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Reviewer: Fsecretlove (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Awww, poor Emmett.
I can't wait to read what happens.
Why did Rosalie have to die? >.< Sorry.
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Oh, poor Emmett. Interesting beginning - I look forward to watching to see where this goes.
Reviewer: ellabar (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
That was amazingly sad. Good Job!
Reviewer: ChulaB (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Lovin this so far, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Very nice...waiting for more!
Reviewer: pipergirl (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
I can't wait to see how you bring Emmett and Bella together :)
Reviewer: illem (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
oooh like this......keep going please?????
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
nice start...interested to see where this goes
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
This story is amazing so far, so much potential!I almost cried reading it, very powerful. I love bella and emmett stories so ill definately follow yours!There arent enough if you ask me, i love the tension between them that seems to be already present somehow.Good luck!Keep up the good work!
-Erin :)
Reviewer: bethaboo (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
this is fascinating and I'm intriuged to see how you pull off this unusual pairing in an AU setting.
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
omg, that was heart wrenching! i feel so bad for emmett...
will be anxiously waiting to read more!
Reviewer: aphroditecullen882 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
wow! this is really good so far. keep it up! kypotp!
(keep your pen on the page)
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Wow poor Emmett. He's such a big sweet teddy bear. You know it's got to be hard on him. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
God, that's so sad.
Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Wow... I love this chapter... I mean I cried my eyes out but thats why I liked it. I didn't realize how much I loved Emmet's character until he was in so much pain. Emmet is not suppose to be sad... ever. Ya know. I am still crying. So, great job. Poor Emmet. I feel so silly, buy I am really heartbroken. But also happy for Rose. To read she was at peace... finally. Going to a better place. No more hate or bitterness. She is free.
I love this!!!! I am so looking forward to the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: I totally agree with you on the Emmett sadness issue! He should never be sad, but I think that he would grieve for her fiercly. the next chapter is nearly good to go, once it's been to the beta, it's going up!
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Interesting. The battle with the newborns was the one from Eclipse? Bella not with them? Or did Edward leave Bella again? Either way, I really liked the "vision" of Rosalie with Emmett's heart. That was beautiful.
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
I LOVED IT BB!!
Made me tear up...seriously. Why must you break Emmett's heart? Why, seriously WHY!!??
WAH!
hehe, I seriously loved it...it was beautiful and I can't wait to read more.
Love ya!! XOXOXOXOX Jess
Reviewer: star_66 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Why must you make me cry? I guess I deserve it, I've been asking to. (I'm not depressed, I just wanted to cry). Thank you!
You wrote this very well. I envie you.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
This chapter was heartbreakingly sad...but I loved it.
More please?
Reviewer: SilverSun7 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Wow! I had to get my kleenex out for that one! Fantastic but soooo sad!!!! Poor Emmett!!!!
Reviewer: megs1313 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
This is definitely an interesting concept. Can't wait to see where it goes!
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