella to be together! Please keep writing it, maybe it will change others to our team!



Author's Response: Go Team Jacob! Yay, I'm so happy I'm rowdy-ing up all the Team Jacob people. :D This is awesome. Thanks for reviewing! ~Mystic

Reviewer: NaughtyVamptress (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Time Can't Heal All Wounds, But People Can

First of all let me say thanks for doing a story about Jacob finding love. I really don't appreciate people who speak badly about his character. I too am a Jacob fan and I think he helps make the Twilight series what it is.

You are doing an excellent job so just keep writing and I know I'll keep reading! ; )



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

I don't appreciate it either when people say bad things about Jacob. I think the only reason why they do is because they misunderstand his character. So I'm glad you understand Jake as much as I do!

I appreciate you reviewing!

~Mystic

Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Sorry To Burst Your Bubble, Bucko

I think it is fantastic and just the way their relationship would go.  I do love Edward, but I love Jacob too.  I am officially Switzerland!  Jacob's story deserves to be told and he deserves happiness, too!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you think that Jake deserves happiness, because there's not many people that do. That makes me happy. :)

I appreciate you reviewing my story!

~Mystic

Reviewer: twijonas (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:54 PM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

excellent job you should make another chapter<33

i've always been team jacob.



Author's Response:

The story hasn't ended yet, so I'm definitely going to make another chapter. :)

Thanks for the review!

~Mystic

Reviewer: Lovelea (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:42 AM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

Oh wow! How perfect Jacob and Bella are together! Thank for sharing your writing talents. I absolutely loved this!



Author's Response:

I know! I've always thought they were a perfect couple. I'm glad you like my story. Thank you for reviewing. :)

~Mystic

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:30 PM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

The whole chapter was amazing ... as always! The ending, though, was incredible. I just love the way you wrote it. It was beautiful!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much! I really thought people would think it was over the top, but now I know it wasn't...thanks!

~Mystic

Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:20 PM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

Wow...

Author's Response:

*is hoping that's a good reaction*

Haha.

~Mystic

Reviewer: MissDRC (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:30 AM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

Mystic.

I
Freaking.
Love.
YOU!!!!!

From now on, I am worshipping you. I'm going to lay roses at your altar every day for forever!!!


Just kidding :) But seriously......Your story is AMAZING!!!! I'm not even kidding, you have such a great grasp on the whole situation!!!! I love it!!! I am sort of a cross between Team Jacob and Team Edward. I love Jacob, I love love love him, and I was--am--totally behind the idea of them being together!! I did SO pray for that in New Moon, for them to be together for at least a LITTLE bit, because while I do love our dear Edward to death, the whole Edward/Bella thing CAN get a bit annoying at times. That's why this is such a refreshing change of pace!! I'm definitely a Jacob fangirl, and I would be totally behind the idea of them getting married and being together, except if the story had turned out that way and Nessie had never come into the picture, SM could have had him imprint on someone else. That's the only flaw in the Bella/Jacob plan: There's always that risk that he'll run into The One and leave Bella alone. Not much he could do about it--what is he gonna do, stay inside his house like a hermit all day? Hehe, that could actually be kinda funny....*imagines Jake, hermit-style, with a long beard and shifty eyes* Hehehe......

Anyway, this story BETTER continue! It has become my brand of heroin!!

~MissDRC

Author's Response:

Aww. I feel so giddy inside after this. :)

It's these kind of reviews that make writing fanfiction all worth it!

I'm so happy that you like this story so much, you have no idea how much that means to me.

I will definitely be continuing the story, and I'm glad that it has become your brand of heroin. :D

Thanks!

~Mystic

Reviewer: wolvesnvamps (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:04 AM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

Very few stories make me cry and yours did twice.  First with Edward's letter which took me by surprise and sounded exactly like him. Then, this chapter ending.  You captured Jacob and Bella's first time beautifully.  This is one of the best Jacob/Bella fics that I have come across and hope you do continue it. There is still so much in their lives that you can play with and I am confident you will do it well.



Author's Response:

This review made me smile. :)

To know that I got a reader emotionally involved in my story really makes me happy to be a writer!

Thank you, thank you, thank you.

I'm so glad you like my story, and I appreciate you reviewing!

~Mystic

Reviewer: Jenn6 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Time Can't Heal All Wounds, But People Can

Very heartwarming & heartwrenching! I loved it & would love to see it continued!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you think so, and I appreciate your review. :)

~Mystic

Reviewer: lynncullen (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Time Can't Heal All Wounds, But People Can

Good Jacob/Bella stories are so hard to come by. And this is a great one! I loved this chapter! So sweet! Please keep this story goin. I don't want it to end!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much! I really appreciate you reviewing. :) And I'm so glad you like my story...that means a lot.

~Mystic

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:50 AM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

I really liked this chapter. It was so sweet. I don't think I could think of a more perfect way for Jake and Bella to have their first time together. :)



Author's Response:

Me neither! I'm glad you liked it. And it was most certainly sweet. :D

~Mystic

Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:48 AM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile

This chapter is so beautifully written - so perfectly done!!  {rounds of applause to you!!!!} 



Author's Response:

Thank you! *blush*

Hehe, I'm glad you liked it.

~Mystic

Reviewer: Ceylon205 (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Time Can't Heal All Wounds, But People Can

Yay! I'm reviewing, and also appreciating :D Seriously though, I TOTALLY ship J/B and I really do love Jake for always being there for Bella, no matter how ridiculously INSANE she is :)



Author's Response:

Great! I'm glad. :)

And yes, Jake is very tolerant of her, haha.

Thanks for this review.

~Mystic

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