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Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

I wasn't liking Ilene when I first met her.  But I do like how she stnads up to Edward, making him realize he did this to himself.

And the kiss...well, let's just say I was waiting for that :)

Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

I loved the update :) Thanks a ton. I'm all smiles from it.

Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

OMG.  Wow.  Was so not expecting such a sudden reappearance of Edward.  And his reaction to Bella and Emmett was just outstanding.  But even better than that was the kisses!  This story is really heating up!!  So looking foward to the next update!

Reviewer: Bella_De_Luna11 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

wow girly tht ws crazy but you did it perfect and what does she mean her idiot lol am i missing somthing here are they together wait no cause he...... i dont knowyou are driving me crazy trying to figure it out

Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Great job! I cant wait for Bella to express her love for Emmett. Wonder if Edwaerd and Ilene. Or will Edward compete with Emmett to get Bella back? Cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

New twist. I wonder what Ilene will throw into the mix. But is she a Vamp? I know she should be but not everything always go the way it should

Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

wow...... I knew this was not going to be pretty. I can only imagine how edward is going to handle this new love that emmett and bella have. I am usually one who only loves to hear about bella and edward being together, but I love Emmett and I think this story is great.  It is a new twist and I can't wait for another update.

 

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Dirty-playing Edward is always interesting, and I like that Emmett's willing to fight.

Reviewer: mariann17 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Rarely do I meet a pairing between Bella and someone else that I can stand.  What you've done here is great!  I love it and can't wait to read more.  I think you make Emmet more human and his reactions are fantastic.  The only thing I'm sorry to read is the demise of Rosalie.  Again though, I think you've done well.  Thanks so much and write more soon, please!;-)))

Reviewer: StarryStarryNight (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

I don't think it would be right if Edward didnt try to fight unfair lol. However somehow...and i must admit, i'm not sure how you did it, but I find myself really cheering for Emmett in this onw. I'll tell you, I never am not on team edward so this is a fun story for me to read. I cannot wait for another kiss between her and emmett....really anything else between her and emmett where they start to fall for each other. There was obviously an instant attraction there and it'd be great to hear more! I must say job well done on he kissing scene! I was really surprised at both of their reactions and how excited they both were! CAn't wait to read more!

Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

OMFG this was great- I loved the whole thing. Well, Eddie needs to explain to BELLA what the hell he is so angry and angsty  (yet again) about...he owes her a lot of explaining. Yes, he is pissed at Emmett, but he has controlled her and then FLIPPING LEFT HER. ALONE. AND what pissed me off in the books was she ran and got his sorry ass and took him back without every being upset, or hurt...yeah some nightmares, but SHE APOLOGIZED TO EDDIE about it upsetting him. Oh. My. God.

You gave that chick some backbone (thank you - you are my new hero) and then he RUNS AGAIN (loved B nailing him for that...HA HA HA). Now he is going to be all Angstward...

I was surprised about Ilene's reaction (nicely played gf, you fooled us all. We thought she was working him...of course, she still might be,you never know. She could be making sure she breaks them up for good so she has a shot. BUt this is a B/EM story not a B/E story so it is all good for me.

Can't wait to see how things get ugly - release Gnarlyward onto the world! Gee, I would love to see what he is like when he can't control her or his family!

Thanks for updating!!!!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

I know Edward blew it but he must be feeling pretty low right now.  The girl he loves is with his brother and his sister not only know about it but also condones it.  He was told off (rightfully) by his brother, his sister, his new friend and the love of his life.  Obviously he is in an awful lot of pain to make Jasper fall.  That being said, it's about time his family and Bella stood up to him.  I never understood why they all listened to him and left like a bunch of sheep when they knew what he was doing was wrong.  SM never explained that to my satisfaction. 

Reviewer: BrandyP (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

I love this story and I can't wait for more.  I am so glad that Bella and Emmett finally had their moment!

Reviewer: naner26 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

oooohhhhh!!!! cant wait for more, im so excited. its getting serious now

Reviewer: melissacullen (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

I favorited this story, fully intending not to read it till there were more chapters posted, but I got the email telling me that it was updated, and after reading the author's note, I read the other chapters and then hit this one.. I just love a good Emmett and Bella story and since there arn't many out there, I end up reading the same ones over and over.. Not too happy with Edward's reaction.. and can't wait to see what he does in the following chapters.. And I must say, Karaoke with Jasper is always good

Reviewer: SarcasticGirl (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Another excellent chapter - and YAY for the E/B relationship having a breakthrough to move forward!!!!  I can only imagine the crap that angsty, emo, guilty Edward is about to unleash...

Reviewer: hbedell (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Oh, wow. It just gets better and better.

Edward doesn't play nice. That's why he mopes to get his way. Not that I don't like him, but part of his charm is his moodiness, emo-like qualities.

Leave it to Emmett to snatch Bella up..

Reviewer: TwilightFan104 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Great chapter! Perfect song choices! What would Bella have been singing?


I think I love Ilene. I am so glad she told Edward exactly how it is! She is so what he needs. Can’t wait to find out more about her story.


I love how you had Bella handle this too! She deserves to get the opportunity to let loose on Edward and really tell him how what he did affected her. Can’t wait to see what he does now.


Interesting way to let Emmett and Bella have their first kiss. Totally not what I expected but very well done.


Looking forward to seeing what you have planned next.

Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Grrrrr... I'm annoyed by Edwards response! I get that he loved Bella, but when he left he done it for her benefit... and now that she's happy, as he intended, he has no right to be angry!

Its infuriating, but i love it!! I can't wait for more xxx

Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

OH!  I LOVED this chapter.  It's nice to see that Bella stood up to him like she did.  He SO deserved that and she's right, HE will NEVER be good enough for HER!  That was awesome!

Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

I think we need an Bella POV because I want to hear her head when that kiss happens.

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

I am so glad that Emmet and Bella were able to take the next step in their relationship... yahoo!!! :)

Edward really is a little bit*h boy isn't he... bleh!!!  Emmet is a man a real man. That has to be so refreshing for Bella. Edward is still a little boy.

Ilene is great. She will be great for Edward, she won't enable him like Bella did.

I love this story!!!!

I would love to have more Emmet and Bella time... I love reading how they interact and grow with each other.

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Wow...Edward must have had some intense feelings to actually cause Jasper pain!  After that, I really wouldn't expect Edward to take this situation lying down.  But I love how Bella turned it around and made it that Edward wasn't good enough for her.  He was a dick for leaving and really does deserve what he gets!  Go Ilene!

Kathy M.

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

I will trade cyber cookies for Emmett's singing!!!!! I'm a little sad it's not 'I touch myself' though! LOL

Addicting, please update. And you are right, I do love Ilene. =]

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

wow i say again another awsome chapter lol edward is in for it go emmett :) cant wait for next chapter

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