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Reviewer: PintoBean (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
WoW!
So Edward is going to be a dick once again and be a meanie?
Oh well, I'm just glad he finally found out about Bella and Emmett and that Emmett loves her.
Plus it's freaking awesome that they kissed.
I wonder what the hell Edward has planned if he's not going to take this lying down.
Ilene was awesome in this chapter. She didn't baby around the truth for Edward's sake, she called him out on his sh*t.
Great chapter! :)
Reviewer: carson_maverick_girl (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
wow, I really can't wait to find out how Edward handles this!
Jess
PS I so want want to read about Emmett singing karaoke...it sounds fabulous
Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I can't wait for the next update. I really like this story and I just can't wait for updates to come around. Thanks, Jennifer
Reviewer: brooklyn (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
EEEK! I am glued to this story. I can't wait to see what all Edward is going to do. I just love Emmett...
Reviewer: luvfiction (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
"my little brainless idiot" heh. ha. :) I adore Ilene, so spunky. Kind of like Alice, but more blantant with words and all...
and I would LOVE to read the Emmett Karoke Experience. You've got me fired up for it from last chapter. I can't wait!
Reviewer: Amaterasu (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I can't wait! Hope Bella will see through his craziness.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I really like this. But I still do not want Edward to be with anyone. I think he has to love Bella forever. You could have sequels to this great story how he tries to get her back. I hope Illene and him are just friends. I could see her and Bella becoming friends.
Reviewer: water_girl87 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Yay! They finally kissed! I like this chapter. I am not sure if I like Ilene or not yet.
Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
yay, love the story its getting better and better, can't wait to find out what happens next.
Reviewer: emmettsgirl08 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
this is freakin awsome
Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Oh fuck Edward. God - he can be such an asshole. Make sure Bella stays strong and don't let old Edward find happiness too soon. He should have to truly suffer while Bella is deliriously happy before he can find his ever after!
Reviewer: VampiresWillNeverHurtYou (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Can't wait for fiesty Edward :D
Update!
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Oh, Vicky. This was wonderful. The return of Edward was even better than I imagined. Of course he wouldn't be smart enough to take this and let it be.
I love that your Bella basically tore him a new asshole. That always bothered me about New Moon was that Bella just took him back, no yelling, screaming, anything. It was just way too easy. Your story...not so easy. lol. Thanks for that. :) Makes things more interesting!
Poor Jasper must be a freakin' wreck right now...all these emotions. And I just want to hug Emmett.
Can't wait to read more!
xoxox Jenn
Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Ahh this story is so fabulous. the way you are putting it Edward does not deserve Bella and the obvious choice for her is Emmett. I love seeing how their relashionship will grow and how Ilene fits into the picture but your writing is fantastic and i cant wait to see whats next
Reviewer: monroe (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
This is my first fan fiction to do with Bella and Emmett. I was not too sure about it but you are doing a great job. I love the thought of the contrast between the two of the, Emmett the big funny loving teddy bear and Bella the overthinking serious girl. Opposites attract they say. Now I am looking so forward to what comes next for all of them. I have a feeling that the story is about to get very interesting for them all.
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
That was to good. loved it.. i cant wait to see how edward doesnt play nice lol
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I love this it's a brilliant story.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
oh god... i cant wait until edward doesnt play nice. i want bella with emmett, but i want to see what edward does.
Reviewer: DoomsdayGirl (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Damn! I'm like a little kid in a candy shop with this story =]
I Love It, I also Love Emmett singing Don't Cha
Wouldn't it be nice if I got to read a chapter of him singing *hint hint*
Keep up the good work, May the force of the naked Cullen boys be with you=)
Reviewer: robsbitch (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I LOVED this chapter. Emmett and Jasper are so great! I can't wait to learn more about Ilene. Edward needs an ass beating.
Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I wasn't liking Ilene when I first met her. But I do like how she stnads up to Edward, making him realize he did this to himself.
And the kiss...well, let's just say I was waiting for that :)
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I loved the update :) Thanks a ton. I'm all smiles from it.
Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
OMG. Wow. Was so not expecting such a sudden reappearance of Edward. And his reaction to Bella and Emmett was just outstanding. But even better than that was the kisses! This story is really heating up!! So looking foward to the next update!
Reviewer: Bella_De_Luna11 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
wow girly tht ws crazy but you did it perfect and what does she mean her idiot lol am i missing somthing here are they together wait no cause he...... i dont knowyou are driving me crazy trying to figure it out
Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Great job! I cant wait for Bella to express her love for Emmett. Wonder if Edwaerd and Ilene. Or will Edward compete with Emmett to get Bella back? Cant wait to read more!
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