Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 07:39 AM · On: There Is No Such Thing As a Prince Charming
Well, hmm. I'm not entirely sure I like Edward, Jacob or Bella. All of that, yet I'm still interested in the story. I suppose it is because I have confidence that you're going to pull out something that will make me like at least two of them. Right? :)
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Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:39 AM · On: There Is No Such Thing As a Prince Charming
I am really enjoying this story. I love the intensity of the characterizations for Edward and Bella. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
Make sure to check out the forum for next chapter's teaser :-)
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 03:04 AM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Crap what a mess, how is Edward ever going to get his life back in order again? Proposing to Tanya was a BIG mistake, you don't get engaged to patch up a relationship, or out of guilt, you do it AFTER you've figured out what you really want out of life. Anything else will just bring misery.
Unusal plot line, a great story!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:13 PM · On: There Is No Such Thing As a Prince Charming
Oh wow, poor Bella. And Edward feels bad but how in the hell will he be able to fix this? And it is even worse now after the run in with Jake!
Author's Response: To be honest, this is a situation that can never really be "fixed". What they can do, though, is come to an understanding and live with that. Both Bella and Edward are pretty messed up in this story, so I don't really think that the perfect fix is in their reach. Still, though, they will get their happy ending. I promise :-)
Make sure to check out the forum for next chapter's teaser!
Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:39 PM · On: There Is No Such Thing As a Prince Charming
This chapter was every bit intoxicating as it should've been. I thought that Edward would've had a stronger reaction upon learning that Bella dreams of him and says his name in her sleep. We all know that in everything that is Edward, this is always extremely important to him. Perhaps you could include this in a chapter soon? It's such a big confirmation that he is not alone in his need for her...she needs him too.
And by the way, I love how well you switch between povs. It flows beautifully.
Please post more asap! This has become one of my faves!
Author's Response: Thank you :-)
As for Edward's reaction to the dream, I had him being more surprised by it than anything. I wasn't planning on including it in further chapters (by that I mean, it wouldn't be important to the storyline), but I will definitely consider giving it a more integral role in the story. Thanks for pointing that out!
Make sure to check out the forum for next chapter's teaser :-)
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 07:59 PM · On: There Is No Such Thing As a Prince Charming
Ahh poor Bella. Oh well I am sure she will figure something out. Edward though not so sure... he has been sort of a umm well I guess stupid. I am sure you have something in store for the both of them. At least you ahve portraited tanya in a nice light even though she is blind to Edward's blunder. Please update soon. PLV
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 07:52 PM · On: There Is No Such Thing As a Prince Charming
damn, stupid Jacob, and come on Edward! are you blind!
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 07:49 PM · On: There Is No Such Thing As a Prince Charming
I want to hit Jacob and Edward. I want to cry for Bella and Tanya as well. Great Chapter. I also enjoyed Edwards POV. He is certainly hating himself for his behavior.
Can't wait for more.
Melissa
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm glad you like the EPOV, I love writing them :-)
Make sure to check out the forum for next chapter's teaser!
Reviewer: Twilight Seductress (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 12:19 AM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Great story!!! Can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Make sure to check the forum for a sneak peak of the next chapter :-)
Reviewer: dazedx3 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 10:09 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Yeah i'm still angry. well not angry per say. but still sad.
Update soon!
Reviewer: dazedx3 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes
I actually cried. God guys are such bitches.
Reviewer: misyeldv (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 09:28 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Can't wait for the next one :)
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 08:12 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Poor Bella! What was Edward thinking! Actually I feel bad for him as well. The proposal there at the dinner was a pretty desperate measure. At least he sent the text of apology, but I don't know, that could have been like adding slat to a wound. And why does Tanya have to be so damn nice!
Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 08:50 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
He should never, neverhad proposed to Tanya...damn
Reviewer: ali_vera (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 08:31 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Ugh! How can you leave it like this?!! I love it though
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 07:44 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Nicely done. Its okay that Edward is engaged now - it'll just mean more angst when he decides he needs to call off the engagement! :D
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 06:50 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
ALMIGHTY. HEAVEN. This is exactly everything I hoped it would be! Please do more EPOVs. They're addictive and intoxicating! And post more soon please! The suspense is killing me now!
Reviewer: CharzP (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 03:08 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
awwww! poor bella.
edwards so mean! loving the story!! :)
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 03:02 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Yeees, Edward. Feel the pain! *evil cackle* Your Tanya seems very sweet.
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 12:37 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
I am really enjoying this story. I fiction where I actually like Tanya (no there's something I never thought I'd say!). Delicious angst -- I can't wait to see where you take us next...
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 12:22 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
MY. GOD. I love all of this. I can't get enough. And it's only been 5 chapters! Please post more asap! I love it all!!!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 12:14 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Awww, so sad, poor Edward!
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 10:25 AM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Grrr, Edward, that is NOT how you fix things when you are trying to make sense of your feelings for another woman!!! What he did in front of Bella was so callous. I am anxious to see how he is going to try to right his wrongs. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2009 10:17 AM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Nope, not angry. Great chappie! *runs over to fanfiction(dot)net*
Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 09:17 AM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin
Well, I'm glad he's torn up about it, and I'm glad SOMEONE was bright enough to see what she was going through. I'm also glad someone had the balls to call him on what he was doing! That makes me happy.
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