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Reviewer: Twilight Seductress (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 12
can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: allaboutemward (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 12
Ok, the pool. What on earth does Edward have planned? I am excited that they're actually going to try the whole dating thing.
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 12
Maybe some lemony fun in the water??? Ah, a girl can dream, right? lol Love this story!
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 12
the pool? well.. that is an interesting turn of events... looking forward to whats coming next!
Reviewer: laurenaked (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 12
Hahaha. I would love to go to a restaurant like that :) Hope you post again soon!
-Lauren
Reviewer: Boom_Ox (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 12
loving it!!
update asap cant wait to read the next chapter...!!
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Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 12
LOVED it!! SO sweet how they are tring to take it slow and get to know eachother better. I think Alice is right! There i no way they are going to be able to not have sex in the next 2 weeks!! Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Haha, I have a scene planned already for that "no-sex" thing. I think you guys will like it, I laugh just thinking about it.
Anyway, thanks for the review!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 12
Thanks for your update. Um sounds like an interesting date. I wonder if Edward bought a swim suit for Bella? I sure it will be a very amusing swimming lesson. =)
Author's Response: Oh yes, it is going to get very interesting. Haha.
And unfortunately, they will not be skinny dipping, lol. He bought her a swimsuit.
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 12
So cute! I heart this Edward. Yay for swimming lessons...
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 12
The pool? Hilarious.
This was a funny and great chapter. Please update soon?
Author's Response: Thanks!
The pool should be pretty amusing...
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 12
I like that store name "Dicks" ,so original :)b
Reviewer: bacmel79 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 12
Everytime we go to the mall we park at Dick's and I get all 12 year old pervy. Who in the hell names their store Dick's! I can't even walk in the store without grinning like a moron.
Reviewer: babbling_brooke (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
This chapter was awesome, The best yet... They are funny and cute when they aren't being all serious and complicated... What a fun diner, that was priceless and there banter was too fun... Really, Great chapter... and I can't wait for the pool...
Oh and Alice calling Jasper "Fuckface" is just wrong...Funny, but wrong!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 12
haha our Chick's sporting goods was just bought out by Dick's - yes I'm twelve and crack up wtih Chicks before Dick's!
Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 11
ppor alice =[
love it tho! cant wait for more!
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 11
Very nice date between Edward and Bella. And yay, no more Jacob. Hope she got that key from him. Poor Alice? What's wrong with Jasper? Did he really want to end things with Alice?
Reviewer: Twilight Seductress (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: coookies_n_cream (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 11
:) Still lovin' it :)
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
*sniffles* Poor Alice. I can't believe Jazz said something like that! It's so unlike him! *sobs* It was going so well!
Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 11
aww, this story is so cute!! i really do hope that alice & jasper get back together, they have to right? update soon please :)
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh, I've never read an Edward and Bella story where Alice and Jasper aren't happy. It's a little depressing! :(
Still a great story. :)
Reviewer: gemma (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 11
Poor Alice. I'm a little more upset than I should be over their breakup. I hope they fix things.
Jacob is a douche.
Eddie is win!
Great chapter!
Reviewer: misyeldv (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 11
Hope alice & jasper get back together. jacob & boy george?? That cracked me up :) nice :)
Reviewer: laurenaked (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 11
Ah, what happened with Alice & Jasper??? I'm hoping we haven't heard the end of that yet. And I'm so glad Bella stood up to Jacob here, & took his key. He's a sorry bastard!!!! Good chapter :)
-Lauren
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 11
LOVED it!! Love "When Harry Met Sally!" So cute how he kissed her goodbye!! YES!! She got her key back from that asshsat Jake! Poor Alice! I don't think Jasper will be able to stay away from her for long!! Looking forward to more!
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