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Reviewer: IHOWLATTHEMOONTOO (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 07:16 PM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile
He should imprint on me. A lot less baggage.
Reviewer: IHOWLATTHEMOONTOO (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 07:05 PM · On: I'm Letting Go, I'm Letting Go Now
CONTINUE! Jacob is amazing....
Reviewer: IHOWLATTHEMOONTOO (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 06:54 PM · On: I Won't Stop You From Loving Me
Fantastic job! I love Jacob Black and was always thinking why the hell didn't Bella take up the best most human course for her life. Stupid! Keep on writing and I will keep on reading.
Only thing is - never imagined Jacob swearing, and I cringe a little inside when he does. Haha we are a product of our upbringings.
Good Work
Jane.
Reviewer: TwitchySquirrel (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 06:35 PM · On: I'm Letting Go, I'm Letting Go Now
Continue!
Reviewer: TwitchySquirrel (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Happy Valentines Day Bells
I think it should be in Jacob's POV the whole time.
Reviewer: TwitchySquirrel (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 06:15 PM · On: I Won't Stop You From Loving Me
I am so glad someone finally understands that Jacob is not a bad person! Normally people hate Jacob for all kinds of different reasons, but I don't, and I loved this story because he's finally the good guy instead of Edward.
Author's Response: I have always loved Jacob, even from the very beginning, and so I have never thought of him as a bad person even for a moment. And through out the books, he has always been the good guy...people just view him as the bad (which is gosh darn stupid.) But anyways, I'm so glad you agree with me that he's a good guy. Thanks for reviewing. :)
~Mystic
Reviewer: TwitchySquirrel (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Time Can't Heal All Wounds, But People Can
Love it!
Reviewer: Lorelei Eve (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 02:50 PM · On: The Ups And The Downs
I love your Jacob. He's innocent and sweet and perfect :) I totally agree that you can be team Edward and appreciate Jacob... because I'm team Jacob and can appreciate Edward ;)
Author's Response: Exactly!
Thanks so much for the review. <3
~Mystic
Reviewer: Edwardcullenluvr (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 11:57 AM · On: The Ups And The Downs
good chapter! update soon! Babbon story was priceless!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :D
~Mystic
Reviewer: Charlie_x (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Time Can't Heal All Wounds, But People Can
Team Jacob ish mee!
:D
ty so much for writing this!
:]
giving jacob the credit he TRULY deserves.
Author's Response: Your weclome!
And thank YOU for reviewing!
~Mystic
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 12:19 PM · On: The Ups And The Downs
haha i like the baboon crack
Author's Response: I'm glad!
~Mystic
Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 10:29 AM · On: The Ups And The Downs
great chapter.
i really like your use of lyrics in the story
Author's Response: I love adding lyrics to my stories, it makes the story so much more...I don't know, emotional? I guess that's the right word to use, haha.
Anyways, I really appreciate your reviews. =D
Thanks!
~Mystic
Reviewer: jacklovessally (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 09:36 AM · On: The Ups And The Downs
great chapter. I liked the fight, poor Jacob. :)
I am really enjoying this story, please update soon. x
p.s. a very similar thing happened to me with baboons, there were no wing mirrors or window wipers on the car afterwards. :(
Author's Response: Omg, did the baboons rip them off or something? That would be horrible...man, they sure are wild creatures. *shudder*
Glad you are enjoying my story...and thanks so much for the review!
~Mystic
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 07:43 AM · On: The Ups And The Downs
Mike's an ass, Bella's "friends" are anything but friends, and I love Jacob. I'd hate to have to be the one to clean up the baboon poop - pretty gross. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Oh ya, it was extremely nasty. And it SMELLED. Haha.
Thanks for the review! I'm kind of sad that I made Mike a jerk in my story, but oh well!
I didn't really like him in the books anyway..haha.
~Mystic
Reviewer: MRSBellaCullenBlack (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 07:35 AM · On: The Ups And The Downs
I liked this chap!!! that's what mike gets for disrespecting bella like that...*tsktsk mike*...Jake is right bella shouldn't care... annnddd I can't believe you went to Africa...that had to be fun...did the cheetah chase you guys? I will love to go there one day...ok I'll stop now....great chap! keep it up!! and can't wait till u update!!!
^_^'
Author's Response: Haha, no, the cheetah didn't chase us, but when my dad threw the rock the cheetah yanked his head up and that's when my dad ran full speed towards the car, with all of us yelling bloody murdur for him to get his ass IN! lol. it was crazy. anyways, glad you liked the chap, and thanks for the review!!
~Mystic
Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 05:15 AM · On: The Ups And The Downs
This chapter was adorable - thank you!!!
Author's Response: No, thank you for reviewing!! :)
~Mystic
Reviewer: monique_pending (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Let The Moment Sweep Us Away
i came across your story last night and decided to read it. i'm usually team edward but lately have bee wanting to read more about bella and jacob. i love your fic and cant wait to read more
=]
Author's Response: Thanks for deciding to read my fic! I'm glad you like it..
...and I appreciate the review. :)
~Mystic
Reviewer: abs (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Let The Moment Sweep Us Away
I thought it was hilarious having Mike punch Jake in the head and then run away! Is Alice going to make an appearance? I love this story I always search for it. Keep writing I can't wait to read more of it.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah I kind of giggled at that myself. I've always thought him a little coward. :P
Alice? Hmm, I'm not sure. I think when Edward left, he may have taken the whole family with him. But ya never know, anything can happen...
Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it. :)
~Mystic
Reviewer: NaughtyVamptress (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Let The Moment Sweep Us Away
I am so loving this story and you are doing a great job! Please keep writing more chapters.
Author's Response: Yay! *does happy dance* Good to know I'm not losing any readers. Thanks so much for your review!
I will most certainly be writing more chapters... =D
Just as long as people keep reviewing! Hehe.
~Mystic
Reviewer: Julia Black (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Happy Valentines Day Bells
aww it's really cute. =]
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
I appreciate your review.
~Mystic
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Let The Moment Sweep Us Away
Loved it!!! I guess that technically I'm team Edward, but I LOVE Jacob big time too, and Edward is a wee bit of a know-it-all and makes decisions FOR Bella, which has always made me cranky. Jacob..just loves her effortlessly, without all the damned angst! :)
It was nice to see Bella taking back the cliff, so to speak....getting some closure on Edward.
More, please, more!! :) (and yes, your story is on my faves list!!)
Lori Ann :)
Author's Response: Oh my God, I know, I hated it when Edward made all of Bella's decisions! He never let her be her own person...it was infuriating.
But anyways, yay, I'm glad this story made it on your favorite list. That makes me ultimately happy. :D
Keep an eye out for the next chapter!
(hopefully by tomorrow or Wednesday)
~Mystic
Reviewer: MRSBellaCullenBlack (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Let The Moment Sweep Us Away
I am in love with this story <3...I just began reading it and couldn't stop reading it =]...can't wait to see what is next! keep writing your doing a great job with this story...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you like my story...I appreciate you revieiwng. :)
~Mystic
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Let The Moment Sweep Us Away
Go team Jacob! *waves her little flag* Keep up the awesome work
Author's Response: Yay, go Team Jacob! *points to t-shirt* Hehe.
Don't worry, I will. :D
And thanks!
~Mystic
Reviewer: sugypunk (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 07:12 PM · On: I Just Wanna Free Fall For Awhile
I just read all 6 chapters, and have to say I LOVE this story! I secretly pulled for Jacob a little in the books (even though I knew it would be Edward in the end), but I thought that Jacob was good for Bella. He was able to let her be herself and carefree, and happy. Without a lot of drama or angst (in the beginning anyway!) Anxious for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you love it!
You don't know how happy that makes me feel :D
Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it.
~Mystic
Reviewer: Edwardcullenluvr (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Let The Moment Sweep Us Away
Very cute chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I am the Master of Fluff. hehe.
~Mystic
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