i NEED more!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Deje mi marido solo, o rasgaré su cuerpo a los pedazos y quemar cada partición pasada la consiguió?" you didn't get the phraseing word perfect but rouhly translated means "leave my husband alone, or rip your body to pieces and burn every last part I get" love it but you might have put it in english for the rest of ur readers we arnt all fluent in spanish!

i would have said something more along the lines of dejar a mi marido el infierno solo o te arranco a peices con mis manos llevan la quema peices como voy, perra!

This chapter was so not what I expected, but I still loved it. I am trusting you when you say it will not be another BD. There are a lot of fun ways to take this,and I look forwad to seeing how you do it. An Emmett/Bella baby should be interesting. Guess Daddy Grizzly is really true now. And Emmett will make an fun and fabulous dad! Can't wait to see how everyone, especially Edward and Jacob react.

Loved all the light heartedness in the beginning of the chapter. The Jasper/Bella banter was excellent. We never get to see the lighter side of him. And the images of Emmett in a grocery store already had me cracking up, so when Jake said - “Just pictured the vamps sniffing the fruit and shit. 'Is this ripe?'” it was perfect.

Now, where's our naked Emmett??????

This is my second time through.  If I could roll on the floor laughing and read I would.  I always thought Edward was something of a drama queen.  Yay Emmett!

thats really funny lol

i loved the leangth on this post!! the rest were kinda short!! i love your ideas though!!

Ahhh!  I don't know why some people would get upset on how your story turns out.  It's your story!  That's why it's so interesting to read!  I really was hopeing for some naked Emmett... Next chapter? Please :)????

bella nad emmet's baby?????? oooo

awsome but it's like half three in the morning i have to be up in three n a half hours but will be back online just as soon as i get it! i really love ur work it's awsome i never want the story to end!

Author's Response:

Thank you love! Get some sleep!

Dirty empath and his nympho pixie. perfect i love it it's like 3 in the morning i have to be up in like 4 hours but i can't stop reading this is REALLY good!

Ugh, I need to change out of this dress," I said as I swished my skirt, "I have blood all over me,"<p><br />"Yes you do," he said, his voice low and husky. </p><p><br />"Now who's thinking like a seventeen year old boy," I laughed. </p><p><br />"He won't come," Edward spoke, defiantly. </p><p><br />"Oh he will," I assured him, "He always does,"</p><p><br />"Every single word you say has a sexual innuendo," he hissed. </p><p><br />"Tell me you don't like it," I replied as I flipped my hair back out of my face. </p><p><br />Edward's eyes glazed over for second before he snapped out of it. </p><p><br />"That is neither here nor there," he answered. </p><p><br />"That is neither here nor there," I mimicked, "That is not an answer either."</p><p><br />"Must you be so childish?" he mocked. </p><p><br />I rolled my eyes, and stepped forward, poking him in the chest. "You need to get out of the bitter barn and play in the hay, Edward Cullen. Loosen up, stop being so serious,"</p><p><br />"You don't even know me," he shot back. </p><p><br />"No, but I will," I smiled as I walked away. </p><p><br />"And what is that supposed to mean?" LOVE IT!!!!</p>

awsome keep going

there are no words you are an amazeing writer you should write ur own stuff id buy any book written by you any and all just wow..