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Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 11
interesting story... will Alice go back to Jasper or will he follow her to bella?
I'm gonna floolw this story!
Reviewer: babbling_brooke (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 11
I am so glad Bella and Edward are "dataing" now! I can't wait for their relationship to take off...
Alice and Jasper breaking up just feels wrong... But it is nice to have Alice back in the story...
Bella telling Jacob off was WIN!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 11
Good chapter...Poor Alice. :(
Please update soon?
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 11
- Loved that Edward and Bella ate mexican and watch When Harry Met Sally
- Loved that Bella was going to hit Jake with the frying pan, threw is shirt out and sold the Boy George Records
- Was so sad for Alice that she and Jasper broke up but have faith that they will get back together
Loved everything about the chapter!
Sandra
Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 11
le gasp!! JASPER you better fucking make up with Alice or somones balls are getting ripped off!! -_-
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 11
aww poor alice
will she and jasper reconcile?
Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
Whoa. I'm stuck on the part of Alice and Jasper breaking up. That's shocking!
Reviewer: LuvCullens (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 11
Poor Alice! It's Alice and Jasper though, they will work it out. I am glad Jacob is finally gone, though I have a feeling he may be back. Am I right? Update soon.
Reviewer: Creative_Thinker (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 06:40 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
I'm looking forward to the next xhapter. I have the time so take yours.
Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 12:41 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
LOVE <3
Reviewer: SleepyValentina (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Three Strikes
Love this story so far, though I suspect I will lose sleep tonight still trying to figure out which STD sounds like Cullen.
Reviewer: stephie127 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:53 AM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
I'm really liking this story. and honestly one thing i really like is that you didn't make tanya into a heartless whore. but its a cute story and im excited to read more
Reviewer: dazedx3 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:37 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
moremoremoremoremoremoremore =]
Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:04 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
So sweet!
Ahah I love their "story"
Totally worth the wait ;D
Reviewer: Joico (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 07:48 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
cute cute cute....love the awkwardness!!! Can't wait to hear the stories....also curious how long this "taking it slow" will last. You can kind of feel "the deny" of sexual tension between them.
post soon....use a computer at the local library...*wink wink*
Reviewer: buli (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 07:35 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
So cute! Dating a swimmer, that's hilarious and Edward is that swimmer, they were meant to be together! Plus, the taking it slow, I just think that it's an awesome idea!
Update soon!
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:49 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
YAY!!! they're finally 2gether :) its just wat i was waiting for!!! lol ... can't wait 2 find out wat edwards most embarassing moment is :)
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:56 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
I need a longer chapter than that! ;)
Chubby Edward must've been adorable, but hot swimming Edward makes me drool. Mmmmm...
I hope to see some romantic swimming lessons in the future! :)
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:51 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
Yes it was worth the wait. I am truly sorry your puter died. I know the feeling, my hubby lost his and he had to use mine. We wach have our own. So needless to say his fixed. I am glad that Bella wanted to talk to Edward about Tanya and he was able to ask about Jacob. Please add to this wonderful story soon. I want to see where they take their first date.
Reviewer: LuvCullens (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:25 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
Cute story. Wow I really like Tanya in this story. I am sure there will be more bumps in their road though. Hopefully a few lemons too. I really like your story. Update soon.
Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:45 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
Is it weird that I can't even stand the idea of Edward being with anyone else? Your story of him and Tanya made my stomach twist. Weird. I'm glad they made up their own, new story.
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:41 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
YAY!!! love them coming up with a new 'story' - excellent!
Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:36 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
im leaving some love, because i love this story!! & you for writing it :) POST AGAIN SOON
Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:16 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
Very cute, I love their banter. Glad to see them talking...update soon! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:09 PM · On: A Lack of Buoyancy
Yes, yes, it was so worth the wait. Their conversation was so cute. I'm glad they got the Tanya/Jacob issue out of the way. I'm also glad that Edward is convinced that their relationship will be successful. I really thought it was sweet that they decided together what the beginning of their story was going to be. Thanks for the update!
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