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Reviewer: bcruz (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:05 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy

definitely worth the wait....i love it...cant wait for the next update.

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:03 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy

Cute!  I think Bella should take him up on those swimming lessons--that could be a real lesson in trust.  Very sweet of Edward to be able to put a twist on their first meeting so that it's now one they can actually repeat to others.

Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 03:53 PM · On: I've Got You Under My Skin

I just started reading this story .... and I was gonna read to the end but I had 2 comment on this chapter. WTF?????? Lmfao .... proposing 2 tanya .... nnnnnoooo edward bad, very very bad move ... lol......  I love the story so far ..... i'll read 2 the end b4 i leave another review now .... so i don't interrupt reviews from the new chapters..lol :)

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 03:05 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy

I really liked this chapter. I have the same embarassing issue with my husband. No one knows the real story of how we met :) Can't wait for next chapter!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 02:51 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy

LOVEd it!!!! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: IntoTheTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 02:44 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy

Great chap.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:43 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy

:::raises hand::: I can identify with comuter manfunctions.

Despite the fact that E/B have had wild sex with abandon and spent time together professionally this was different.  I like this chapter, it has an air of... oh, simple anxiety...a nervousness of meeting someone for the first time...a case of if you show me yours I'll show you mine.  Factor in an Anna and the King moment with Getting to Know You playing in the background and one can not help but smile as they embark upon the trail that will lead to their futures.

Sandra

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:36 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy

thanks for the update, cant wait to see next chap :))

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:19 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy

Ooh, methinks I see a sexy swim lesson in the future. LOL. Cute chapter!

Reviewer: laurenaked (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:14 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy

Hehe, I liked it.  Glad you updated.. & sorry about your computer :(  It WAS worth the wait though :)
-Lauren

Reviewer: gemma (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 01:11 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy

Most def. worth the wait! Fab chapter!

Reviewer: Twilight Seductress (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:52 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy

Good chapter,nice back info. I can't wait for the next chapter:)

Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Bible Thumping Whore

It was good but I think you should have waited and put up an entire chapter.  Everything in life that worth anything. . .is worth waiting for :)

Reviewer: Creative_Thinker (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Three Strikes

Damn! This is getting really fucking good!

Reviewer: Creative_Thinker (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 11:09 PM · On: You Dirty Little Mink

This is wild! Dirty and raunchy! I'm appalled, dowright flabbergasted!!

And I love it!

lol

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: dazedx3 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Bible Thumping Whore

love it as always. update asap!

Reviewer: AliceCullenTwin (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Bible Thumping Whore

I was a fan of Hindsight and I'm really glad to see that you're still writing amazing things :) Excited for the next chapter!

Reviewer: callmebymyname (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Bible Thumping Whore

Yeah it was short but it was sweet. Update again soon x

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Bible Thumping Whore

Loved it! I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Bible Thumping Whore

wanna post another chapter right about..now? i really enjoy this story, it has a different twist than the rest of them!! i love it :)

Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Bible Thumping Whore

eeeeeeeeeek

excitedly waiting for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Bible Thumping Whore

Okay so I'll forgive you for it being so short... If you update soon. ;) It was a cute chapter.

Reviewer: dazzled22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 07:59 PM · On: You Dirty Little Mink

way too short!  i expect the next one to be long and attention-grabbing :)

Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Bible Thumping Whore

Short but sweet! Can't wait for more..and good luck on your midterms..i know how you feel!!

Reviewer: Twilight Seductress (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Bible Thumping Whore

Cant wait for the next chapter:)

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