Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
Hmmm very nice. I wonder if Edward finally gives into that temptress.
Reviewer: Cat28 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
I really like the story. I hope you post the next chapter soon.
Reviewer: dazzled19 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
Your story is great so far. I love the idea of Bella and Emmet...but i just cant stand the idea of Edward with Tanya, it ruins it for me. I want him to be lonely for hurting Bella!
Author's Response: I'm still undecided who Edward will end up with. I'm thinking of going with an OC, but I don't think it will be Tanya.
Reviewer: JeannieRoss (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
Interesting, Im very intrigued. Can't wait for another update!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
I just came across your story and I am so looking forward to reading more from you very soon! I have read Jasper and Bella even Carlisle and Bella but not a vampire Emmett and Bella squeal
SO EXCITED !
Reviewer: jace (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
This is good. I'm absolutely Team Edward, but it's interesting to hear things from another perspective. Looking forward to the next part!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
Thank you for the update! This sounds great. Emmett and Bella :) He's so sweet and caring and forthright. Really looking forward to next chapter.
Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
okay, I'm interested. A teeny bit wierded out, but I've always thought Bella and Emmett would be fun together, if they weren't so much like siblings.
So, I guess I'll have to see where this goes:)
Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
Great chapter!!! I love this story.... your cliffhanger is painful. I do love the idea of Emmet and Bella. Bella has a gift for making vampires feel human. I think Emmet would be able to feel carefree again or even more so than before. I know he adored Rose... but, it is hard being with someone who you constantly have to aplogize for.
Please post soon!!!!! I beg you... for my health!!!! :)
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
As much as I love Bella/Edward together, I actually really like this story. My heart breaks for Bella and Emmett. They can relate in their pain. It will be nice to see what else you do with this. I'll definately be waiting to read the coming chapters.
Reviewer: musicallydazzled (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
UPDATE SOOOON PLEASSEEEEEEE
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
"Em, will you promise me something?" she asked.
"Anything, Alice."
"When you see her, tell her I miss her? And that I love her?"
"I swear, little one, as soon as I see her."
"Bring her back to us, Emmett?" she requested.
"I'll try,"
"That's all I ask of you," she smiled.
Okay, I had a tear running down my cheek at that. I'm seriously going to have to remember to grab tissues before I read the next chapter.
I loved it bb! This is really great!
*kisses for my favorite love slave!*
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOX Jess
Reviewer: ellabar (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
This is a good chapter. The moment I started reading it I got so sad again. You are doing a fantastice job.
Reviewer: ChulaB (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
Omg your killing me...(in a good way) But really leaving me hanging like that is pure hell... lol Ok so I have had the hots for Emmett since crap since forever and this is gonna be good, him and Bella together I can't wait....
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
Ooh, I like it! I'm interested to see just how everything falls into place. Please keep up the good work!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
YAY
Is Edward going to give into Tanya? Oh my goodness!
Emmett and Bella are going to be so sweet and happy together. I can't wait :)
Reviewer: Angel_Joy (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
I'm really loving where this is going. Update soon!!!!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Oh Emmett. He and Rosalie are my favorites after Bella/Edward, and I feel his pain so strongly in this story. He loves wholeheartedly and that is beautiful.
Great start!
Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
Oh this is wonderful! Sorry I didn't review the first chapter, but I just had to dash straight on and read this one too. Great writing, wonderful (and sad) premise for a story, and I'm looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
Ahhhh!!!!!
This is going to be so interesting. I havent read story where Emmett and Bella hook up. Hmmm...
So I guess Edward finally takes Tanya up on her offer?
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
I like this story! I hate to say it but I like the whole emmett/bella dymanic! Keep it coming.
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
still trying to wrap my head around the whole Rose being gone deal...and I know this is an Em/B story and can't wait to see it played out. so many questions!! and what about edward. I don't know!! hope you update again soon. great chapter!
Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
WOW!! what an intresting twist. I am so sad that Emmett has had to live with out Rose. I can only imagine the big giant teddy bear being filled with undeniable pain. You get the emotion through with such power that its insane. I never thought that I could like a story that wasn't Edward and Bella. But I think that your story might prove me wrong. Great Job!! Please update soon becuase i cant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
i love it.keep going please
Reviewer: brooklyn (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
AWSOME! I cannot wait to read more about this story. I thought you did an amazing job. I'm already hooked!
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