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Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
GOD EDWARD IS AN ASS - HE ONLY LOVED HER FOR HER BLOOD - I HOPE HE ENDS UP ALONE - I REALLY DON'T LIKE YOUR EDWARD AT ALL - HE IS A JERK - I CAN SEE BELLA 7 EMMETT TOGEATHER IN THIS ONE - THIS IS GOING TO BE A FUN RIDE INDEED!
Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
I love this chapter! I like that Ilene is nice to Bella and can put Edward in his place and I LOVE that he lets her lol. I vote they get it on. I'm not a fan of Edward in this story. Hes a bit of a dousche. BUT Ilene deserves to get some :)
As for baby names. You may use mine if you'd like :) If its a boy James Adam and if its a girl Arianna Roslyn. I know they have NO significance to the book but it kind of annoyed me that she named Renesmee after all their parents. Cute name and all but I dont' know I guess I wanted something else out of BD.
If you don't like them don't feel bad. My husband isn't fond of the girls name we picked out so we're still sort of looking. I love the name Roslyn. I think its timeless.
Anyways, update soon! I love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
Hm, a name... How about Emmanuelle? That's the closest thing to a combination of Emmet and Isabella I can think of.
Nice chapter, but I'm wondering why Edward didn't find out about Bella's pregnancy so far.
Jasper being the first one to hear the baby's heart beat - beautiful scene!
Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
If it is a girl, I think it would be somewhat of a tribute to name her Rose.
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
Oh I so luv this story. Okay here are a few safe names...... Matthew or Jackson (boy of course).... Annabell Carlee (girl of course) in either order or seperate.
Cant' wait for more
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
I love it.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
I loved it! It's so good to not see them all acting like this is the end of the world and only heartbreak and chaos can possibly come from it. I'm so glad Emmett is Emmett and not all whiny and buttheaded like Edward was. Yes, I love Edward, but he was a royal pain in the ass through that part of BD (along with a large part of the other books). It's just really good to get to read about how Emmett would handle this. Fantastic chapter!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
WOW - SO EDWARD AND BELLA ARE NOT TRUE MATES - I GUESS HE ENDS WITH TANYA
I CANT BELIEVE I AN ROUTING FOR EMMETT - AT LEAST BELLA WILL HAVE A SEX LIFE WITH EMMETT!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
JUST FOUND YOUR STORY TODAY - ROSE IS DEAD - POOR EMMETT - EMMETT FEELS THAT EDWARD DID NOT LOVE BELLA ENOUGH - THIS IS THE FIRST BELLA/EMMETT FIC I HAVE READ - SO I AM GOING TO GIVE IT A GO - I CRIED SO HARD - I AM VERY TEAM EDWARD - SO THIS IS GOING TO BE DIFFERANT
Reviewer: daisyhellride (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
I LOVE this story!!!!!!! Please update more often Baby names??? No clue.out of respect....emma rose?
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
So far, so good! People are being...sensible! :)
Looking forward to Emoward's reaction... (Ilene is a lot of fun.)
Baby names. Hm. Rose Marie (or conversely stated), Charles Emmett. :)
Reviewer: booboo_kitty (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
This fic is like my crack. No joke.
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
If it's a boy, how about Emmett's dad's name. It's never mentioned and you can have your pick. If it's a girl, somehow I think Rosalie's name should be involved- even if it's just Rose as a middle name or something.
Glad you are going to "make things up" to Emmett. He doesn't seem the type to be able to go without sexy time.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
It's great to see Bella and Ilene finally get some decent chat-time
I'm not sure if it's necessary, but perhaps a name somehow tied to Rosalie's memory would be good for the family?
Or perhaps just something symbolising the new directions/beginnings and hope for the family and the wolves?
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
Surprisingly I don't want to know what Emmett said to you. LOL
I do like your version of the pregnancy so far. I really like that Jazz is going to be able to keep the baby calm so Bella doesn't get so injured, that was the one problem I had with BD.
Ok, baby names...
Girls: Emily, Carlie, Lily, Amanda, Gabrielle, Eva. My favorite would be Emily Marie, so you are playing off of both Emmett and Bella.
Boys: Aiden, Christopher, Michael, Lucas, Braden, Nathan, Elliott, Colin, Anthony(but only if Edward would stop being so Emoward) Fav would be Elliott Michael, that way you are sticking with a unique first name, but go classic for the middle.
Can't wait for the outtake, and the next chapter.
Manda
Reviewer: godiva85 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
You can keep the name Renesmee if it's a girl... After all it would be after esme and renee... If it's a boy you could name him charlisle after charlie and carlisle
Reviewer: godiva85 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
You can keep the name Renesmee if it's a girl... After all it would be after esme and renee... If it's a boy you could name him charlisle after charlie and carlisle
Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
Awesome chapter. Great to see Bella and Ilene connect in that way. Get Edward and Ilene to the sexin' so we can feel better about him already! LOL
Names for the baby? How about something with the word Rose in it? They both loved her...... and I am not sure Bella would mind that?
Rosie, Rosamond, Rosencrantz? Haha.
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
Emoward needs to pine and beg more for Bella. I don't think he'd take this all so easily but it is your story!!! I like it. Thanks!
Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
You A/N's are just as entertaining as the story most times! LOL!
Can't wait for the next chapter and here are a few names I Heart for babies:
For boys: Aidan (I know, way too popular right now, but it's my son's name and I loved it before it was popular)
Gavin
Connal
For girls: Lexa
Cameron (Cami)
Aisling (pronounced Ashleen)
Reviewer: xxsamanthahalexx (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
i think Max would be a cute name for a girl. its differen and fun all at the same time. you could name her maxine and emmett would call her max of course. :)
Reviewer: xxsamanthahalexx (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
i think Max would be a cute name for a girl. its differen and fun all at the same time. you could name her maxine and emmett would call her max of course. :)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me
can't wait for more
Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Run
So I just read this whole story straight through. I love it. I have literally laughed and cried through this story. I think Edward and Ilene are a match made in hell but I mean that in the best way possible. I love that pairing its just so different. I, personally, like the whole pregnancy thing. Maybe its because I'm pregnant lol but whatever the case I think its good. I don't however think baby should be named Renesmee. I think something different is in order. I can't wait to read more chapters! Update soon please!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Run
And of course i only start reading the story when you leave it hanging on that little note. Hahaha. Sorry I haven't reviewed every chapter, I'm impatient when I read. I love it, it's witty, it's fun, Ilene is entertaining definitely, Edward is...well...Edward, btu I like how you've taken the original story and put your own twist in it with my favorite Cullen. I adore Emmett so I adore this!!! :)
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