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Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Melt

Wow....Hot! *Fan self*

I am glad Eddie didn't ruin the fun!

Looking forward to next chap.

B.Q.

Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Melt

No Renesmee! Please that is the greastest sin to Twilight. Not a good one    either. Love the way everything is going so far.Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: lilly_rose_hale (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Melt

OMG!!!!!! This is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Melt

That was HOT great job

Reviewer: D Pattinson (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 - This Time

So fun!  My most favorite chapter yet!

Reviewer: Curious78 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity

Please tell me your are updating soon.  I am so starved of fanfic and I love your story.

Reviewer: chrissy_tigger (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity

omg...*tear

Reviewer: lilly_rose_hale (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

WOW THIS IS GOOD!!!!!! KEEP ME POSTED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!

Reviewer: Irishone (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

I love the way you have paired Emmett with Bella in this story, and I can't wait to read more of it.  Not alot of the other characters get much love on this board.  Don't get me wrong, I love Edward, but it's a nice change to switch things around ( Plus Kellan Lutz is hottttt!!)

Reviewer: katieam1 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

More chapters please!!!  I am loving this story and I am a HUGE Bella/Edward person but there is something I really like about Emmett/Bella!!!   Thumbs up from me!!

Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

Oh yes, time for some Emmett/Bella LOVVVVIIINNNN....

Go get her Emmett!

Reviewer: nettie (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity

Holy smokes you really tugged at my heart there. This was so full of emotion its wonderful. Great job!

Reviewer: freesiagirl171 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

WWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAA MORE OMG HURRY!!!!!!! I HEART DIMPLES!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

Please Please Please finish this!  I NEED LEMONS!

Reviewer: sydneytwilightmum (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

Hi, Just wanted to say I started reading this very curious as to how a Bella/Emmett pairing would go.  I've not read one yet.  Having read Bella/Jasper pairings I found it intriguing to know how it would all come about! I've enjoyed your story so far!!!! I love the way you write Emmett and I really do like that most of the story is in his POV - hope you keep it that way!!!  I just wish I'd found this once it was a little more into it so I didn't have to WAIT for chapter updates!!!! 

Hanging for the next installment!!!!

Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

I love the way you have put some of my favorite characters together.  Edward was never good enough for the heroine Bella should have been.  Go Jacob/Leah and Emmett/Bella!

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Blood Edward!!! Wish he'd stay in Denali! LOL And I wish we got to see Emmett's karaoke!

omg they kissed!!! *squeals* I'm so happy :D :D

And then Edward has to come in and ruin it all, silly boy ;) He's the one who messed up, I totally agree with Ilene he needs to get over it! Its his fault ;)

Oh and I love Ilene, shes rather kick ass, huh? :D

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 8 - This Time

:D :D I Love it!!!!

I love how easy it is for them to be all around Bella, especially Jasper I'm so glad you have him controlled when hes around Bella. I don't think they got to know each other enough in the books so this is great to read it in this one :D

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Cry

As much as I liked Edward and Ilene (and I do love Ilene) I'm glad that Emmett and Bella will be back in the next chapter!

“You need to get out of the bitter barn and play in the hay, Edward Cullen. Loosen up, stop being so serious,”

Ilene has a very good point there, he really does need to stop being so serious!

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 6 - You and Me

aw these two are dead cute! Emmett especially worried about setting Seth to phase!

Bless Emmett for getting anxious about meeting Charlie!

Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

Ha! so much fun to read :)

Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

Do I smell lemons?

 

Loved this chapter. Maria was a nice twist!

Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

Oh My God!! MMMMMM DAMN!!!

Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

Loved the chapter, Vicky. Can't wait to see what happens next.

*hugs*

Amber

Reviewer: michellerella (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me

More please! :D

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