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Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

No more sadness, no more sorrow, this was my second chance to live again. I wouldn't fight whatever the future had in store for me. I would take what ever destiny had in store for me, and live again.

 

Well fuck me, for no more sadness you certainly had me crying like a big baby.

This is such a great story bb! I love it!

 

*hugs for my Hot Ass Love Slave*

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO Jess

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

Although short...it was very sweet. I love the tenderness between Emmett and Bella. I am looking forward to more.

Reviewer: lady_lucks (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

yay!

 

i love it. i love how you weite this-- it's simply put yet oh-so-powerful in the emotions. i can't wait to see what else you have in store.

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

NICE CHAPTER!

Reviewer: CherBella (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

I have been staying away from some of the "non-canon" pairing stories, because I just thought they would feel too weird... I have been reading this one though and am enjoying it so far. You're doing a great job!

Reviewer: alice18431863 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

update soon please i cannot wait for the next chapter

 

xoxo,

Alice

Reviewer: VampSK (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

GREAT update!!  I still think this is an awesome story twist, very unique!!

I don't agree with others about pairing Edward up with...well, anyone!  The story is awesome focusing on Emmett's and Bella's POV.  They have so many things to work through.  I love how Emmett is protective of her, but he's also honest and straight forward.  I'd love to see Bella help bring out Emmett's natural happy/sarcastic attitude again (the Emmett we all know and love).  I can just see him bullshitting and laughing with Bella and then becoming serious all of a sudden before they share their first kiss!  Good stuff!! 

Can't wait for another update! :)

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

I am still on the fence about a EM/B relationship. I can't wait to see how you do this. So far I really love it.

Edward should be paired up with his freaking left hand. Bastard.

Update soon! :)

Reviewer: Misbehaving Mom2 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

Excellent!  I think you are doing a great job of capturing their feelings....the base connection the characters share, the anguish they've gone through, the glimmer of something more to come......oh I just cannot wait!!  Off to find out what else you've written...keep up the good work!!!!  Kristie

Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

Loved it!

What a sad, hard story for E to have to tell her...and I am glad that he ratted out E. But poor B, she is going to blame herself for R now as well...E has a tough road to hoe with her...

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

good story really had me in it cant wait for the rest

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

And this is why I love Emmett, honest and straight forward :) Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: ellabar (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

I am going to miss Bear Hug Emmett but it is for the best.

Reviewer: girliegirl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

I can't wait to see how this relationship grows. I want it to develop into more but  I also can't wait to see Edwards reaction. I think it would nice to see her fall for emmett. edward comes back and admits what he has done and she chooses emmett over edward. Edward should have to deal with the consequences of his actions.

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

First off, I love that hose you chose as their new house in Bellevue, gorgeous!

Poor Bella, she takes everything so hard, thinking it is all her fault. 

and Emmett, I feel so bad for him having to tell Bella about the hardest thing he's faced.  The think that took away who he is, but I'm glad he realizes Bella can help him live again!

Can't wait for more!

Manda

Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

I like that you opened the story with Fix You. I never really pay attention to songs in the start much with most fics but with yours I do. I really love this story, it's my happiness of the day when you update.

Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

i am loving the stroy.i wonder where emmets destiny lies.hmmm...well update soon and keep the awesome job

Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

I absolutely adore this story. I love getting the story from Emmett's POV and I hope that you keep it like that the majority of the time. I would like to know Bella's POV, but I kind of feel like this is Emmett's story.

 

I absolutely love it. I noticed you said something about maybe having Edwards new mate be Jane....I think that is a little wierd. Wasn't she young when she was changed? Like younger than Edward... I always imagined her and Alec to be like 14 or 15.....Maybe I am just losing it though....

 

I can't wait for another update. This story is quickly becoming one of my favorites!

Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

So Emmett knows that Alice was telling the truth. Now Bella needs to get on board. I hope that Edward ends up with Tanya. That little harpy is just what he deserves.

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

I have totally fallen in love with your Emmet. 

I can't get enough of this story.

I am glad Emmet is being honest with, that he respects her enough to be honest with her.  

I hope Bella is going to be able to move on from Edward without any bitterness.  He really isn't worth the emotion.  I want her to be free to truely love Emmet.  I don't want Emmet or Bella to ever feel second best or that they are being settled for. 

It looks like their relationship is going to be pure and good... honest and raw I mean.  They could have such a special and unique kind of intimacey together....  Being real and ungaurded with each other...  I don't think Emmet could have that with Rose(because of the bitterness in her heart).  And Bella did not have that with Edward.  Bella and Emmet are both givers...  they gave all of themselves to their mates.  I just love them together.

On a mate of Edward or girlfriend... or whatever... I think it would be funny if he came across a wounded girl that reminded him of Bella... so he changes her... and she turns out to be a 'handfull'.  Manipulative, a liar, belittling,....  everything that Bella is not.  She would be someone that would treat him like he treated Bella... but a little worse.  ;)  He would be pretty busy with a bitchy new born... hee hee hee.  It would be a slap in the face to Bella... but it would also show what an idiot and hypocrite he is...  all he had to do was change Bella to begin with, but now he would be stuck with a poor man's Bella. 

I don't thing he would ever go for Jane... she is too young... physically.  And, Edward likes being a self-righteous ass... who fancies himself as a gentleman.

Anyways, Your story ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Please post soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: bb1028 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

Love it, love it, love it! It's heartbreaking thinking about poor Emmett losing Rose, but I can't wait for things to get going between him and Bella :)

Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

thats right emmet does deserve a second chance and edward and jane eww no i think it should be new vampire

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

I'm anxious to see how this plays out. Great chapter.

Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 3 - With Arms Wide Open

I like reading Emmett's POV.  It's something you so very rarely get to read!

Reviewer: Miss_Me_ (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity

Aw... It's SOO sad.. I'm like sitting here crying!! I don't do that! To make me CRY you have to write GOOD!!!

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