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Reviewer: imaddictedtotwilight (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Totally lovin where your story is goin!
Reviewer: Demize (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
This is a touching story to have for emmett who is normally the goofball and now is actually the real placid soft emmett is there going to be more chapters and when ?
Reviewer: martha8450 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
This chapter has my eyes watering. I feel sorrow for both of them. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Edwardlovinmom (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
I really enjoy your story. I like the suggestion of Edward and Jane. Sadly, it would be entertaining to read.
Reviewer: herestolife222 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Excellent chapter. You write their reunion well. It didn't sound forced or rushed. I also really enjoyed the phone conversation between Bella and Alice. It broke my heart it was so emotional. I can't wait until the rest of the family gets to see Bella again.
Reviewer: Jaznbells (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
great post i just wished you didin't use so many spaces it would be a longer post but still great post PMS loves :)
Reviewer: Angel_Joy (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Such a sad but lovely chapter. Can't wait for more!!!!
Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
tear jerker city here i come lol great job cant wait to read more!!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Oh boy. The pain that Emmett is going through is unbearably difficult. I'm glad you see a love story for Bella and Emmett. I don't think I ever want to see Edward again, but if we must, then I hope you write in a character named Danielle - who looks shockingly similar to Bella. *tee hee.*
Wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: Emmetts_stalker (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
OMG Amazing!!!
Im loving the story,
wicked storyline!
Well written!
NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW!!!!
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Do you really have to ask if any of us wants to console Edward? We need to set up a rotating schedule to accomodate all the consoling he'd get! Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
i love this story, cant wait for more. please update asap
Reviewer: MonksMama (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
I really like your Emmett! So often he is written off as simple or stupid and I love reading a more developed version of him!
Happily clicking next!
Reviewer: ApplesForEve (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
this story is all kinds of wonderful. as sad as the last chapters have been, particularly with emmett, this whole storyline simply warms my heart.
i'm so excitedto see how it all plays out! i have not down that it is going to be all kinds of fabulous!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Squeal I wish I had the money to buy that house! AWESOME!!!!
This was an awesome chapter don't hold off for to long POST SOON!
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Awww yay! Write faster! ^_~
Reviewer: Vanity Fair (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Awww!!!! I love it!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! :D
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Thank God he's not going to lie to her. Great chapter.
Reviewer: musicallydazzled (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Update soon PLEASEEEE
Reviewer: TwilightFan104 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
I love reading from Emmett's POV. That was so sad, but nicely done. Bella seems to have a way to revive the Cullen men. I hope the guilt she will feel over Rosalie being gone doesn't prevent her from being there for Emmett.
It is cool that she now knows the whole family still misses her and is looking out for her. It is noce to see that Emmett is ready to move forward. He has definately grown and changed, but I am glad that he ready to bring back the Emmett that wwe know and love.
Edward with Jane? That is just creepy! He may have screwed up a lot of things, but let's not damn him any further with Jane or Tanya!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
No more sadness, no more sorrow, this was my second chance to live again. I wouldn't fight whatever the future had in store for me. I would take what ever destiny had in store for me, and live again.
Well fuck me, for no more sadness you certainly had me crying like a big baby.
This is such a great story bb! I love it!
*hugs for my Hot Ass Love Slave*
XOXOXOXOXOXOXO Jess
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Although short...it was very sweet. I love the tenderness between Emmett and Bella. I am looking forward to more.
Reviewer: lady_lucks (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
yay!
i love it. i love how you weite this-- it's simply put yet oh-so-powerful in the emotions. i can't wait to see what else you have in store.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
NICE CHAPTER!
Reviewer: CherBella (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
I have been staying away from some of the "non-canon" pairing stories, because I just thought they would feel too weird... I have been reading this one though and am enjoying it so far. You're doing a great job!
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