Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
In response to your response ~ I have a feeling you're not going to prove me wrong where Tanya is concerned! You're evil! Evil is good, I like evil! I am so read for this!
Author's Response: Oh. :D Hehe... well, I would like to say that my characters have layers (most of them anyway). Everyone (and I do mean everyone) is redeemable. Thank you for considering me evil though... I'll take it :D
Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected
Thank you for updating! I am hooked! This is a great story - I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: :) thank you!
Reviewer: ali_vera (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected
I like it. I am total team edward fan and the thought of bad jake good edward is awesome. Well written
Author's Response: Thank you I try.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected
Oh no, Tanya doesn't even plan on being at that sleep over does she? Things went very well for Edward and Bella as they sat talking. It seem that the guy has a thuing for our fair maiden. The cards aren't bvery well stacked in his favor though ... what with Emmett and Rose and Alice. I still can't shake the bad feeling I have about Tanya! You know, you could prove me wrong!
Author's Response: oh...you don't know the half of the cards being stacked against him...poor guy.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected
Good for Bella opening up and letting Edward actually see what's been bothering her. That took guts. Good for Edward for listening properly.
I love them both. Next chapter sounds like a doozy - I hope there's some set up of the siblings starting to think that Edward will be good enough for our Bella. A girl can dream!
Author's Response: :D I hope I can keep you happy. I've only known a few guys to listen properly. I based this Edward off one.
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected
oo i cant wait!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
I kinda like this - you get rid of Jake and Tanya at the same time! I know that Bella can handle herself where Jake is concerned. But will Edward be able to stay clear of Tanya in this story? I know, I'm jumping the gun. And dammit I was not even going to start another story!
Author's Response: *grining* Hmmm... we will just have to see.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected
I'm seriously drooling over here, loving every single word. Please post more asap! I can tell already that this is going to be a classic!
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected
Loved the new chapter! Jake of course is a dick. I loved that Edward came to her rescue under the bleachers. Their conversation was so sweet and intimate, definitely going to be some sparks there. So the sleepover? Did I read wrong or is Tanya the one Jake was cheating on her with? She’s going to be there? Should be good. Maybe Bella won't want to spend too much time in the same room as all the girls. Lucky girl get’s to be in that big old house all night with Edward. Can’t wait to see what happens. Maybe more talk of him giving her a “perfect second time”?
Author's Response: Yes...that is who Jake was cheating with. :D
Reviewer: TLP (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected
Awww! Edward shows his sweet side :D
Poor clueless Bella. *sigh*
I can't wait for the sleepover. Um, Tanya?? lol If last chapter is any indication, she'd better not wash her hair while she's there *snicker*
MORE PLEASE!
Author's Response: You made me laugh. and sure thing...it's on it's way!
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
i like it so far.
Author's Response: Hope I can continue making it good :)
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected
I loved it! Well, not the evil Jake part. She should've kicked him in the nuts. But so sweet that Chris got Edward and then Edward took her somewhere to talk. Love that she keeps thinking these things about him and wondering where they came from. But he was really quite sweet to her, especially with her confession. I'm thinking that the boy really likes her, but tries to hide it because of their siblings. Oh, things are going to get so interesting! Absolutely loved his reaction to her packing a bag to go to his place for the night. Too funny. Gads, I can't wait for the next chapter already!
Author's Response: Thank yew! It's not just the siblings he's been hiding it from...oh just wait... poor Ed and Bells in a few chapters
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
Very, very intriguing. Can't wait to see what's coming next! Edward "showing her his junk" cracked me up!
Author's Response: Glad I could make you laugh :D
Reviewer: Vullen (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
eeeeep! so good update soon.
Author's Response: :) thank you!
Reviewer: TLP (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
so far so good! Can't wait for the update :)
Author's Response:
:)
Reviewer: Syndie (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
Thx, please continue,
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
Oh! More Please! I can't wait to see how this story turns out!
Author's Response: I hope I can do right by you :) thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Bellasmoon50 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
Good story. Can't wait to read more. Bella and Edward sound interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
It is definitely time for Jake to be kicked to the curb! I don't like him, and youdo a great job in giving me a new reason why :)
bring on Edward!
Author's Response: All my characters are like onions... but this was for making me mad during eclipse.
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
I like this a lot so far but I'm not so fond of all the Edward-hating I mean clearly he's a douche in your story but I still love him and I don't know why but I despise Bella... probably because I've hated her in all the Twilight books. Anyways! Great start and update soon.
Author's Response: LOL well...hopefully you'll be able to see beyond Bella's POV there's actually a story I am hoping people can see outside of her view.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
Wow, Edward is a little forward. I think he likes her though and that is what all the jokes are about. Good start by the way!
Author's Response: Your observant ;)
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
goo so far i cant wait to see where this will go! update again soon please?!
Author's Response: Thank you and hopefully today.
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
Love it so far!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
Maybe Edward will wittingly/unwittingly help with a public humiliation for Jacob? Please :) I wouldn't mind seeing dye placed in Tanya's shampoo either.
Poor Edward already showing signs of interest in Bella's opinion, making her admit his 'junk' was bigger than two inches, ROFL. I'll be looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response: Not right away but he will, he hates Jacob. LOL Tanya is an onion, and based off a friend I had in high school. LOL I'm glad you noticed and liked that part.
Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
This sounds like it will be good! I like how you have written the characters so far! I cannot wait for more!
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