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Reviewer: samiam73 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Isle Esme

Bravo!  I really enjoyed your story and feel your version of Isle Esme was very tasteful and a realistic idea of how their first night together would have happened.

Reviewer: One crazy monkey (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Isle Esme

I loved it. Thank you

Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Isle Esme

Wow... your's is the best Isle Esme I've read.  Great Job!

Reviewer: ArchiVamp (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Isle Esme

WOW what an amazing chapter, you are far too critical of your self (as most artists and writers tend to be).  I really hope you update soon, you have a great feel for the characters and you would make alot of us twilight freaks happy by finishing up this story hahaha.... great work, hope to see more from you!

Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Isle Esme

Wow, this was an amazing "wedding night" chapter.  I've only just found your story, and you have done a wonderful job getting into Edward's head.  I can't wait to read about the next morning! Your lemmons were perfect, as much as I love a dirty-talking Edward, it's a bit OOC.  I think your language reveals both his adoration (and need) of Bella, along with his Victorian sensibilities.

Reviewer: jen280289 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Isle Esme

Just started reading your story, i think its fantastic! Great idea to write breaking dawn in epov, its great so far! keep it up!x

Reviewer: dspring (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Isle Esme

great chapter!  i think you did it very well. :)

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Isle Esme

I think this is the best Isle Esme I have read yet!  That last paragraph has me in tears!  LOVED it, loved it!

Reviewer: nibo (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Isle Esme

I started reading this months ago and was impressed, couldn't wait for more.  I was excited to see the update, and it was so worth it!  Please continue!

Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Isle Esme

Yay! You updated - FINALLY!!!!

OMG it was AMAZING!!!! I love this lemon, it wasn't too fast or too slow, it was perfect! Wonderful job! I don't know how you could've done it any better! :D

This has probably got to be the hardest part to write from Breaking Dawn (the honeymoon), CONGRATS!!!! :D

I can't wait for more! This was so worth the wait, but please don't take so long for the nest one! Please! :D

I love how Edward's so thoughtful and how he reasons with himself to be able to do this! The human inside him taking control in the water and the vampire part not knowing was to do was amazing! OMG I love Edward! :D

Please, update soon! :D



Author's Response:

You're absolutely right that this was the hardest one to write, which is why it took me so long. The pre-writing stages of the midnight seduction and blue room scenes are coming along much better and faster than Isle Esme. Thank you so much for reviewing, it's so encouraging to read that people enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: AndraLee (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Isle Esme

Awesome!

Reviewer: badazzles (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Isle Esme

Damn... That was intense.. Worth the wait? yep.. I'm glad that you showed it was about love and not something porn..ugh....  So please keep writting and I'll keep reading...

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Isle Esme

Absolutely. It sounds amazingly right. I myself am experimenting with lemons (when they are needed in a story, like in your case), and my first time produced just two lines that it took hours two write.

Now I might manage half a page, with the air conditioning on. No, seriously, I liked your story a lot, and I am so happy that you have updated. Now we are going to have guilt, denial...and eventuallly the blue room. I am curious to see what you make of it. I am not compldetely happy with the original, namely why Edward finally relents. Black lace and a please do not  seem enough, somehow. His PoV should give us more insights.



Author's Response:

The guiilt and denial are definately on their way. I'll be interested to see what you think of my take on why he caved... :)

Reviewer: mei-lin (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Isle Esme

This is wonderful and very much in keeping with Edward. I'd also like to thank you for not making Emmett an imbecile as many do. Funny and teasing but not stupid!

Author's Response:

I have such a soft spot for Emmett and could never make him stupid (b/c he's not!!). He's like the big brother I always wanted! I'm really looking forward to writing more of his thoughts when we get back to the Forks scenes.

Reviewer: bandcampblonde (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Isle Esme

that was really good! update soon!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Isle Esme

JUST AWESOME!!!!!!!I WOULD LOVE IT IF IT WAS DIFFERENT FROM THE BOOK...IN THAT SHE WOULDN'T WAKE UP ALL BRUISED, WITH HIM FEELING SO GUILTY!!!THEY WAITED SO LONG, WAITED FOR MARRIAGE....DOES HE REALLY DESERVE THE GUILT?



Author's Response:

He doesn't... but that's just Edward. Since I'm following the book and staying in canon he will, unfortunately, be torturing himself in the very near future. Poor Edward. But thanks for the review! Part two of this chapter should be up next Monday!

Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Isle Esme

Soooo worth the wait! This was good!

Reviewer: catharticone (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Isle Esme

That was marvelous!  Truly, you did a superb job capturing Edward's thoughts.  You found the perfect balance between his emotions and his rationality.  This is one of the best "first" scenes that I have ever read.  I am eager for you to continue the story from Edward's perspective!

Reviewer: badazzles (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:32 PM · On: In Retrospect

You did a damn good job. I am waiting for ch. 5. Please continue....



Author's Response:

I've actually already submitted chapter 5, so it's in queue for validation. Hopefully it's gets posted soon! Thanks for staying with it!

Reviewer: dspring (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:54 PM · On: In Retrospect

Loved it!  I hope you keep going.  I love the EPOV and you've done it so well. :)

Reviewer: henbane (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:24 AM · On: In Retrospect

Wow - I really love how you've fleshed out the story. I'm anxiously waiting future installments!

Reviewer: badazzles (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Engaged

I really enjoyed your writing. I hope you continue with your fanfictin from edwards point of view. You really nailed it. I will be watching for more of your stories....

Reviewer: One crazy monkey (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 09:46 AM · On: In Retrospect

OMG I LOVED IT!!!!!! Thank you! More Please!

Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:39 PM · On: In Retrospect

Love,love,LOVE your version! It's perfectly in canon and I really loved all the missing conversations and "thoughts".  I am adding this immediately to my favorites...please don't torture us too terribly long waiting for the next chapter.  Knowing how perfectly you write Edward, I absolutely can't wait for your version of Isle Esme!

Hurry, please!

Reviewer: badazzles (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:07 PM · On: In Retrospect

wow.....you did a really good job...

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