This is so sweet! I was waiting for the cuddle scene it had to be hidden in there somewhere. They are adults after all, however horny for lack of a better word. I agree with Bella about Alice's dumb bet. Such a bad idea. I love how protective of her he is already. :) I can't wait to read more. Oh and is Jacob out of the picture completely?

What a wonderfully light chapter.  Sharing their stories was a fun touch.  And in the end when she crawled in be with him....::le sigh:: I absolutely adore this story!

Sandra

it's so sweet. the tender moments are better than the prospect of lemons. edward is perfect.

I nearly had a heart attack when she was telling Edward he was a good person and he responds with "I hurt you, Tanya."  I'm guessing that was a typo since she didn't get pissed. :P

Loved the sweet moment when she crawled into his bed.

that chapter was so cute!!

gorgeous!

I love these two, they are funny together... damn Bet!

Loved their witty banter, and loved the last part even more. Sighhhh...

It's amazing how even without the lemons I find the 2 of them just perfect for each other and entertaining.

I think it would be impossible for someone to stop infront of such gorgeous man, I'm not questioning one's principle and $ 20. but damn ! How long have waited  for the chance to be with each other arms again.... 

Awww I knew Jazz and Alice had to be. I still really wanted her to ask about the "being with you is killing me thing" wanted to see what he had to say for himself. Saying something so horrible! And that poor starbucks guy :)I don't think that Alice is going to let them off the hook that easy. Can't wait to see though.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing each and every chapter.  That is very sweet of you.  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  I sent chapter fifteen to the beta today, so it should be posted soon :-)

Awww poor poor Alice! I got worried when Jacob showed up after Edward left. I thought he was going to cause trouble. :( So why would it matter if you lived on the same floor with someone and in a different apt but didn't tell your neighbors you had guests?!  I've never told mine I have guests coming. Seems silly. Is this something somewhere else?

Yes!!! This is the Edward I know and love....or wish I knew rather. I like your thinking/writing :) I sort of missed a chapter as I was reading so I just went back read it and skipped the review part. Sorry I couldn't help myself. I was too excited to see what happened next.